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No harem tag is up and the MC makes a promise to his wife early on not to marry anyone else. 30ish chapters later he's now married again. Enjoy the 1 star review.
What is in this? an mc that is doubted by his servants an mc whose decisions keeps getting questioned a bunch of "loyal" servants going behind the mc's back to get what they want an mc, that gets bent by other characters an mc whose decisions changes easily after being "corrected" by his servants an mc that goes by the flow, dictated by the people around him basically a beta mc
This is a weird one, for sure. It is a political intrigue story that isn't about solely throwing jutsu around. However, the politics aren't overdone either. Overall, it's a good start to an interesting premise. I foresee lots of copies of this setting in the future.
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It's a very great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very interesting plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I love how MC/Akihito is not a ninja, but a noble in Fire Country (even become a Fire Daimyo).. But he still train like a samurai (even as strong as Jonin).. It also tell the intricity life of noble in Fire Country... It's interesting to see how he develop his land to become the most prosper in Fire Country (can you explain how he develop his province).. I love how he saved and recruit Karin mother.. Maybe he can saved others with tragic backstory too (like Haku, Kabuto, etc)... Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
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Ich habe noch nie eine Naruto fanfic gelesen das Gut mit der Geschichte umgehen kann und solch eine interessante perspective bringt.😋😋😋
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bro please don't drop this I want to read it to the end. and you are doing great keep it up
A very refreshing take of Naruto fanfic. This fanfic is a hidden gem, shining brightly like a star among most Naruto fanfics with one of the most unique perspectives and setting i've ever seen in a Naruto fanfic, where most would start in a ninja village. Up to 40 chapters, quality-wise, it is top of the shelf Naruto fanfic for sure. From writing all the way to plot, it's all high grade. Not yet top 10 grade, but the potential is there. Depending on the future chapter, this fanfic has a high chance to become one of the best fast-paced kingdom building Naruto fanfics. Story-wise, despite its Daimyo-centric story, it was actually lacking in political intrigue and the overall scheme is shallow compared to the usual court politics stories. The story was started when the overall setting was at a climax and the preparation stage was already done, which I thought it was a bit of a waste and unfortunate. It could be one hell of a ride with all of the buildups involved and well-written execution. Tldr, if you like refreshing setting and quality writing Naruto fanfic with competent and honorable MC, this fanfic is for you. Despite its short length and the staggering cliffhanger at the end, it is still worth to read.
Daily 5 star 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
came here expecting ruthless plots incomprehansible intrigue and self-centered unique characters rather than the usual dolls of the plot. should've guessed that finding a book like that won't be so easy
Engaging writing and a pretty novel premise for a 'Naruto fanfic'. The story is well-paced and provides an interesting take (AU) on the politics of a beloved fandom.
Great novel with a unique story. Good grammar, story and quality and pacing too. Hope you don’t drop it and continue the series……………………………………………………….
If you've seen the author's other books, they usually start well and then sink. Wait for another 20-30 episodes (around 50-60) and see if it messes up. I like the author's writing style. But it's as if he never thought about the end, new ideas came to his mind while advancing the story and he faltered while trying them.
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Woa this book is kinda nice, the author really know how to bring out the characters. It’s hard thing to do. U have good tlents bro. Gaes, just read it
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This story has a strong potential, and I hope a lot of people noticed this book as this is a great masterpiece. I also hope that this story has hundreds of chapters!
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man, the story at the beginning seemed very interesting, but I'm starting to think that it won't be as I expect, it will be 90% focused on him and the Damiyos and it will end up being more of an original story than a Naruto one.... and man, to be very honest, I believe that the MC shouldn't get involved in the selection of the next Damiyo without gaining anything, besides promising something like that for her (at least I found the plot extremely forced).... I'm evaluating it until chapter 3
No harem tag is up and the MC makes a promise to his wife early on not to marry anyone else. 30ish chapters later he's now married again. Enjoy the 1 star review.
What is in this? an mc that is doubted by his servants an mc whose decisions keeps getting questioned a bunch of "loyal" servants going behind the mc's back to get what they want an mc, that gets bent by other characters an mc whose decisions changes easily after being "corrected" by his servants an mc that goes by the flow, dictated by the people around him basically a beta mc
This is a weird one, for sure. It is a political intrigue story that isn't about solely throwing jutsu around. However, the politics aren't overdone either. Overall, it's a good start to an interesting premise. I foresee lots of copies of this setting in the future.
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
It's a very great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very interesting plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I love how MC/Akihito is not a ninja, but a noble in Fire Country (even become a Fire Daimyo).. But he still train like a samurai (even as strong as Jonin).. It also tell the intricity life of noble in Fire Country... It's interesting to see how he develop his land to become the most prosper in Fire Country (can you explain how he develop his province).. I love how he saved and recruit Karin mother.. Maybe he can saved others with tragic backstory too (like Haku, Kabuto, etc)... Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
Spoiler de révélation Ich habe noch nie eine Naruto fanfic gelesen das Gut mit der Geschichte umgehen kann und solch eine interessante perspective bringt.😋😋😋
Daily 5 star 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
bro please don't drop this I want to read it to the end. and you are doing great keep it up
A very refreshing take of Naruto fanfic. This fanfic is a hidden gem, shining brightly like a star among most Naruto fanfics with one of the most unique perspectives and setting i've ever seen in a Naruto fanfic, where most would start in a ninja village. Up to 40 chapters, quality-wise, it is top of the shelf Naruto fanfic for sure. From writing all the way to plot, it's all high grade. Not yet top 10 grade, but the potential is there. Depending on the future chapter, this fanfic has a high chance to become one of the best fast-paced kingdom building Naruto fanfics. Story-wise, despite its Daimyo-centric story, it was actually lacking in political intrigue and the overall scheme is shallow compared to the usual court politics stories. The story was started when the overall setting was at a climax and the preparation stage was already done, which I thought it was a bit of a waste and unfortunate. It could be one hell of a ride with all of the buildups involved and well-written execution. Tldr, if you like refreshing setting and quality writing Naruto fanfic with competent and honorable MC, this fanfic is for you. Despite its short length and the staggering cliffhanger at the end, it is still worth to read.
Daily 5 star 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
came here expecting ruthless plots incomprehansible intrigue and self-centered unique characters rather than the usual dolls of the plot. should've guessed that finding a book like that won't be so easy
Engaging writing and a pretty novel premise for a 'Naruto fanfic'. The story is well-paced and provides an interesting take (AU) on the politics of a beloved fandom.
Great novel with a unique story. Good grammar, story and quality and pacing too. Hope you don’t drop it and continue the series……………………………………………………….
If you've seen the author's other books, they usually start well and then sink. Wait for another 20-30 episodes (around 50-60) and see if it messes up. I like the author's writing style. But it's as if he never thought about the end, new ideas came to his mind while advancing the story and he faltered while trying them.
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Woa this book is kinda nice, the author really know how to bring out the characters. It’s hard thing to do. U have good tlents bro. Gaes, just read it
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
This story has a strong potential, and I hope a lot of people noticed this book as this is a great masterpiece. I also hope that this story has hundreds of chapters!
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man, the story at the beginning seemed very interesting, but I'm starting to think that it won't be as I expect, it will be 90% focused on him and the Damiyos and it will end up being more of an original story than a Naruto one.... and man, to be very honest, I believe that the MC shouldn't get involved in the selection of the next Damiyo without gaining anything, besides promising something like that for her (at least I found the plot extremely forced).... I'm evaluating it until chapter 3
nice change of pace. Non-Shinobi MC. ...