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Ok I've read the first chapter and I can already say the story is good. The first person with Connor is well-done, and i really like the way he decribe his situation, it makes him feel real and not some zero-personnality character. Also i'm not going to lie, even if he was introduced in the same chap, seeing kirk getting punched in the face and taking a giga karma was hella satisfying, just that alredy enough for the 5 stars no-joke <:
The book is nicely written, with a touch of mystery attend to it. It is a first-person kind of novel so you get to see everything from the characters perspective. Keep up the good work!
Still in its early stages but seems very promising many mysteries to unfold.
I saw... I came... I planned to conquer this book by thoroughly reading all chapters. Great novel.
Ok I've read the first chapter and I can already say the story is good. The first person with Connor is well-done, and i really like the way he decribe his situation, it makes him feel real and not some zero-personnality character. Also i'm not going to lie, even if he was introduced in the same chap, seeing kirk getting punched in the face and taking a giga karma was hella satisfying, just that alredy enough for the 5 stars no-joke <:
The book is nicely written, with a touch of mystery attend to it. It is a first-person kind of novel so you get to see everything from the characters perspective. Keep up the good work!
Still in its early stages but seems very promising many mysteries to unfold.
I saw... I came... I planned to conquer this book by thoroughly reading all chapters. Great novel.