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While it good to see more overlord fanfics I personal think if the sorry is 10 chapters along and there no sign of you going to the new world the story is a waste of time. I think if you do more character development flashbacks of interaction work better while you continue with the main story. Because after you are finish and you to the new world are you doing to mention that other guild member and previous relations .
thanks for write this work of art author but i need more chapterssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Overall a good read, the only qualms I could possibly with this story are the updates. Which is reasonable because the author is in school.
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While it good to see more overlord fanfics I personal think if the sorry is 10 chapters along and there no sign of you going to the new world the story is a waste of time. I think if you do more character development flashbacks of interaction work better while you continue with the main story. Because after you are finish and you to the new world are you doing to mention that other guild member and previous relations .
thanks for write this work of art author but i need more chapterssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Overall a good read, the only qualms I could possibly with this story are the updates. Which is reasonable because the author is in school.
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