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No idea who the original author is but they completely butchered the personality of every character for one they turned Furina into a sadistic pric who interrupted a trial(which Neuvilette just let her do) then she started to stab and cut the MC up, which was just moved past completely after he started simping over her like a dog, Navia acts like Taylor Swift when she is known to be one of the kindest people in Fontaine. The only person who is close to being portrayed correctly is Wriothsley who was in one scene so far
Should've put ooc in the synopsis. Furina is not acting like a Furina at all. Abandoning trial even for Furina is always prohibited. Forced everything but props to your writing tho.
Another Shakespeare wannabe. if you want to hear about tapestries of this and that, a sword fight equal to elegant ethereal dance and beauty blah blah blah... then go ahead and read it. Not my cup of tea.
The moment I read Furina's personality I quit reading and immediately review I love Furina, But this "Furina" is not the Furina I know, and for Neuvillitte I don't know who is this "Neuvillitte". You changed the character's personality COMPLETELY.
No idea who the original author is but they completely butchered the personality of every character for one they turned Furina into a sadistic pric who interrupted a trial(which Neuvilette just let her do) then she started to stab and cut the MC up, which was just moved past completely after he started simping over her like a dog, Navia acts like Taylor Swift when she is known to be one of the kindest people in Fontaine. The only person who is close to being portrayed correctly is Wriothsley who was in one scene so far
Should've put ooc in the synopsis. Furina is not acting like a Furina at all. Abandoning trial even for Furina is always prohibited. Forced everything but props to your writing tho.
Another Shakespeare wannabe. if you want to hear about tapestries of this and that, a sword fight equal to elegant ethereal dance and beauty blah blah blah... then go ahead and read it. Not my cup of tea.
The moment I read Furina's personality I quit reading and immediately review I love Furina, But this "Furina" is not the Furina I know, and for Neuvillitte I don't know who is this "Neuvillitte". You changed the character's personality COMPLETELY.