Douluo : I thought I was invincible but Shura killed me! shota milf

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LaziestMan

well the first five chapter are good I think

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LaziestMan

well the author is trying to explain everything in details and it's already been 15 chapter not even one day has passed in fanfic so if he keeps writing like this we will probably get more than a hundred or even three hundred chapters to read [img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=exp][img=exp]

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Veany

Escreverei em Português (PT-BR) mesmo. Estou achando divertido ler o FF, mas espero que você possa fazer algo que comece estragar a história. Boa sorte!

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Basabaka

everyone with every 1 0 0 power Stones I might post an extra chaptery

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Basabaka

just samelessly giving my self 5 star If any one has suggestions for novel please let me know

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Basabaka

i am sorry if the chapters are from four hundred to six hundreds words

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Basabaka

if anyone thinks the chapter is small they can just write their own novel to read ok!

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AlexPendragon

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Nikolaii

please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original....

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Basabaka

If someone has questions they can ask me

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LaziestMan

Read "Level Up with Pills and Herbs" come and get to know author before he becomes a celebrity in Webnovel

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Basabaka

please tell me how the novel is progressing and what I should add

LV 1

Jackleell

Author, please stop spamming 5-star ratings on your novel to artificially boost its rating. This story is not good; it's lazy, boring, and relies on the same unoriginal systems and easy paths to becoming overpowered

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Asta_4626

Dear Author, artificially inflating your book's ratings with 5-star reviews does not mask its fundamental flaws. The narrative lacks originality and depth, making it a tedious read. The characters are underdeveloped, and the plot relies too heavily on convenient, overpowered solutions. In its current state, this book fails to engage or impress

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JakeKing_11

This story is disappointing due to its unimaginative plot and uninspired character development. The narrative is plagued by repetitive themes and lacks the depth necessary to truly captivate. It falls short of providing a compelling or memorable reading experience. Additionally, the system used in the story seems like a lazy approach to writing, as if it's an attempt to easily profit from patrons