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Mc is not making full use of Raphael in the early chapters. A disappointment.
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simply review from me (20 ch) – pros of this story. The author sure made very detalils in the normal moments like when tast a quick in hero academy ,pace it not too fast or too slow, very good, the others character look alive not like robot. the story is interesting I look forward for more. and here we go about cons— I am sure Author didn't read light novel Tensura and simply whatch Anime. Author actually nerft MC. It is not that he nerft to make Rimuru bended well with others , it just he made waste of powers Mc should have like Ultimate skill Raphael,in this skill there are many sub skills such as thought accelerate, parallel mind and more It made this skill is his core skill correct response to various active like the uses of skills, figthing, analysis,and perfect memories. The important thing is that The MINUS of this skill should half-awake by now if she is Ultimate skill and actually talk to MC now. this is one of his powers that he wastes now second is Ultimate skill Beelzebuth he uses it as a rage ability as this Ultimate skill can imbued to a passive attack made it that those who don't have a Ultimate skill can't blocked it, simply put real damages. I know this OP but u can nerft it as you've been doing like more attack power? or make it to stolen energy those who hit with? just don't make him a rage attack it wastes Raphael. simply give him Katana is enough . —Mc posanality is not that likeable why u ask? he doesn't have that much self control,like when he kill a guy that hold him hostage. u can just devour his arm. but no u kill him and there is more like Brunt out his rude thoughts to a girl like he is Mineta in Rimuru body. he don't plan anything ahead it like he a type that'll respond what to come to his way . He isn't creative about his power as he knows that this is Rimuru's power he should know how to use it more creative ways. ( he doesn't have a brain or what ) I have more to read if there are more things to review than I will put it here.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The work itself is cool, I loved it but I still preferred Nejire as the heroine!! buaaaaaa !ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç
First of all this story is great if you don't mind reading rimuru do wakey stuff. And he is over nerfed which is actually good. We don't want to see one punch erase man now do we. The story has some part of trying to be slice of life with echi and comedy stuff in it which might work if you turn of brain and enjoy the ride. Thought you can sometime fell author lost vision of what to do next but he still try his best so can't complain about it. Thought he seriously need a rough time line planned so he can have a vision to were the story will be going next.
Well i have read the fanfic up to chapter 22. the starting was good and so was choosing rimuru's power but it eventually became boring and stupid like if you were just gonna have him use an extremely nerfed beelzebub and a nerfed superhuman strength then what's the point of it. And you are not even using raphael, the only thing raphael did was change his quirk to rimuru's skills. At this point this is just some MC reincarnated into MHA with a nerfed Beelzebub. This is just ruining it for me. Well don't mind me too much and just try to ya'know improve it a little cuz well.. its not like it's bad or anything just that it was boring for me 'cause i wanted it see rimuru's power in use.
Spoiler de révélation
One of the best fanfic I have read in a while 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
The beginning is very promising for me. I really like this story. the writing is also pretty good and I hope to continue. The author keep up the good work.
Mc is not making full use of Raphael in the early chapters. A disappointment.
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simply review from me (20 ch) – pros of this story. The author sure made very detalils in the normal moments like when tast a quick in hero academy ,pace it not too fast or too slow, very good, the others character look alive not like robot. the story is interesting I look forward for more. and here we go about cons— I am sure Author didn't read light novel Tensura and simply whatch Anime. Author actually nerft MC. It is not that he nerft to make Rimuru bended well with others , it just he made waste of powers Mc should have like Ultimate skill Raphael,in this skill there are many sub skills such as thought accelerate, parallel mind and more It made this skill is his core skill correct response to various active like the uses of skills, figthing, analysis,and perfect memories. The important thing is that The MINUS of this skill should half-awake by now if she is Ultimate skill and actually talk to MC now. this is one of his powers that he wastes now second is Ultimate skill Beelzebuth he uses it as a rage ability as this Ultimate skill can imbued to a passive attack made it that those who don't have a Ultimate skill can't blocked it, simply put real damages. I know this OP but u can nerft it as you've been doing like more attack power? or make it to stolen energy those who hit with? just don't make him a rage attack it wastes Raphael. simply give him Katana is enough . —Mc posanality is not that likeable why u ask? he doesn't have that much self control,like when he kill a guy that hold him hostage. u can just devour his arm. but no u kill him and there is more like Brunt out his rude thoughts to a girl like he is Mineta in Rimuru body. he don't plan anything ahead it like he a type that'll respond what to come to his way . He isn't creative about his power as he knows that this is Rimuru's power he should know how to use it more creative ways. ( he doesn't have a brain or what ) I have more to read if there are more things to review than I will put it here.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The work itself is cool, I loved it but I still preferred Nejire as the heroine!! buaaaaaa !ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç ç.ç
First of all this story is great if you don't mind reading rimuru do wakey stuff. And he is over nerfed which is actually good. We don't want to see one punch erase man now do we. The story has some part of trying to be slice of life with echi and comedy stuff in it which might work if you turn of brain and enjoy the ride. Thought you can sometime fell author lost vision of what to do next but he still try his best so can't complain about it. Thought he seriously need a rough time line planned so he can have a vision to were the story will be going next.
Well i have read the fanfic up to chapter 22. the starting was good and so was choosing rimuru's power but it eventually became boring and stupid like if you were just gonna have him use an extremely nerfed beelzebub and a nerfed superhuman strength then what's the point of it. And you are not even using raphael, the only thing raphael did was change his quirk to rimuru's skills. At this point this is just some MC reincarnated into MHA with a nerfed Beelzebub. This is just ruining it for me. Well don't mind me too much and just try to ya'know improve it a little cuz well.. its not like it's bad or anything just that it was boring for me 'cause i wanted it see rimuru's power in use.
Spoiler de révélation One of the best fanfic I have read in a while 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
The beginning is very promising for me. I really like this story. the writing is also pretty good and I hope to continue. The author keep up the good work.
story was perfect till it got dropped. but it is still a good read