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- Qualité de la traduction
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Me gusta y atrapa, pero la traduccion es malisima, quien se encarga de revisar la gramatica?? Tienen que dejar al menos corregir esos errores, sino la historia se pierde entre palabras mal escritas y desorden de puntuaciones.
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It's an okay novel. Though there are several problems with it. The grading system for the skills are a little mess up. He can also transfer experience of one skill to another leaving a plot hole. How might one ask? First of all, it doesn't say if he loses memories if he transfers experience. But that is not the plot hole I'm talking about. I shall give an example. He trains the breathing method to minor concentration and transfer all the experience to king kong fist. The breathing method is now beginning. It should be easy to raise it up back to minor concentration again and keep doing over again.
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I love the book so far! I only have a few questions though. Is this harem or a single love interest? Also, not to be rude, but why is it locked at ch 19? I’ve noticed this with a lot of books lately where they lock way earlier than at ch 30 or 40 like they used to. I’ve been wondering why that is?
dying and transmigrating into a teens body, in a world of drones and ai computers. The world is full of beings who awakened ther genes and have special abilities, he has a golden cheat, the power to absorb gene data inn the form of orbs. The gods society is a organization that exist to explore genes the problem is extracting the genes for study causes the subject to die, the mc after contact with them gains the ability to extract genes of those he kills and add it to his own.
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Me gusta y atrapa, pero la traduccion es malisima, quien se encarga de revisar la gramatica?? Tienen que dejar al menos corregir esos errores, sino la historia se pierde entre palabras mal escritas y desorden de puntuaciones.
Spoiler de révélation It's an okay novel. Though there are several problems with it. The grading system for the skills are a little mess up. He can also transfer experience of one skill to another leaving a plot hole. How might one ask? First of all, it doesn't say if he loses memories if he transfers experience. But that is not the plot hole I'm talking about. I shall give an example. He trains the breathing method to minor concentration and transfer all the experience to king kong fist. The breathing method is now beginning. It should be easy to raise it up back to minor concentration again and keep doing over again.
Spoiler de révélation I love the book so far! I only have a few questions though. Is this harem or a single love interest? Also, not to be rude, but why is it locked at ch 19? I’ve noticed this with a lot of books lately where they lock way earlier than at ch 30 or 40 like they used to. I’ve been wondering why that is?
dying and transmigrating into a teens body, in a world of drones and ai computers. The world is full of beings who awakened ther genes and have special abilities, he has a golden cheat, the power to absorb gene data inn the form of orbs. The gods society is a organization that exist to explore genes the problem is extracting the genes for study causes the subject to die, the mc after contact with them gains the ability to extract genes of those he kills and add it to his own.
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