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I guess i ought to tag this story as ''magical-realism''. For Dear Author's penmanship is filled with magic as it intricately brings the story's plot to fluently flow and magnificently creates the wonderful characters that can only be described as endearingly life-like. Utterly adorable, funny, witty... I could go on, but i'm only on chp. 10 so i'm going back to the story. A MUST READ. (The devil is looking over my shoulder hoping for me to scroll and read a little faster. Spoilt brat says: "No spoilers, please")
i have push myself away from this book because of the love triangle tag but it was my worst mistake ever Che Ming is a character i want to see more of it on here he is most cold apathetic but truthful lovely when he wants to i need more cold apathetic male or female stories on here. love it so much PS how much angst are we getting i need to be prepared you are queen of BL
The MC is stupid as a bag of rocks and the birds is no better and actively work against the MC. Both ML has no redeeming qualities. What a waste.
Gosh..... I have never read so many chapters in a single night, and I still can't get enough! 🥵😭 this is soooooo good. I recommend this book to everyone! Please, if you like smut, love triangles, reverse harem, comedic tone, and whatnot, this is the novel for you! And you're not going to be disappointed!
Oh my God! I never thought I'd be stuck to a single book and yearn for updates! Author, you did such a good job with Chen Ming! he's so relatable! 😭😭😭 PS: This book is hot 🥵
I must say, you are doing an outstanding job at weaving together such a captivating story. Thank you for taking me on this incredible journey with you, and I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.
So ruthless 😂 From a straight man into a man that to be done by two men [img=Feeling it]🤣 The title of chapter 1 is extremely literal. Chap 2? hmm... [img=Out of it] (Dunno how should I put it but lol) [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls] Fighting author!
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Funny, interesting and fast paced! If you need something lighthearted with a good storyline, then you have come to the right place! I can’t wait to read more chapters! Author, please update soon!!
I've just started reading and I'm already in love with this story 😍🤩 good job autor 🤗👏👏
From the deepest part of my heart, mind and soul. I love this book sincerely. hahaha author u rock. looking forward to more chapters. will support all d way💃💃💃💃
Another interesting book from Pinky! Can't wait to read more chapters and see the story unfold for MC, Chen Ming. Such an interesting plot! Success Author Jim 🫶👍😘
I'm so looking forward to this story!! 😭 chen ming is such a relatable character and chick is so cute hahaha 🤣🤣🤣 the first few chapters have already brought me to an emotional rollercoaster so I can't wait to see where the story will develop! 🥰💃
There's potential, but I'm not the audience. I think you should look towards other authors in the genre and see what they do. Ok, that's all.
I guess i ought to tag this story as ''magical-realism''. For Dear Author's penmanship is filled with magic as it intricately brings the story's plot to fluently flow and magnificently creates the wonderful characters that can only be described as endearingly life-like. Utterly adorable, funny, witty... I could go on, but i'm only on chp. 10 so i'm going back to the story. A MUST READ. (The devil is looking over my shoulder hoping for me to scroll and read a little faster. Spoilt brat says: "No spoilers, please")
i have push myself away from this book because of the love triangle tag but it was my worst mistake ever Che Ming is a character i want to see more of it on here he is most cold apathetic but truthful lovely when he wants to i need more cold apathetic male or female stories on here. love it so much PS how much angst are we getting i need to be prepared you are queen of BL
The MC is stupid as a bag of rocks and the birds is no better and actively work against the MC. Both ML has no redeeming qualities. What a waste.
Gosh..... I have never read so many chapters in a single night, and I still can't get enough! 🥵😭 this is soooooo good. I recommend this book to everyone! Please, if you like smut, love triangles, reverse harem, comedic tone, and whatnot, this is the novel for you! And you're not going to be disappointed!
Oh my God! I never thought I'd be stuck to a single book and yearn for updates! Author, you did such a good job with Chen Ming! he's so relatable! 😭😭😭 PS: This book is hot 🥵
I must say, you are doing an outstanding job at weaving together such a captivating story. Thank you for taking me on this incredible journey with you, and I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.
So ruthless 😂 From a straight man into a man that to be done by two men [img=Feeling it]🤣 The title of chapter 1 is extremely literal. Chap 2? hmm... [img=Out of it] (Dunno how should I put it but lol) [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls] Fighting author!
Spoiler de révélation Funny, interesting and fast paced! If you need something lighthearted with a good storyline, then you have come to the right place! I can’t wait to read more chapters! Author, please update soon!!
I've just started reading and I'm already in love with this story 😍🤩 good job autor 🤗👏👏
From the deepest part of my heart, mind and soul. I love this book sincerely. hahaha author u rock. looking forward to more chapters. will support all d way💃💃💃💃
Another interesting book from Pinky! Can't wait to read more chapters and see the story unfold for MC, Chen Ming. Such an interesting plot! Success Author Jim 🫶👍😘
I'm so looking forward to this story!! 😭 chen ming is such a relatable character and chick is so cute hahaha 🤣🤣🤣 the first few chapters have already brought me to an emotional rollercoaster so I can't wait to see where the story will develop! 🥰💃
There's potential, but I'm not the audience. I think you should look towards other authors in the genre and see what they do. Ok, that's all.
A very interesting story, I will love to read more