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This is a story that has most of the things you would expect in a cultivation novel, but adds a great twist to the main protagonist( or extra I should say) and adds what I would call a “balanced cheat” creating a main character who doesn’t make the same mistakes as most protagonists would and a figure whose line of thought gives him a very good chance to make it far in the cultivation world without plot armpit.
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Writing Quality: It's written pretty casually and the fact that this is a parody makes the writing style quite suitable. Stability of Updates: The updates are inconsistent. It seems like the author updates whenever he wants. But it seems like it takes around 1 day to 2 weeks before he updates though sometimes, it's several updates at the same time. I hope the updates become more stable. I'm always looking forward to the next chapter and I constantly check if there's a new one in my library. Story Development: The story's decent, it's parody-like. Just hope that there are more factors at play like... what are the MC's plans in the long term? Is there something about to happen to certain places or other characters? Also, the story moves too slowly. Hopefully, it will pick up the pace even if by a little. Character Design: It's as cliche as it gets. It's a Xianxia, the characters act like they're in a Xianxia. Pretty standard stuff, not bad. Especially since the MC pokes fun at certain character tropes like the other MC-like character and everyone else's foolishness like calling out their moves before using them. Amusing. World Background: There aren't many details about the world. The story mostly revolves around the MC and his thoughts about this world. By this world, I meant his immediate vicinity. The novel doesn't talk much about other places like sects, cities, and more. Overall: It's not the best story out there. It's super casual and something that's not meant to be taken seriously. I like this novel so I hope that it updates more consistently. Also, love your ideas, Author. Weights? Milk? Stealth-Archer Build? Great!
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So far so good..it's like a breath of fresh air..a cultivation novel with a worthy Mc that is for once not a brain dead idiot..an Mc that took advantage of a cliché world...can't wait wait for more chapters..and I hope it will be an above 1000 chap novel
an amazing story, I plan sticking with till the end I am looking forward to future updates
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
An excellent novel for lovers of logical cultivators. Without cliches and plot armor. The main character is quite smart and rational but not insensitive. I would really like to see how MK will come up with techniques and skills based on his cheat panel. I really liked it. I hope the author doesn't abandon the book. English is not my native language
thank you for bringing this masterpiece back,........i expect a few ch updated daily as compensation for the previous ....
An excellent novel, I remember this book simply disappearing from my library without explanation................................................................................................
This is a story that has most of the things you would expect in a cultivation novel, but adds a great twist to the main protagonist( or extra I should say) and adds what I would call a “balanced cheat” creating a main character who doesn’t make the same mistakes as most protagonists would and a figure whose line of thought gives him a very good chance to make it far in the cultivation world without plot armpit.
Spoiler de révélation Writing Quality: It's written pretty casually and the fact that this is a parody makes the writing style quite suitable. Stability of Updates: The updates are inconsistent. It seems like the author updates whenever he wants. But it seems like it takes around 1 day to 2 weeks before he updates though sometimes, it's several updates at the same time. I hope the updates become more stable. I'm always looking forward to the next chapter and I constantly check if there's a new one in my library. Story Development: The story's decent, it's parody-like. Just hope that there are more factors at play like... what are the MC's plans in the long term? Is there something about to happen to certain places or other characters? Also, the story moves too slowly. Hopefully, it will pick up the pace even if by a little. Character Design: It's as cliche as it gets. It's a Xianxia, the characters act like they're in a Xianxia. Pretty standard stuff, not bad. Especially since the MC pokes fun at certain character tropes like the other MC-like character and everyone else's foolishness like calling out their moves before using them. Amusing. World Background: There aren't many details about the world. The story mostly revolves around the MC and his thoughts about this world. By this world, I meant his immediate vicinity. The novel doesn't talk much about other places like sects, cities, and more. Overall: It's not the best story out there. It's super casual and something that's not meant to be taken seriously. I like this novel so I hope that it updates more consistently. Also, love your ideas, Author. Weights? Milk? Stealth-Archer Build? Great!
Spoiler de révélation So far so good..it's like a breath of fresh air..a cultivation novel with a worthy Mc that is for once not a brain dead idiot..an Mc that took advantage of a cliché world...can't wait wait for more chapters..and I hope it will be an above 1000 chap novel
an amazing story, I plan sticking with till the end I am looking forward to future updates
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
An excellent novel for lovers of logical cultivators. Without cliches and plot armor. The main character is quite smart and rational but not insensitive. I would really like to see how MK will come up with techniques and skills based on his cheat panel. I really liked it. I hope the author doesn't abandon the book. English is not my native language
thank you for bringing this masterpiece back,........i expect a few ch updated daily as compensation for the previous ....
An excellent novel, I remember this book simply disappearing from my library without explanation................................................................................................