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Another great novel by Nickaido!! Honestly, I have read two of his novels besides this one, and both could be on the top 10, and this one is just as good. In my humble opinion, Nickaido is the most underrated author on Webnovel. I guarantee whether you read this novel, or Death Guns, or Crimson Overlord, you will be happy to find a great read!! Not to mention, the author is committed to writing, I say this because he consistently updates daily with high-quality chapters. I have been following him on Webnovel and Discord for a long time and constantly get notifications for his chapter updates. He is an author I would like to see become successful because, in my opinion, he deserves it.
Oh my goodness! We've made it to the monumental 100th chapter in no time at all. It's a major milestone that we've successfully achieved. Now that we've reached this point, I invite you to share your thoughts and provide feedback on the story. Your valuable suggestions will contribute to the creation of a truly remarkable narrative. Let's join forces and transform this tale into something truly extraordinary!
Daym! It hooks you right from the start! It's really good! Especially since this is my cup of tea! Read it you won't regret it
Story seems to be fine but.... 1. Needs a lot of editing. Sentences can get very strange. 2. Starts a chapter with a big chunk of last chapter's end.
GREAT BOOK!! It hooks you from the start! The world-building and the plot all are quite fascinating! Can't wait to read on as the story goes on! The writing style is easy to flow and makes good in explaining. Good work, author!
Welcome to the Era of Players. Join the adventure and I'm certain you won't regret it. Death shall be...
The general content is fine, nothing that insane (at least up until where I stopped around when he got the class.). The thing that bugs me about the novel is the way things are written (not the plot, I mean how characters speak or descriptions are written and stuff), it’s just kind of awkward. Maybe it gets better with time but I’m not gonna stick around.
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
Another great novel by Nickaido!! Honestly, I have read two of his novels besides this one, and both could be on the top 10, and this one is just as good. In my humble opinion, Nickaido is the most underrated author on Webnovel. I guarantee whether you read this novel, or Death Guns, or Crimson Overlord, you will be happy to find a great read!! Not to mention, the author is committed to writing, I say this because he consistently updates daily with high-quality chapters. I have been following him on Webnovel and Discord for a long time and constantly get notifications for his chapter updates. He is an author I would like to see become successful because, in my opinion, he deserves it.
Oh my goodness! We've made it to the monumental 100th chapter in no time at all. It's a major milestone that we've successfully achieved. Now that we've reached this point, I invite you to share your thoughts and provide feedback on the story. Your valuable suggestions will contribute to the creation of a truly remarkable narrative. Let's join forces and transform this tale into something truly extraordinary!
Daym! It hooks you right from the start! It's really good! Especially since this is my cup of tea! Read it you won't regret it
Story seems to be fine but.... 1. Needs a lot of editing. Sentences can get very strange. 2. Starts a chapter with a big chunk of last chapter's end.
GREAT BOOK!! It hooks you from the start! The world-building and the plot all are quite fascinating! Can't wait to read on as the story goes on! The writing style is easy to flow and makes good in explaining. Good work, author!
Welcome to the Era of Players. Join the adventure and I'm certain you won't regret it. Death shall be...
The general content is fine, nothing that insane (at least up until where I stopped around when he got the class.). The thing that bugs me about the novel is the way things are written (not the plot, I mean how characters speak or descriptions are written and stuff), it’s just kind of awkward. Maybe it gets better with time but I’m not gonna stick around.