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I didn't know what to expect from this book. I like the Main Caracter and the mystery around him. His name give people a tiny pause and then they move on. Please keep up the good work.
10/10 fic, love the progression of the story! The way that this is paced is great highly recommend.
All in all it's good, but why not post it's dropped 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
So far it's really good. I like how the author is integrating other worlds magic into the world of Harry Potter. It's explained well. The only negative take I have is that the author starts using symbols such as, (○_○), during character interactions to demonstrate charachters facial expressions. As an audio listener, it's just painful to go through. It's not a big deal, though. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story so far.
"I really enjoy your work, but it's disappointing to see the updates delayed with excuses that seem a bit weak. I understand life happens, but consistent communication would be appreciated. Your readers are invested in your work and just want to see it continue!"
Updates are really slow. I can see people give a lot of power stones but but no new chapter.[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
I initially enjoyed the start. Was an entertaining read up until GOT. When that got introduced, it went seriously downhill. It overtook MCU. There was so much potential in a second universe like mcu but it had no room to develop since author forced GOT into it. What a disappointment
Awesome!! gotta say love it it’s pretty much a mix of everything it’s so much fun
I like the story, its entertaining. definitely not something to evaluate too deeply tho. it use one of the most OP abilities besides plot armor and thats the "Power of convenience." where everything conveniently seems to workout regardless of how ridiculous it is. that's a staple of a lot of fanfic so it can be overlooked. the author does seem to skim over important details. like the MC murdering 100s of millions of folk through fiery crashes, starvation, dead hospital patients, just recently born babies, etc. from him elevating the world and destroying tech. they kinda just brush this under the rug and the MC gets like a beneficial skill from killing innocent folk. lol I don't mind him killing folk but let there be actual consequences or guilt or something. this happens in one form or other over and over again thru the story so you can't really ignore it completely or id have given a better rating. overall worth a try before judging.
Me ha gustado la historia es una de las mejores que he leído espero que sigas subiendo capítulos me gustaría que también fueran al mundo Naruto
I'd like the first world that they come into contact with is Game of Thrones but was the next one after that since there will be multiple worlds. ps. also the only reason why I didn't give it a higher evaluation is because of the updates I just wish it would update more frequently
This is the best I can to rate your story author. I know Patreon but I can complained all I want while you sit there and smug about it. Good story but I just can't stick around. ( ੭ ･ᴗ･ )੭
Actually I like this fanfiction. But the author is very inconsistent in updating the chapters. So even if you like it , without the consistency of the author you can't appreciate it . Thank you very much . I hope that the author will update it more frequently.
I love this story. its unique and just keeps me coming back for more. You must give it a try.
I don't know what to say about it this FF it's just so good. The story of this FF is very well made. I recommend this FF to all who have not read this FF
its one of the great stories in my library every time I get an update I'm excited so I have been on the platform for like 4 years and this is one of the best I have ever read so give it a try I wont spoil anything but its really good
Esta bien la historia aunque un poco lento pero esta bien ............................ .................................................................................................... ............... ..
its a good novel to world building and all but its not really a need have 1000 years old granny moving around.[img=coins].....................................
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I really like this book. the current development with the Westeros continent is exciting too read. i would suggest adding a strong antagonist and some family background. keep up the good work. Tjillevippen
Spoiler de révélation
A very interesting take on some well known stories, it’s really cool to see as they all clash in this magical world.
Essa novela é muito boa favor atualize mais capitulo ................................. ...................,....................................................................
I beg for more! It’s so damn good! The pace that the world is growing is perfect.
I didn't know what to expect from this book. I like the Main Caracter and the mystery around him. His name give people a tiny pause and then they move on. Please keep up the good work.
10/10 fic, love the progression of the story! The way that this is paced is great highly recommend.
All in all it's good, but why not post it's dropped 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
So far it's really good. I like how the author is integrating other worlds magic into the world of Harry Potter. It's explained well. The only negative take I have is that the author starts using symbols such as, (○_○), during character interactions to demonstrate charachters facial expressions. As an audio listener, it's just painful to go through. It's not a big deal, though. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story so far.
"I really enjoy your work, but it's disappointing to see the updates delayed with excuses that seem a bit weak. I understand life happens, but consistent communication would be appreciated. Your readers are invested in your work and just want to see it continue!"
Updates are really slow. I can see people give a lot of power stones but but no new chapter.[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
I initially enjoyed the start. Was an entertaining read up until GOT. When that got introduced, it went seriously downhill. It overtook MCU. There was so much potential in a second universe like mcu but it had no room to develop since author forced GOT into it. What a disappointment
Awesome!! gotta say love it it’s pretty much a mix of everything it’s so much fun
I like the story, its entertaining. definitely not something to evaluate too deeply tho. it use one of the most OP abilities besides plot armor and thats the "Power of convenience." where everything conveniently seems to workout regardless of how ridiculous it is. that's a staple of a lot of fanfic so it can be overlooked. the author does seem to skim over important details. like the MC murdering 100s of millions of folk through fiery crashes, starvation, dead hospital patients, just recently born babies, etc. from him elevating the world and destroying tech. they kinda just brush this under the rug and the MC gets like a beneficial skill from killing innocent folk. lol I don't mind him killing folk but let there be actual consequences or guilt or something. this happens in one form or other over and over again thru the story so you can't really ignore it completely or id have given a better rating. overall worth a try before judging.
Me ha gustado la historia es una de las mejores que he leído espero que sigas subiendo capítulos me gustaría que también fueran al mundo Naruto
I'd like the first world that they come into contact with is Game of Thrones but was the next one after that since there will be multiple worlds. ps. also the only reason why I didn't give it a higher evaluation is because of the updates I just wish it would update more frequently
This is the best I can to rate your story author. I know Patreon but I can complained all I want while you sit there and smug about it. Good story but I just can't stick around. ( ੭ ･ᴗ･ )੭
Actually I like this fanfiction. But the author is very inconsistent in updating the chapters. So even if you like it , without the consistency of the author you can't appreciate it . Thank you very much . I hope that the author will update it more frequently.
I love this story. its unique and just keeps me coming back for more. You must give it a try.
I don't know what to say about it this FF it's just so good. The story of this FF is very well made. I recommend this FF to all who have not read this FF
its one of the great stories in my library every time I get an update I'm excited so I have been on the platform for like 4 years and this is one of the best I have ever read so give it a try I wont spoil anything but its really good
Esta bien la historia aunque un poco lento pero esta bien ............................ .................................................................................................... ............... ..
its a good novel to world building and all but its not really a need have 1000 years old granny moving around.[img=coins].....................................
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I really like this book. the current development with the Westeros continent is exciting too read. i would suggest adding a strong antagonist and some family background. keep up the good work. Tjillevippen
Spoiler de révélation A very interesting take on some well known stories, it’s really cool to see as they all clash in this magical world.
Essa novela é muito boa favor atualize mais capitulo ................................. ...................,....................................................................
I beg for more! It’s so damn good! The pace that the world is growing is perfect.