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It's a reeeeeaaaaallllyy good story, the only problem I have with it is having to wait so much for the chapters because I can't support the author at the actual moment, but at least they are really well written and have a good length per chapter to make it extremely worth it.
I like the story I just don’t get the point of constantly moving forward with the story to go back the next chapter. What I mean by that is that the author will need the chapter in the middle of a conversation to jump to another pov into a flashback then back the conversation it’s irritating but the story is good.
I love it, I also like the fact that Harry left the Dursley's earlier than waiting until the day he goes to hogwarts. The fact that his best friend is the most dangerous magical creature. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
love it but idk if it's dropped or not seeing as it's been 2 weeks since it last updated
la historia es buenisima la verdad me gusta como escribe el autor la verdad y sus otras historias pueden hablar de el lo unico que lamento la verdad seria las actualizaciones porque si fuera al menos una por semana seria genial la verdad pero es mas tardado por eso tal ves no sea tan reconocido sus obras porque de resto es genial
It's a reeeeeaaaaallllyy good story, the only problem I have with it is having to wait so much for the chapters because I can't support the author at the actual moment, but at least they are really well written and have a good length per chapter to make it extremely worth it.
I like the story I just don’t get the point of constantly moving forward with the story to go back the next chapter. What I mean by that is that the author will need the chapter in the middle of a conversation to jump to another pov into a flashback then back the conversation it’s irritating but the story is good.
I love it, I also like the fact that Harry left the Dursley's earlier than waiting until the day he goes to hogwarts. The fact that his best friend is the most dangerous magical creature. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
love it but idk if it's dropped or not seeing as it's been 2 weeks since it last updated
la historia es buenisima la verdad me gusta como escribe el autor la verdad y sus otras historias pueden hablar de el lo unico que lamento la verdad seria las actualizaciones porque si fuera al menos una por semana seria genial la verdad pero es mas tardado por eso tal ves no sea tan reconocido sus obras porque de resto es genial