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Honestly the story is cool, but it feels more like a good retelling than a full story. If you can’t write something well, you can use neural networks. From several options, collect one + edit. It will be good, and not like a conversation with Minato) And the idea is super, that’s why 4 stars. I am writing through a translator, there may be errors. Too lazy to edit later.
We need more fics with mc having sukunas powers so here’s 5 stars. Don’t drop this!!
I love this. This is the type of story I've been looking for. Can't wait to read more!
Hmmm... This fanfic is probably written by a teenager, because this very superficial/simple read. It feels more like a draft than a real story.
Honestly the story is cool, but it feels more like a good retelling than a full story. If you can’t write something well, you can use neural networks. From several options, collect one + edit. It will be good, and not like a conversation with Minato) And the idea is super, that’s why 4 stars. I am writing through a translator, there may be errors. Too lazy to edit later.
We need more fics with mc having sukunas powers so here’s 5 stars. Don’t drop this!!
I love this. This is the type of story I've been looking for. Can't wait to read more!
Hmmm... This fanfic is probably written by a teenager, because this very superficial/simple read. It feels more like a draft than a real story.