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As a player who has been playing genshin since the release, I thought several times about fanfiction on it when Inazuma came out. But I didn't find any particularly interesting ones then. And when Natlan came out, he decided to start searching again and found this fanfiction and read up to 352 chapters and realized that only good things could be expected from this book. Maybe some people don't like the fact that the author always describes the Girls and their outfit and so on, but I personally liked it because the description of how to see the Main character and the fact that they are not as wooden as in the game is just something else.
So far, everything has been interesting and well developed. The MC has gained strength slowly but consistently over time. The main thing which is weird and quite awkward to read is the constant and sudden excerpts about whatever females' legs or skirt that is around. For example: MC: I need this... The sun highlighted her decadent thighs and portrayed how smooth her skin was. +4 sentences Female: Oh OK I can do that for you... It's weird and off-putting to see this multiple times a chapter in the middle of other events. The author definitely has some overt leg fetishist that is disproportionately bleeding into his work. It actually detracts from the quality because it almost always feels out of place.
Haven't started it, but I'm just curious about the gimmick. like getting exp from kill hillicurls and such...isn't that how it works anyway in the first place game wise
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150+ Chapters in and the story is draaaaging on. Main character is still "building" with no end in sight. No real love interest, in fact only a single kiss has been had and it wasn't a "real" kiss. Has real potential but it just took too long to get there.
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Probably my 1st or 2nd favorite story I've read on here, the power progression makes sense and feels fair and interesting, it's done at a reasonable pace where it feels satisfying when he gets noticeably stronger rather than have him become stupidly strong for no reason 20 chapters in which i see often. The story goes into more detail about things skimmed over in the game, such as (what i believe are)original small story sections based on adventurer guild commissions which is pretty neat and the author isn't concerned about changing the canon events which keeps the story interesting when its going over what's already shown in the game. In conclusion: post more chapters pleeeeease
2nd review I've been reading raw ver(原神之我能刷阅历点) these few days. In short the story is still good and worth reading (idk it's because I like this story type but I have read till chp 810). Here are a few spoilers for those who wants it . . . . . . *spoiler* . . . . . . . . . . . Starting from around chp 300~400ish mc will have more and more harem. (it's pretty obvious that gonna happen sooner or later but this is for those who wish the harem would stop at some point. Sorry to pop ur bubbles but harem is like a universe it never stop expanding) . . . . . . . . . He'll go to HSR(honkai starrail) universe at around 600ish chp. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . F members of SH group, Kaf, SW, will join his harem (pretty sure FF would too but this is unconfirmed at this point. HSR mc is Stella so I was hoping for Stella x FF let's see how it goes) . . . . . . . . . . . Around 800ish chp HI3 world introduction and will arrive at ZZZ world . . that's all there are some details I left behind like some events and mc's op skills. Late game favorable skill are too broken that even one of them can make a Xianxia Mc's starter skill and make a story of himself, but this MC got a ton of those. And mc got some skills to increase favorablility the girls give him it's around 400 points min and there are those like 900+ fav. Mc also got a skill where fav passively increase as long as he stay near a girl (that's how he courted Kaf and SW). Anyway, I'll still be reading it
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Bruh the mc is too dumb. And what's with author writing about a characters thighs every few sentence
This is good. Actually, this is really good. It's kind of a slow burn at the start, but once the journey to power starts, that's where it starts being fun. Not like the slow burn wasn't fun, but the chapters after that were hella good. expecting more!
imma just say, MISLEADING TAGS, too much stockings being mentioned and armpits for some reason
the story isnt bad but.... the author description of stocking just made me quit i cant take it anymore
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I am a person who doesn't like it when the MC is a weak person. I agree that if you want to start something you have to start from zero but the problem is why in chapter (100-165) there is no growth at all, what is meant is that he still can't do anything (a weak person). Honestly I am disappointed because of the growth of his strength. But maybe it still helps this story: (chapter:176) [Spiritual Threads: Significantly increases Mental/Spiritual power. Based on the strength of spiritual power, it can be transformed into invisible Threads that can leave the body and interfere with reality. Currently able to bend a spoon.]
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc.?
Great fanfiction story a Little slow but great thank you [img=update][img=update]
First, this story is slow pace(only reached liyue is 200-ish chp) in, and it's not op mc. mc became stronger later. Slow Pace /Weak > Strong With things going, mc will have a harem, no doubt, but he isn't some pokemon master that go meet > kiss > f*k. In these 200 chps, he only has 1 confirmed gf, and he hasn't officially reached the kissing stage with the 2nd one. Harem, but no pokemon master here Mc system is that kill monster to get exp and use that exp to lvl up himself or his technique. but just because he has this doesn't mean he goes out hunting all the time. This story's 30~40% are slice of life like what if a random dude got teleported to Teyvat with a system System / Slice of life / Farming Mc's main skill is to have character representative skills as long as he reaches trust lv10 with the opposite sex(that lvl u get namecard in genshin). Seeing this, I thought mc gonna catch pokemon left and right, but I was wrong(refer to previous chp). Traveller is Lumine and mc won't oppose her or shut down paimon everytime she speak (there is one ff with mc opposing aether with everything he got and there is another one with annoying paimon and mc of that ff shutting down paimon everytime she speaks). Lust skill U'll see author appreciating thigh, legs, under skin, belly, armpit, hair, face and overall appearance of female chars without checking for place or occasion (especially thigh and legs) aside from that one part, every thing else seem pretty good 10/10
This is quite a good fanfic. Specially due to originally being a Chinese fanfic, it seems to me that the author has a good understanding of Genshin Impact. However, one flaw I found after reading a couple of chapters is that the protagonist's name doesn't match the context. For example; after the protagonist introduce himself to Draff, Draff commented that names from Liyue is hard to pronounce. This is despite the protagonist having the name Nolan Walker. This made me realise that the protagonist's original name is different. So, I used the Chinese title to search the novel and learn that the protagonist is originally named 'Li Qiuzhi' (according to Google Translate). It would had been better to just keep the original name to match the context. Other than that, I enjoyed reading the fanfic. Thanks for translating this story, it certainly beat having to read the Google Translate one.
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Simply one of the best genshin fanfic ever, top 2. Nice story pacing, cute romance, interesting interactions, and most importantly, the FANTASY ADVENTURE
In my opinion, one of the best translated Genshin fanfics on this platform. I hope the author doesn't stop giving us chapters and ends up leaving this translation...
Этот отзыв только для поддержки этой работы 5 звёзд из 5 мне очень понравилось ............................................................................................................................
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Very good overall. Some very cliche things happen over and over again and the Mc gains favorability a tad bit too quickly but overall a good fic. Fights are good, the wrold has a balanced feeling of realism, characters arent empty husks and women dont isntantly fall for him. A great book overall.
the only work on Genshin that when I read I don’t have a strong desire to kill myself against a wall trying to break through it, thanks to which I look forward to the release of new chapters and the development of the plot.
Good stuff! Extra letters~ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Is all reviewers retarted or pushover like this MC ? I was patient like prophet but no development after reading more than 100+ chapters MC level 26 and worst at utilising his resources. OVER THIGH obsession, Being simp for Lisa to the point unbearable (lackey) acting scared in many situations + wimp mentality, never fightback in verbal arguments. Im aware of this ff being mtl but ıts not worth for translating. Affection Max level for one of heroine but no romance or acceptance devotion etc. Is everyone want To read spineless clown mc? WQ,US good + in terms of WB ıts genshin so okey? But this book disgustingly potential wasted story. false evaluation... just good day
Just here for tradition~ Enjoy the story of a random guy-similar to us-transmigrated to the world of Genshin Impact! Gets a Nice EXP System, gets Girls, makes Friends, Improve Himself, and much more...
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As a player who has been playing genshin since the release, I thought several times about fanfiction on it when Inazuma came out. But I didn't find any particularly interesting ones then. And when Natlan came out, he decided to start searching again and found this fanfiction and read up to 352 chapters and realized that only good things could be expected from this book. Maybe some people don't like the fact that the author always describes the Girls and their outfit and so on, but I personally liked it because the description of how to see the Main character and the fact that they are not as wooden as in the game is just something else.
So far, everything has been interesting and well developed. The MC has gained strength slowly but consistently over time. The main thing which is weird and quite awkward to read is the constant and sudden excerpts about whatever females' legs or skirt that is around. For example: MC: I need this... The sun highlighted her decadent thighs and portrayed how smooth her skin was. +4 sentences Female: Oh OK I can do that for you... It's weird and off-putting to see this multiple times a chapter in the middle of other events. The author definitely has some overt leg fetishist that is disproportionately bleeding into his work. It actually detracts from the quality because it almost always feels out of place.
Haven't started it, but I'm just curious about the gimmick. like getting exp from kill hillicurls and such...isn't that how it works anyway in the first place game wise
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150+ Chapters in and the story is draaaaging on. Main character is still "building" with no end in sight. No real love interest, in fact only a single kiss has been had and it wasn't a "real" kiss. Has real potential but it just took too long to get there.
Spoiler de révélation Probably my 1st or 2nd favorite story I've read on here, the power progression makes sense and feels fair and interesting, it's done at a reasonable pace where it feels satisfying when he gets noticeably stronger rather than have him become stupidly strong for no reason 20 chapters in which i see often. The story goes into more detail about things skimmed over in the game, such as (what i believe are)original small story sections based on adventurer guild commissions which is pretty neat and the author isn't concerned about changing the canon events which keeps the story interesting when its going over what's already shown in the game. In conclusion: post more chapters pleeeeease
2nd review I've been reading raw ver(原神之我能刷阅历点) these few days. In short the story is still good and worth reading (idk it's because I like this story type but I have read till chp 810). Here are a few spoilers for those who wants it . . . . . . *spoiler* . . . . . . . . . . . Starting from around chp 300~400ish mc will have more and more harem. (it's pretty obvious that gonna happen sooner or later but this is for those who wish the harem would stop at some point. Sorry to pop ur bubbles but harem is like a universe it never stop expanding) . . . . . . . . . He'll go to HSR(honkai starrail) universe at around 600ish chp. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . F members of SH group, Kaf, SW, will join his harem (pretty sure FF would too but this is unconfirmed at this point. HSR mc is Stella so I was hoping for Stella x FF let's see how it goes) . . . . . . . . . . . Around 800ish chp HI3 world introduction and will arrive at ZZZ world . . that's all there are some details I left behind like some events and mc's op skills. Late game favorable skill are too broken that even one of them can make a Xianxia Mc's starter skill and make a story of himself, but this MC got a ton of those. And mc got some skills to increase favorablility the girls give him it's around 400 points min and there are those like 900+ fav. Mc also got a skill where fav passively increase as long as he stay near a girl (that's how he courted Kaf and SW). Anyway, I'll still be reading it
Spoiler de révélation Bruh the mc is too dumb. And what's with author writing about a characters thighs every few sentence
This is good. Actually, this is really good. It's kind of a slow burn at the start, but once the journey to power starts, that's where it starts being fun. Not like the slow burn wasn't fun, but the chapters after that were hella good. expecting more!
imma just say, MISLEADING TAGS, too much stockings being mentioned and armpits for some reason
the story isnt bad but.... the author description of stocking just made me quit i cant take it anymore
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I am a person who doesn't like it when the MC is a weak person. I agree that if you want to start something you have to start from zero but the problem is why in chapter (100-165) there is no growth at all, what is meant is that he still can't do anything (a weak person). Honestly I am disappointed because of the growth of his strength. But maybe it still helps this story: (chapter:176) [Spiritual Threads: Significantly increases Mental/Spiritual power. Based on the strength of spiritual power, it can be transformed into invisible Threads that can leave the body and interfere with reality. Currently able to bend a spoon.]
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc.?
Great fanfiction story a Little slow but great thank you [img=update][img=update]
First, this story is slow pace(only reached liyue is 200-ish chp) in, and it's not op mc. mc became stronger later. Slow Pace /Weak > Strong With things going, mc will have a harem, no doubt, but he isn't some pokemon master that go meet > kiss > f*k. In these 200 chps, he only has 1 confirmed gf, and he hasn't officially reached the kissing stage with the 2nd one. Harem, but no pokemon master here Mc system is that kill monster to get exp and use that exp to lvl up himself or his technique. but just because he has this doesn't mean he goes out hunting all the time. This story's 30~40% are slice of life like what if a random dude got teleported to Teyvat with a system System / Slice of life / Farming Mc's main skill is to have character representative skills as long as he reaches trust lv10 with the opposite sex(that lvl u get namecard in genshin). Seeing this, I thought mc gonna catch pokemon left and right, but I was wrong(refer to previous chp). Traveller is Lumine and mc won't oppose her or shut down paimon everytime she speak (there is one ff with mc opposing aether with everything he got and there is another one with annoying paimon and mc of that ff shutting down paimon everytime she speaks). Lust skill U'll see author appreciating thigh, legs, under skin, belly, armpit, hair, face and overall appearance of female chars without checking for place or occasion (especially thigh and legs) aside from that one part, every thing else seem pretty good 10/10
This is quite a good fanfic. Specially due to originally being a Chinese fanfic, it seems to me that the author has a good understanding of Genshin Impact. However, one flaw I found after reading a couple of chapters is that the protagonist's name doesn't match the context. For example; after the protagonist introduce himself to Draff, Draff commented that names from Liyue is hard to pronounce. This is despite the protagonist having the name Nolan Walker. This made me realise that the protagonist's original name is different. So, I used the Chinese title to search the novel and learn that the protagonist is originally named 'Li Qiuzhi' (according to Google Translate). It would had been better to just keep the original name to match the context. Other than that, I enjoyed reading the fanfic. Thanks for translating this story, it certainly beat having to read the Google Translate one.
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Simply one of the best genshin fanfic ever, top 2. Nice story pacing, cute romance, interesting interactions, and most importantly, the FANTASY ADVENTURE
In my opinion, one of the best translated Genshin fanfics on this platform. I hope the author doesn't stop giving us chapters and ends up leaving this translation...
Этот отзыв только для поддержки этой работы 5 звёзд из 5 мне очень понравилось ............................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation Very good overall. Some very cliche things happen over and over again and the Mc gains favorability a tad bit too quickly but overall a good fic. Fights are good, the wrold has a balanced feeling of realism, characters arent empty husks and women dont isntantly fall for him. A great book overall.
the only work on Genshin that when I read I don’t have a strong desire to kill myself against a wall trying to break through it, thanks to which I look forward to the release of new chapters and the development of the plot.
Good stuff! Extra letters~ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Is all reviewers retarted or pushover like this MC ? I was patient like prophet but no development after reading more than 100+ chapters MC level 26 and worst at utilising his resources. OVER THIGH obsession, Being simp for Lisa to the point unbearable (lackey) acting scared in many situations + wimp mentality, never fightback in verbal arguments. Im aware of this ff being mtl but ıts not worth for translating. Affection Max level for one of heroine but no romance or acceptance devotion etc. Is everyone want To read spineless clown mc? WQ,US good + in terms of WB ıts genshin so okey? But this book disgustingly potential wasted story. false evaluation... just good day
Just here for tradition~ Enjoy the story of a random guy-similar to us-transmigrated to the world of Genshin Impact! Gets a Nice EXP System, gets Girls, makes Friends, Improve Himself, and much more...