Naruto: Asmodeus Template

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Gh0st00

yeah and the thing the guy never told you is that it's a gender Bender the reincarnator becomes a girl and for what it seems to be a female version of Naruto

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Jackleell

No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.

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LukeMorningStar

The author has problem, no offense, but you need Jesus man. ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠

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luanrei22

That was incredibly unsettling to read. If I had the option, I would leave a negative review.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Sleeping_dragon26

More please

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Daoist9Pvk1d

The spelling mistakes are aggressively in your face. Like they're impossible to miss, they're so distracting. There's also this huge system panel each chapter that the author uses to fill word count. You're lucky if even one part of it changes. Obviously, the story is incredibly degenerate, but that's the least of its problems.

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Shiina_Ma4ro

update more often or at least tell us when you will update otherwise a perfect story

LV 4

_narrator

No gender bender tag and futa such thing tag ruined my whole day nightmare for naruto fans

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Aerian

That was incredibly unsettling to read. If I had the option, I would leave a negative review.

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Bapabooey

Dropped this book quicker than I have any other. Author fails to inform readers that the MC is a gender bent Naruto that, apparently by reading the other reviews, turns out to be a futanari. Would have been a good story if it was a guy, but the author had to hide all this to get people to even click on the title. A shame and a scam of a book if you ask me.

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Skiffard

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DaddyCarvz

this author is sick in the brain... this author is sick in the brain...

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Shiina_Ma4ro

a great novel please resume it and good luck

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Kviz_Light

This fic is very cool! I like it very much! When a continue? Please update it! You very good writer! Continue like that. Your stories are best what i was found.

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King_Cambren

This is one of my favorite stories u have and I wiuod love to see more of it it is fantastic

LV 4

Kayapan

Love the story, ignore the losers giving 1 star just for the gender bender, they're little kids lol, other than the grammar i don't really have a problem, and it can easily be solved if you found an editor or maybe started to use grammarly, overrall great read!

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DaoistPHfxL0

everything is fine, the main thing is to download updates more often. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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DaoistaWqATr

great book really enjoyed the storylines

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The_Terrarian_5548

love the story keep it up

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James_Carlson_5574

La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------