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Amazing book had to come back to reread it I still hate how rushed it is In the end but it was amazing
I really wish the author hadn’t finished it so quickly there at the end but really good otherwise
It was not a bad story which unfortunately did not end in the best way, but many thanks to the translator for his work. Ps: English is not my main language, I apologize in advance for any mistakes
The book is good for relaxing reading. Of course there are disadvantages.The main drawback is that the author was disappointed in the story and decided to end it unexpectedly. Thanks to the translator for completing his work completely.
What is this thing ? Just one question, why give so many abilities to a character when all the fights are: "A monster appears, Ding +100 xp" End of the fight...
Novel boa Final dercha adegeja Romance etc Que divindade ele tem Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
quality of the writing is bad, and word choice and skill descriptions are terrible.
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Very rare danmachi fanfic elf always human the half elf ok to but in this world elf racist to all race including half elf to i guess elf become young Master
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Well the story is well written but The main chapter is too much PUSHOVER and bit stupid it quite annoying...
I read this book on mtl but author end the story. I hope u can continue this story with his permission.
writing quality is bad and there is no logic to this fic it's not bad translation wise but the nonsense that happens in this fic makes it unreadable like: giving him world ending weapons while he's lvl 1 and then nerfing them
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It's a very good story, it has the potential to be the best danmachi story the writer always keeps it up and if you write good stories like this and other fanfics it would be great
Unfortunately short, the author said that the original ended abruptly. It's a good journey though. Keep up the transitions. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Made it to chapter 10 and gave up cause this is MTL and the novel is kind of edited and badly at that
another op character novel that gets everything handed too him.im amazed that at 40ch he isn't killing gods .boring
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I've just realized after reading 118 chapters that I freaking hate this fanfic. why you gotta make so much of a beta 😕
I expected more from this fanfic. The story is just sooo booring. My brain shut down multiple times while reading this ff. I read about 10 chapters and time is precious. The system is meh and rewards are too powerful. Overall its an average fic. (3/5)
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Come on. Come on. More chapters.
the story you wrote is really interesting, this is the best danmachi fanfic I have ever read. keep up the spirit of the writer.
Despite the spelling and grammar probprms, my main ossue comes feom just how rush, unorganised and just overall messy the story and writing. I can see a good story but man, sometimes things aren't explained, everything is just rushed and overall it feels like completely random at times. Thsir is no clear direction to the story and it feels like sometimes moat of what i am reading is a summary.
Amazing book had to come back to reread it I still hate how rushed it is In the end but it was amazing
I really wish the author hadn’t finished it so quickly there at the end but really good otherwise
It was not a bad story which unfortunately did not end in the best way, but many thanks to the translator for his work. Ps: English is not my main language, I apologize in advance for any mistakes
The book is good for relaxing reading. Of course there are disadvantages.The main drawback is that the author was disappointed in the story and decided to end it unexpectedly. Thanks to the translator for completing his work completely.
What is this thing ? Just one question, why give so many abilities to a character when all the fights are: "A monster appears, Ding +100 xp" End of the fight...
Novel boa Final dercha adegeja Romance etc Que divindade ele tem Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
quality of the writing is bad, and word choice and skill descriptions are terrible.
I would like the author to add chapters 18+ if he can[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very rare danmachi fanfic elf always human the half elf ok to but in this world elf racist to all race including half elf to i guess elf become young Master
Spoiler de révélation Well the story is well written but The main chapter is too much PUSHOVER and bit stupid it quite annoying...
I read this book on mtl but author end the story. I hope u can continue this story with his permission.
writing quality is bad and there is no logic to this fic it's not bad translation wise but the nonsense that happens in this fic makes it unreadable like: giving him world ending weapons while he's lvl 1 and then nerfing them
Spoiler de révélation It's a very good story, it has the potential to be the best danmachi story the writer always keeps it up and if you write good stories like this and other fanfics it would be great
Unfortunately short, the author said that the original ended abruptly. It's a good journey though. Keep up the transitions. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Made it to chapter 10 and gave up cause this is MTL and the novel is kind of edited and badly at that
another op character novel that gets everything handed too him.im amazed that at 40ch he isn't killing gods .boring
🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I've just realized after reading 118 chapters that I freaking hate this fanfic. why you gotta make so much of a beta 😕
I expected more from this fanfic. The story is just sooo booring. My brain shut down multiple times while reading this ff. I read about 10 chapters and time is precious. The system is meh and rewards are too powerful. Overall its an average fic. (3/5)
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Come on. Come on. More chapters.
the story you wrote is really interesting, this is the best danmachi fanfic I have ever read. keep up the spirit of the writer.
Despite the spelling and grammar probprms, my main ossue comes feom just how rush, unorganised and just overall messy the story and writing. I can see a good story but man, sometimes things aren't explained, everything is just rushed and overall it feels like completely random at times. Thsir is no clear direction to the story and it feels like sometimes moat of what i am reading is a summary.
la historia iba bien y todo pero el final fue meh