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Happy Business life
4.8 (10 audimat)
Synopsis
Su Yun, died in an accident... But when she suddenly opened her eyes, she realized that she was in the body of a 17-year-old pitiful girl named Su Yun.
Her clothes and house look like those from ancient Chinese dramas.
She was horrified when she got to know that she was getting married to a really old man. She was disgusted, but she could do nothing to refute her weak body. In a place where laws weren't focused on women at all,
But somehow God took pity on her, and she was sold to a 21-year-old young man named Shen Yu instead. Although the fact that she was sold was heartbreaking for her, a strong woman like her didn't lose hope.
After living with Shen Yu, she realized that Shen Yu wasn't a bad person.
He never made any unreasonable requests and was a hardworking person.
Thinking of how she grew up from rags to riches in her past life, she was determined to make something for herself and Shen Yu.
She started a small food business with Shen Yu. It wasn't as easy as being said.
A certain shopping system followed her to ancient times. Making her life luxurious to certain extents.
Thinking back then, this transmigration was not as bad as she first thought.
"Let's get richer than them all!"
*****
This is original work.
[ On Hiatus, sorry. Dropped too]
It's mainly focused on ancient businesses with modern knowledge.
Characters: Su Yun (17), Shen Yu (21).
[Good-looking, clever, loyal wife X strong, protective, but equally silly husband]
Genre: romance, slice of life, drama
[Arts used in this book aren't mine but taken from Pinterest; I respect the artists.]
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This is a good read with a gripping plot, the only thing I noticed that needs working is the spacing of the paragraph to make it much easier to read, aside that your book have potential and a good description. Keep it up dear Author.. .
I really don't know, what to say about this novel.As this was my first time reading a female lead , romance, drama.I had read once, it was like my Loyal Husband After the divorce.===========================================So this is the thing I wanted to say that I hadn't read any novel with this type a lot and which is based, not in a modern era.The story had a Quite story, like it's good and well paced, i like the chemistry of su Yun and shen yu both liked each other but couldn't say its like who will say first.The chapters are bit too described, like a same sentence is getting expanded, author you need to made a simple flow of the words.The grammer is good not exceptional but better,it needs proofreading.
This story is good and it has potential especially as the author says it is becoming very popular! I agree with others you would benefit from a beta reader to check spelling, punctuation and grammar. Keep going :)
Some parts are bumpy and it would need a beta reader, but I genuinely enjoyed the story. It’s kinda sweet and I took a liking in female lead.
The story is still in the beginning so we are still learning about the characters and the direction of the plot. So far, I think the pacing is good, since they just met it's normal that their conversations are not yet long. My only suggestion is to recheck word spellings. If you write fast, you can use either, grammarly, prowriting aid or quillbot to catch misspellings for you. Looking forward to how the story will progress.
The book is only three chapters and I can already tell it has an interesting twist for us ahead. With how the mc is able to remain calm despite what was happening to her displays her wisdom as someone who has lived a purposeful life before. Though there's still rooms for improvements, author is doing a great job! !
Although there's not much content released yet, it's clear that this story has a very good beginning. I hope the author can maintain this momentum because I'm eager to see more content soon. Also, as other comments have mentioned, the paragraphs in the novel are too long. The author might consider making each paragraph shorter to enhance the reading experience for mobile users.
The writing quality can be improved by spacing out the structures of the paragraph but I liked the flow of how the story was going. Seeing the MC being sold off at the start of the story really brings a good idea of where her character is coming from. Overall the novel is written!
The novel has potential, and the characters are good too. My only suggestion is to break down the longer lines so that the text flows through easily. Overall awesome and I would love to see more.
Volume 1
- 1 Sold 1 years ago
- 2 Marriage 1 years ago
- 3 Shopping 1 years ago
- 4 Vegetables 1 years ago
- 5 Arguement 1 years ago
- 6 Crush 1 years ago
- 7 Preparations 1 years ago
- 8 Tofu Curry 1 years ago
- 9 Opened 1 years ago
- 10 Coustomers 1 years ago
- 11 Transmigraition 1 years ago
- 12 System (part - 1) 1 years ago
- 13 System (Part-2) 1 years ago
- 14 Jin Nian 12 months ago
- 15 Accident 11 months ago
- 16 Babysitting 11 months ago
- 17 Tomato and Eggs 11 months ago
- 18 Origin 11 months ago
Hello, It's author..! If you looking for a sweet couple, hardworking people,Tons of drama and a System..this story is for you. A cute couple aiming for riches.here's the Main Characters...