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What is a damn whitebearded son doing being cared for and raised by garp? I don't have to read a single chapter to know it's going to be complete garbage [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
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It's not bad tbh but it doesn't make sense to learn Haki first before Rokushiki, and a pirate nobody with Conqueror's is just BS in my opinion, plus the repetitiveness makes it boring real quick.
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Same stuff happens over and over , evenif. you skip chapter and read last you won't miss anything
matine? lame already [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
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I like the fic so far, but i just have to ask, why does MC train in haki so early and yet he does know the basics of 6 styles yet? im only chapter 16 and have not read that far yet but still i have to ask
I think it is a good novel but you make him to soft ..............................................................................................
What is a damn whitebearded son doing being cared for and raised by garp? I don't have to read a single chapter to know it's going to be complete garbage [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Spoiler de révélation It's not bad tbh but it doesn't make sense to learn Haki first before Rokushiki, and a pirate nobody with Conqueror's is just BS in my opinion, plus the repetitiveness makes it boring real quick.
Spoiler de révélation Same stuff happens over and over , evenif. you skip chapter and read last you won't miss anything
matine? lame already [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Spoiler de révélation I like the fic so far, but i just have to ask, why does MC train in haki so early and yet he does know the basics of 6 styles yet? im only chapter 16 and have not read that far yet but still i have to ask
I think it is a good novel but you make him to soft ..............................................................................................