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I'm not a big fan of sports but surprisely I got hooked. Almighty Author keep updating.
The story development is really good and characters well designed.The story is flavored making it unique.Am keenly following to read more. Much appreciation to the author for great work is doing.
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The world background is good, the struggle of MC kept me hooked. Hope you will update more chapters.
It's been a great story so far and am sure it will pique anyone's interest.. Am a fan of football so when I saw the novel was about football I rushed. Good work Author.
No spoiler here Loved the world background, character struggle and the writing quality so far. You've bee doing a great job here. But Author, can you work on your release rate, the chapter update is slow and it really needs to be improved. I can't wait to see the end of this novel, so please, update everyday 🙏 Thank you.
It's crazy how you made Emmy gain system but didn't gain freedom . I wonder what will happen when he later gain freedom
I've not read a book that blends between competitive sports and dark fantasy before but, this one is the first, best I've read so far . Good work
I'm not a big fan of sports but surprisely I got hooked. Almighty Author keep updating.
The story development is really good and characters well designed.The story is flavored making it unique.Am keenly following to read more. Much appreciation to the author for great work is doing.
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
The world background is good, the struggle of MC kept me hooked. Hope you will update more chapters.
It's been a great story so far and am sure it will pique anyone's interest.. Am a fan of football so when I saw the novel was about football I rushed. Good work Author.
No spoiler here Loved the world background, character struggle and the writing quality so far. You've bee doing a great job here. But Author, can you work on your release rate, the chapter update is slow and it really needs to be improved. I can't wait to see the end of this novel, so please, update everyday 🙏 Thank you.
It's crazy how you made Emmy gain system but didn't gain freedom . I wonder what will happen when he later gain freedom
I've not read a book that blends between competitive sports and dark fantasy before but, this one is the first, best I've read so far . Good work