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Good book highly recommend some people might now like at first but it’s really great at the end.
To be honest I didn't like a lot of things the author wrote, a lot of nonsensical things that the author chalked it up to our own non understanding, but that's just bs, there is a lot of powers the MC get but he doesn't use properly because the author decided to make the plot longer. In the end, I would sincerely recommend for people to read, even with all the author's bs it was still a worth read for me.
this is a true masterpiece. I am search for a fanfic like this but no results.
I love this book I’m really sad this book ended but you couldn’t expand on it more Can someone recommend me another fic
It was great it was great read on your own time I don’t have anything else to say
man.... that was a fulfilling end😍.... but anyway dude... the story was very nice... keep up the good work bro😍😍👍🏻
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I enjoyed reading this story the story ends on a good note [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
really good work I'm looking forward to the new work -----------------------------------------------------------
This is worth every bit of ur time if u read it. The mc ain't no Goody 2shoes and the characters and the Story both are well written
At first I saw this as something to read between other stories until it became something I looked forward to continuing.
a good and enjoyable book for me to read, I'm waiting for your next book, keep writing. ____________________________________________________________________ (-_-) Nice Book👍
I love this novel. Author make another evil mc novel.🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 💘💗💗😍🥰🥳🥳💖💖💖💖💖🥳🥰💘💗💗😍🥰🥳💖💖💖😄♥️💞🌈💕❣️💘💗😍🥰🥰🥰♥️💞🌈🌈💞🎉🎉😄😄💖🥰🌈😍💗❣️❣️❣️❣️💕🌈
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I haven’t read much of the story but I love the idea and concept of it. His character is interesting, and funny in a kinda evil way. Just what I like lol He’s op but it’s not like an op just because but because his being is op in itself. The only negative thing I’d be able to say is that the storytelling is somewhat lackluster. There are small mistakes, grammar wise or just spelling wise that could be easily fixed by proof reading it once more or just having an ai do it. This may change in the later chapters but I wouldn’t know 🤷♂️ It reads more like a diary which is fine but may not be what some readers like, I don’t mind tho All in all a good story!!
It is one of the best fanfictions i read but it could be better if the chapters were a bit longer
The novel itself is a speed run but I say its good than many novels out here. But u see I have a problem with every novel I like and that is to comment in every one of them and telling them to uplode more chapters like this one cuz it's good
Beautiful work it’s a fun read so far and mc having no type of morals is nice for the villain theme but stuff like “mid-teenage boy suking his dîçk…” 😬
Good book highly recommend some people might now like at first but it’s really great at the end.
To be honest I didn't like a lot of things the author wrote, a lot of nonsensical things that the author chalked it up to our own non understanding, but that's just bs, there is a lot of powers the MC get but he doesn't use properly because the author decided to make the plot longer. In the end, I would sincerely recommend for people to read, even with all the author's bs it was still a worth read for me.
this is a true masterpiece. I am search for a fanfic like this but no results.
I love this book I’m really sad this book ended but you couldn’t expand on it more Can someone recommend me another fic
It was great it was great read on your own time I don’t have anything else to say
man.... that was a fulfilling end😍.... but anyway dude... the story was very nice... keep up the good work bro😍😍👍🏻
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I enjoyed reading this story the story ends on a good note [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
really good work I'm looking forward to the new work -----------------------------------------------------------
This is worth every bit of ur time if u read it. The mc ain't no Goody 2shoes and the characters and the Story both are well written
At first I saw this as something to read between other stories until it became something I looked forward to continuing.
a good and enjoyable book for me to read, I'm waiting for your next book, keep writing. ____________________________________________________________________ (-_-) Nice Book👍
I love this novel. Author make another evil mc novel.🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 💘💗💗😍🥰🥳🥳💖💖💖💖💖🥳🥰💘💗💗😍🥰🥳💖💖💖😄♥️💞🌈💕❣️💘💗😍🥰🥰🥰♥️💞🌈🌈💞🎉🎉😄😄💖🥰🌈😍💗❣️❣️❣️❣️💕🌈
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Spoiler de révélation I haven’t read much of the story but I love the idea and concept of it. His character is interesting, and funny in a kinda evil way. Just what I like lol He’s op but it’s not like an op just because but because his being is op in itself. The only negative thing I’d be able to say is that the storytelling is somewhat lackluster. There are small mistakes, grammar wise or just spelling wise that could be easily fixed by proof reading it once more or just having an ai do it. This may change in the later chapters but I wouldn’t know 🤷♂️ It reads more like a diary which is fine but may not be what some readers like, I don’t mind tho All in all a good story!!
It is one of the best fanfictions i read but it could be better if the chapters were a bit longer
The novel itself is a speed run but I say its good than many novels out here. But u see I have a problem with every novel I like and that is to comment in every one of them and telling them to uplode more chapters like this one cuz it's good
Beautiful work it’s a fun read so far and mc having no type of morals is nice for the villain theme but stuff like “mid-teenage boy suking his dîçk…” 😬
good reading.............................