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Really good start of the story just need a little bit of editing . Good character setting and storyline . If you are lovers of action fantasy don't skip this story . Recommended
To my dear future readers, hope you are enjoying the book.anyways if you have any questions use this channel to ask; I'll reply
I can see that this story has a lot of potential with how the story began. Although the novel still has a few tweaks that need to be fix, but I know this novel can go a long way so keep it up! 🔥
Really good start of the story just need a little bit of editing . Good character setting and storyline . If you are lovers of action fantasy don't skip this story . Recommended
To my dear future readers, hope you are enjoying the book.anyways if you have any questions use this channel to ask; I'll reply
I can see that this story has a lot of potential with how the story began. Although the novel still has a few tweaks that need to be fix, but I know this novel can go a long way so keep it up! 🔥