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as CHP.2 author goes all Slytherin are dark. hopefully it's not a another griffindork idiocy with licking the Bush haired sl.t and pottey
Hi all, This is my first attempt at trying to write a fan fiction. I am just fixing the translations on this novel that i found enjoyable and wanted to share it for others. I do hope everyone enjoys this!
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BORING! The time gap between simulations is very large! There were only 2 simulations! The story itself without simulations is an ordinary good fairy tale with friendship and family ties! I don't understand why only 2 simulations are needed? Why not make more simulations is a mystery! Simulations only give talent, and are limited to max. 10 places! Simulations are not needed in the work and the story will not lose anything! Apparently, they added simulations only for the sake of interest, because without them the story is simply uninteresting!
as CHP.2 author goes all Slytherin are dark. hopefully it's not a another griffindork idiocy with licking the Bush haired sl.t and pottey
Hi all, This is my first attempt at trying to write a fan fiction. I am just fixing the translations on this novel that i found enjoyable and wanted to share it for others. I do hope everyone enjoys this!
Raw plaese [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
BORING! The time gap between simulations is very large! There were only 2 simulations! The story itself without simulations is an ordinary good fairy tale with friendship and family ties! I don't understand why only 2 simulations are needed? Why not make more simulations is a mystery! Simulations only give talent, and are limited to max. 10 places! Simulations are not needed in the work and the story will not lose anything! Apparently, they added simulations only for the sake of interest, because without them the story is simply uninteresting!