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- Qualité de la traduction
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Not all bad, but sometimes the MC acts in an inconsistent way that doesn't fit his background. It's kind of your stereotypical story with cringe moments. One of my big complaints is that the author has long comments after the last chapter paragraph, which adds to the cost of unlocking the chapter. The chapters lock at 14 Chapter 11. The 14 is because the author has some chapters prior to the story regarding his struggles and newborn son's health. The locked chapters are extra expensive because, after the last story paragraph, other paragraphs follow, which gives thanks to supporters and updates on his struggles. There is no break in the paragraphs to indicate the change, and it can be confusing when reading.
This is your typical Urban story. Failed to ascend to the immortal realm, arriving on Earth. Try to reach the peak of cultivation in this world but beauties randomly pop up. The only difference is the mc being self aware but hr feels so plain. Nothing original
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Not all bad, but sometimes the MC acts in an inconsistent way that doesn't fit his background. It's kind of your stereotypical story with cringe moments. One of my big complaints is that the author has long comments after the last chapter paragraph, which adds to the cost of unlocking the chapter. The chapters lock at 14 Chapter 11. The 14 is because the author has some chapters prior to the story regarding his struggles and newborn son's health. The locked chapters are extra expensive because, after the last story paragraph, other paragraphs follow, which gives thanks to supporters and updates on his struggles. There is no break in the paragraphs to indicate the change, and it can be confusing when reading.
This is your typical Urban story. Failed to ascend to the immortal realm, arriving on Earth. Try to reach the peak of cultivation in this world but beauties randomly pop up. The only difference is the mc being self aware but hr feels so plain. Nothing original
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an awesome read. go for it guys.. the character introduction is so fasinating