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I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR AN UPDATE. EVEN THOUGH IT IS NOT WAHT I ASK FOR IT IS GOOD .
Hello Author. I really liked this fanfic novel. it is one of my favorites fanfic novel. can you continue update this novel please 🙏. please don't drop it.
Bri when are you going to update this fanfic it's been awhile and I am still waiting.
I like this fanfiction but the update schedule is annoying I would appreciate it if it continued to update regularly and thank you.
Alright story, kind of misleading with the title. More like really fast dude with op gear from DxD in young justice. MC keeps on gaining new abilities which is a little bothersome considering I came here for a guy with just pure strength Updates seemed to have slowed down. MC just gets 10 shadows technique. Each one being more op. Mc (author) is a big pet lover, which is annoying considering I now have to remember each name of the 10 shadows along with like 5 other pets that havent contributed a whole lot. Mc seems kind of bland. Was originally a civilized guy that proceeds to murder 11,000 people because they’re bad. Mc can move at around Mach 200 or so (I forgot, it’s probably more) And this is just 10 chapters of reading 😭
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The story is just bad, there is literally zero character interaction after the first 2 or 3 chapters (the shikigami and his pets don't count), each chapter is just a boring summary of his off screen grinding, interspersed with MC slaughtering nameless redshirts, nothing has any impact or emotional weight. It's not worth reading.
This is just as great as the other series, but author-san will the adeptus series continue or is it dropped?
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i like this i really do and i know there only 10 chapter right now but it kinda annoying that legit 90% of this fic so far is just training, training test abilitys and more training please for the love of god make the next few chapters ANYTHING but god dam training please
It's seriously good. He is OP, atleast in the YJ universe he is, a bit reckless but he knows that too, let's see what happens in the future..
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It’s honestly really well writtne but I can tell the story is not for me. I hope the author continues his work it is really well done
A wonderful novel set in the world of DC, with perfect grammar and a story without too many plot holes I strongly recommend you read it!!!
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Here's my summary of the book: Great grammar, fluid and well-written combats, and a huge and rich cohesion of words. The story so far is very good, I hope he remains an anti-hero and that this novel isn't a harem. Congratulations on a great book, my only criticism is that it has too few chapters hahaha, I'm looking forward to it.
Better not drop this. I don’t really like DC but the skills chosen and mc lookin like Toji already makes me interested In seeing where this goes.
Goku eta vaina es seria, Hasta el momento me está gustando esta historia, el protagonista tiene una buena personalidad y los poderes están buenos, sigue así.
I don't really like DC/MARVEL, but it's Toji so it's okay x x x x xx x x x xx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author here, disclaimers before going in to the story. The main character is not Toji; he looks like him, so he won't be imitating the way he acts. I still have not decided on a romance or if this will be a harem. Likely not. The story will involve the DC Multiverse starting on Earth 16, the Young Justice TV show. Next Earth will either be Earth 3(Crime Syndicate) or Earth 49(Injustice Universe)
WOOOO a good toji book GIVE ME MORE WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a its the long horse a a a a a a worde requirement a a a a
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I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR AN UPDATE. EVEN THOUGH IT IS NOT WAHT I ASK FOR IT IS GOOD .
Hello Author. I really liked this fanfic novel. it is one of my favorites fanfic novel. can you continue update this novel please 🙏. please don't drop it.
Bri when are you going to update this fanfic it's been awhile and I am still waiting.
I like this fanfiction but the update schedule is annoying I would appreciate it if it continued to update regularly and thank you.
Alright story, kind of misleading with the title. More like really fast dude with op gear from DxD in young justice. MC keeps on gaining new abilities which is a little bothersome considering I came here for a guy with just pure strength Updates seemed to have slowed down. MC just gets 10 shadows technique. Each one being more op. Mc (author) is a big pet lover, which is annoying considering I now have to remember each name of the 10 shadows along with like 5 other pets that havent contributed a whole lot. Mc seems kind of bland. Was originally a civilized guy that proceeds to murder 11,000 people because they’re bad. Mc can move at around Mach 200 or so (I forgot, it’s probably more) And this is just 10 chapters of reading 😭
Spoiler de révélation The story is just bad, there is literally zero character interaction after the first 2 or 3 chapters (the shikigami and his pets don't count), each chapter is just a boring summary of his off screen grinding, interspersed with MC slaughtering nameless redshirts, nothing has any impact or emotional weight. It's not worth reading.
This is just as great as the other series, but author-san will the adeptus series continue or is it dropped?
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i like this i really do and i know there only 10 chapter right now but it kinda annoying that legit 90% of this fic so far is just training, training test abilitys and more training please for the love of god make the next few chapters ANYTHING but god dam training please
It's seriously good. He is OP, atleast in the YJ universe he is, a bit reckless but he knows that too, let's see what happens in the future..
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It’s honestly really well writtne but I can tell the story is not for me. I hope the author continues his work it is really well done
A wonderful novel set in the world of DC, with perfect grammar and a story without too many plot holes I strongly recommend you read it!!!
Mydymtsjtenhdngengengensgnmhmhdndgnhd j hd hnrmhrmrhmrunhrnhrnejgenhenhrmrynyrmhrnhrmgenwgnrh eh genhr egnyrnegngeneyn yngen yj ynegn yn umrym um umrum u tj
Here's my summary of the book: Great grammar, fluid and well-written combats, and a huge and rich cohesion of words. The story so far is very good, I hope he remains an anti-hero and that this novel isn't a harem. Congratulations on a great book, my only criticism is that it has too few chapters hahaha, I'm looking forward to it.
Better not drop this. I don’t really like DC but the skills chosen and mc lookin like Toji already makes me interested In seeing where this goes.
Goku eta vaina es seria, Hasta el momento me está gustando esta historia, el protagonista tiene una buena personalidad y los poderes están buenos, sigue así.
I don't really like DC/MARVEL, but it's Toji so it's okay x x x x xx x x x xx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author here, disclaimers before going in to the story. The main character is not Toji; he looks like him, so he won't be imitating the way he acts. I still have not decided on a romance or if this will be a harem. Likely not. The story will involve the DC Multiverse starting on Earth 16, the Young Justice TV show. Next Earth will either be Earth 3(Crime Syndicate) or Earth 49(Injustice Universe)
WOOOO a good toji book GIVE ME MORE WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a its the long horse a a a a a a worde requirement a a a a
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