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Good novel, I like it! It's like I'm reading a new version of solo leveling, but instead of collecting shadows, the MC here collects girls. I still haven't read far enough, but I can guess that the MC might have going to have a harem of probably a hundred plus, although, judging by the somewhat slow pacing, it will take a thousand chapter to reach that point. This is also somewhat similar to Eminence in Shadow, which I also like. All in all, this is a good story altogether.
I think this is pretty uniquely good on the platform. Strong recommend to try it out and support author to grow this more. The broader story has a few rough edges as plot points develop, but the characterizations and motivations of characters feels really well done. The smutty scenes are great and actually add character depth as well as being both intense and fun. This is a man of culture par excellance. Around 300 chapters in on WebNovel I find many stories start to spiral out of scope. Power creep, or genre mashing, or just running out of steam. Not here and I’m close to 400 chapters in. Here the author has done a great job of making the larger world unfurl and seem intentional like it was designed in advance. Even when settings or story scope changes all the characters are interesting and memorable, even the ones I don’t like I can’t say they’re ever boring. Author should be very proud and I hope they keep it up!
I've read over 30 sm*t novels, and I have to say, this one easily ranks among my top three favorites - unknown degenerate
I highly suggest just read a couple of chapters and you will be hooked and the author keep up the good work this is a masterpiece so don't give up ok
Another shitty novel with a protagonist who is seen as useless by others, but Oh, what a surprise, he is not. The worst thing is that the plot of I have no talent but then I do doesn't happen, but rather the protagonist pretends to be weak, which is stupid and meaningless. Just for this shit without originality I'm going to give it 1 star, screw you author without originality. And it's the first time I give 1 star.
Being honest, this novel had the potential to be really good. It's a shame the disappointment development. I think the problem on the novel is the protagonist
This is giving serious eminence in shadow vibes. Of which I’m here for it I’m smashing the like buttons.
I never imagined I’d reach 300 chapters, but here we are. It’s been nearly a year since I started this journey, but it doesn’t feel that long. It feels like only a fleeting moment has passed. But let’s put aside the sentimentality for a moment. I want to express my deepest thanks to all of you who have followed this story to this point. Your support means everything, and I hope you’ll continue to stick with me until the very end. A special shoutout to Jonathan_Allen for always holding the top spot in the rankings. And to everyone who has taken the time to read my story, a heartfelt thank you. To those of you who have stuck with it, even though it’s an amateur effort, I truly appreciate you. I’m far from perfect, and I know I’ve made mistakes. I sometimes forget past dialogues or actions (a huge thanks to those who pointed out these errors). I apologize for that, and I’m grateful to those who understand. We can all agree that sometimes, being an author isn’t easy. I’m not a professional, and I don’t have anyone to edit or proofread every chapter. But despite all that, you’ve stayed with the story, and that’s something I deeply value. I hope you’re all having an amazing day, and I wish for all your days ahead to be just as good. I can’t fully express how much your support means to me, but once again, thank you. I’m going to put in my best effort to make sure this story remains as compelling as possible for all of you. I hope you’ll continue to stick around.
Why does the characters and MC feel artificial and fake The dialogue is too inflexible and synthetic and feels like an AI written content “Humble village” - in a dialogue And the trauma of childhood friend- why would you have a trauma from that, sister I can understand but childhood friend???
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Can't fathom how more people isn't reading this book. please don't drop this no matter what
There is no Yuri or NTR in this novel, right? Please answer. for some reason I feel worried.
Started this just to pass time and I am honestly surprised at how easily it hooked me. Well written with a storyline that is exactly what you expect from the tags, yet original and fresh enough to make it stand out from the crowd. Do yourself a favour, give it a go.
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It’s one of the most slow paced novels I’ve read so far. At the beginning he has Gabrielle and amons blessing as of chapter 48 that’s all he still has. Building relationships is one thing but doing all of the conditions isn’t even on his mind really. He does one step then you don’t see that girl for another 20+ chapters.
Spoiler de révélation
Leon’s ultimate goal is to rule the world and possess a harem of beautiful women. In a world of fantasy and skills. Leon’s power is to copy the skills of women he has slept with. Author completely fumbled the story because he placed the MC into a magical academy setting as the “weakest character.” Author just wanted to write a magical academy story with a “weak” MC who is actually powerful. Not worth the read.
This is story is so good I can't stop reading it. The only downside is that there is no mention of who's POV it is, but flaws aside, I still enjoy the heck out of it. Keep it up! [img=update]
I like this novel I think it's good I enjoy it I'm happy when reading it All the characters are good, and the only real "flaw" is that we don't really fully understand the Mc's abilities beyond his main skills.
I love this novel. I hope that the author won't drop it. I also hope no Yuri and ntr
I don't know anything about the novel since I haven't read it yet. The synopsis is nice, but I'm still waiting for chapters . Hope the author doesn't drop this. I will add a review after reading the book 🥰
Okay, so here it is folks ---- Idk why it is not up the rankings but this novel is good, like cràzy good. The MC is realistic, powerful, smart, manipulative and has an OP ability. The guy screams Sigma (not the internet one) to me. He is quite hørñy though, still these all qualities are part of his character and makes him even more charming. Just give it a try, it will be worth it.
Good novel, I like it! It's like I'm reading a new version of solo leveling, but instead of collecting shadows, the MC here collects girls. I still haven't read far enough, but I can guess that the MC might have going to have a harem of probably a hundred plus, although, judging by the somewhat slow pacing, it will take a thousand chapter to reach that point. This is also somewhat similar to Eminence in Shadow, which I also like. All in all, this is a good story altogether.
I think this is pretty uniquely good on the platform. Strong recommend to try it out and support author to grow this more. The broader story has a few rough edges as plot points develop, but the characterizations and motivations of characters feels really well done. The smutty scenes are great and actually add character depth as well as being both intense and fun. This is a man of culture par excellance. Around 300 chapters in on WebNovel I find many stories start to spiral out of scope. Power creep, or genre mashing, or just running out of steam. Not here and I’m close to 400 chapters in. Here the author has done a great job of making the larger world unfurl and seem intentional like it was designed in advance. Even when settings or story scope changes all the characters are interesting and memorable, even the ones I don’t like I can’t say they’re ever boring. Author should be very proud and I hope they keep it up!
I've read over 30 sm*t novels, and I have to say, this one easily ranks among my top three favorites - unknown degenerate
I highly suggest just read a couple of chapters and you will be hooked and the author keep up the good work this is a masterpiece so don't give up ok
Another shitty novel with a protagonist who is seen as useless by others, but Oh, what a surprise, he is not. The worst thing is that the plot of I have no talent but then I do doesn't happen, but rather the protagonist pretends to be weak, which is stupid and meaningless. Just for this shit without originality I'm going to give it 1 star, screw you author without originality. And it's the first time I give 1 star.
Being honest, this novel had the potential to be really good. It's a shame the disappointment development. I think the problem on the novel is the protagonist
This is giving serious eminence in shadow vibes. Of which I’m here for it I’m smashing the like buttons.
I never imagined I’d reach 300 chapters, but here we are. It’s been nearly a year since I started this journey, but it doesn’t feel that long. It feels like only a fleeting moment has passed. But let’s put aside the sentimentality for a moment. I want to express my deepest thanks to all of you who have followed this story to this point. Your support means everything, and I hope you’ll continue to stick with me until the very end. A special shoutout to Jonathan_Allen for always holding the top spot in the rankings. And to everyone who has taken the time to read my story, a heartfelt thank you. To those of you who have stuck with it, even though it’s an amateur effort, I truly appreciate you. I’m far from perfect, and I know I’ve made mistakes. I sometimes forget past dialogues or actions (a huge thanks to those who pointed out these errors). I apologize for that, and I’m grateful to those who understand. We can all agree that sometimes, being an author isn’t easy. I’m not a professional, and I don’t have anyone to edit or proofread every chapter. But despite all that, you’ve stayed with the story, and that’s something I deeply value. I hope you’re all having an amazing day, and I wish for all your days ahead to be just as good. I can’t fully express how much your support means to me, but once again, thank you. I’m going to put in my best effort to make sure this story remains as compelling as possible for all of you. I hope you’ll continue to stick around.
Why does the characters and MC feel artificial and fake The dialogue is too inflexible and synthetic and feels like an AI written content “Humble village” - in a dialogue And the trauma of childhood friend- why would you have a trauma from that, sister I can understand but childhood friend???
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Can't fathom how more people isn't reading this book. please don't drop this no matter what
There is no Yuri or NTR in this novel, right? Please answer. for some reason I feel worried.
Started this just to pass time and I am honestly surprised at how easily it hooked me. Well written with a storyline that is exactly what you expect from the tags, yet original and fresh enough to make it stand out from the crowd. Do yourself a favour, give it a go.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It’s one of the most slow paced novels I’ve read so far. At the beginning he has Gabrielle and amons blessing as of chapter 48 that’s all he still has. Building relationships is one thing but doing all of the conditions isn’t even on his mind really. He does one step then you don’t see that girl for another 20+ chapters.
Spoiler de révélation Leon’s ultimate goal is to rule the world and possess a harem of beautiful women. In a world of fantasy and skills. Leon’s power is to copy the skills of women he has slept with. Author completely fumbled the story because he placed the MC into a magical academy setting as the “weakest character.” Author just wanted to write a magical academy story with a “weak” MC who is actually powerful. Not worth the read.
This is story is so good I can't stop reading it. The only downside is that there is no mention of who's POV it is, but flaws aside, I still enjoy the heck out of it. Keep it up! [img=update]
I like this novel I think it's good I enjoy it I'm happy when reading it All the characters are good, and the only real "flaw" is that we don't really fully understand the Mc's abilities beyond his main skills.
I love this novel. I hope that the author won't drop it. I also hope no Yuri and ntr
I don't know anything about the novel since I haven't read it yet. The synopsis is nice, but I'm still waiting for chapters . Hope the author doesn't drop this. I will add a review after reading the book 🥰
Okay, so here it is folks ---- Idk why it is not up the rankings but this novel is good, like cràzy good. The MC is realistic, powerful, smart, manipulative and has an OP ability. The guy screams Sigma (not the internet one) to me. He is quite hørñy though, still these all qualities are part of his character and makes him even more charming. Just give it a try, it will be worth it.