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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I like the Story it´s a pleasend read hope you contiue the updates / Translation, and how long is the Original ?
I see many inconsistencies in the story and sudden jumps if you stop to think about it and the MC's attitude leaves a lot to be desired. In my opinion it is a fairly vague story and lacks development The mc literally shouts skills like a child when he says he is older
Hey, guys! Thanks for reading my novel. Even though this is just a translation, I've added some unique elements to make it more interesting. If you enjoyed it, please leave a comment and a review; that would be greatly appreciated. Have a great day! Cheers!!
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I like the Story it´s a pleasend read hope you contiue the updates / Translation, and how long is the Original ?
I see many inconsistencies in the story and sudden jumps if you stop to think about it and the MC's attitude leaves a lot to be desired. In my opinion it is a fairly vague story and lacks development The mc literally shouts skills like a child when he says he is older
Hey, guys! Thanks for reading my novel. Even though this is just a translation, I've added some unique elements to make it more interesting. If you enjoyed it, please leave a comment and a review; that would be greatly appreciated. Have a great day! Cheers!!