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Nah man the more time passes, the more the quality declines, I mean, it wasn't glorious before but now it's becoming catastrophic. The harem, the lack of emotions. I feel like I'm completely detached from the story because of the way it's written. There is no tension, no action. Frankly, I feel like I'm reading the Wikipedia summary episode by episode of the smallville series. Really I pushed this far to see if it was improving but obviously not, so I'll stop reading this. (Stop reading at chapter 112)
This was one of my most highly anticipated fanfics. I was a big fan of Smallville. sadly I was sorely let down. This is just about an mc who is a side character in someone else's story. hes an outsider. no friends. no meaningful relationships. I say none because his presence has never actually changed any of the plot, maybe some small details between plot events BUT LITERALLY NEVER CHANGED ONE EVENT. any story where the plot doesn't change is at most a 3 star story. His GF, who I loved originally, is a joke now. she still thinks he's some human? she's an angel. and he flies and super speeds everywhere. Clark still does the same stuff. dad still dies. they do train earlier than the OG but thats not important. the same people died as the original. when it comes down to it, nothing has really happened that he's done thats of any note. fighting some criminals as a police officer. which has done nothing. Big let down. who wants to read about a side character who brings nothing new to the actually story? just watch Smallville, its better.
I am so glad I finally found a smallville fanfic. I love it, its a well writing story with a steady plot, I cant wait for more chapters.[img=update]
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love this book with all of my heart my only gripe and that's its a weekly update!! ( even tho it's 2 chapters at once it's never enough!!!)
A great story, I loved the concept of 2 minds and 1 body, and each person helping each other without wanting to kill others or themselves. All the best to you, author, and may you continue with this great work that has a lot of potential.
As a fan of Smallville, I like the fact the author can keep the fidelity to the series and still expand this world. Not to mention the character development is good.
My only complaint is that now I'm addicted and I've read all the avaliable chapters
Comment Jonathan peut entendre ce que dit Leo alors que Clark a le contrôl Et pourquoi cette. Haine contre lana ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Its a good Smallville Fanfic if not the best one i so far read. Its funny, enjoyable and easy to read. There are some grammer mistakes but who cares much about some Type error. Its unique or i havent read a fanfic Like this yet that plays in dc/Smallville [img=update][img=update][img=update]I NEED MORE CHAPTERS[img=update][img=update][img=update] I recommend to give it a try
The idea is that in the beginning it is quite interesting that the MC does not completely take over Clark's body, they end up sharing control of the body, until they create the body for the MC, which so far has not happened in 34 chapters, Author said that it is planned for chapter 45 for the MC to get his own body. now the story itself has nothing interesting and literally the MC making his comments about events in the canon, the Author responded to a comment in chapter 7 implying that there will be no change in the canon.
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Excellent fic! I like the really exact way that approaches the cool but also sabotaging personality of almost all the characters in Smallville. Plus you're actually developing the MC instead of just doing it and letting the whole canon happen!
I like you as a writer,because you always finish your work. So i don't have to fear unfinished book from you. And this book is great,keep up the good work bro. And for future project maybe you can write about house of the dragon,game of thrones and MCU.
it's different unique not many smallvile stories I'm hope you publish more chapters
I like the premise of the story, and the grammar is excellent. The only true grievance I have is the progression of the chapters. I just don't know if they're too short or if not enough is happening. Keep it up, Author-san. I'm very interested in how you'll change canon!
I very much like the slice of life type of fiction. but the mc personality of letting everything flow and just giving his point of view on some matters hasn't changed anything. The author just put more characters of different parts of DCverse.
Nah man the more time passes, the more the quality declines, I mean, it wasn't glorious before but now it's becoming catastrophic. The harem, the lack of emotions. I feel like I'm completely detached from the story because of the way it's written. There is no tension, no action. Frankly, I feel like I'm reading the Wikipedia summary episode by episode of the smallville series. Really I pushed this far to see if it was improving but obviously not, so I'll stop reading this. (Stop reading at chapter 112)
This was one of my most highly anticipated fanfics. I was a big fan of Smallville. sadly I was sorely let down. This is just about an mc who is a side character in someone else's story. hes an outsider. no friends. no meaningful relationships. I say none because his presence has never actually changed any of the plot, maybe some small details between plot events BUT LITERALLY NEVER CHANGED ONE EVENT. any story where the plot doesn't change is at most a 3 star story. His GF, who I loved originally, is a joke now. she still thinks he's some human? she's an angel. and he flies and super speeds everywhere. Clark still does the same stuff. dad still dies. they do train earlier than the OG but thats not important. the same people died as the original. when it comes down to it, nothing has really happened that he's done thats of any note. fighting some criminals as a police officer. which has done nothing. Big let down. who wants to read about a side character who brings nothing new to the actually story? just watch Smallville, its better.
I am so glad I finally found a smallville fanfic. I love it, its a well writing story with a steady plot, I cant wait for more chapters.[img=update]
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love this book with all of my heart my only gripe and that's its a weekly update!! ( even tho it's 2 chapters at once it's never enough!!!)
A great story, I loved the concept of 2 minds and 1 body, and each person helping each other without wanting to kill others or themselves. All the best to you, author, and may you continue with this great work that has a lot of potential.
As a fan of Smallville, I like the fact the author can keep the fidelity to the series and still expand this world. Not to mention the character development is good.
My only complaint is that now I'm addicted and I've read all the avaliable chapters
Comment Jonathan peut entendre ce que dit Leo alors que Clark a le contrôl Et pourquoi cette. Haine contre lana ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Its a good Smallville Fanfic if not the best one i so far read. Its funny, enjoyable and easy to read. There are some grammer mistakes but who cares much about some Type error. Its unique or i havent read a fanfic Like this yet that plays in dc/Smallville [img=update][img=update][img=update]I NEED MORE CHAPTERS[img=update][img=update][img=update] I recommend to give it a try
The idea is that in the beginning it is quite interesting that the MC does not completely take over Clark's body, they end up sharing control of the body, until they create the body for the MC, which so far has not happened in 34 chapters, Author said that it is planned for chapter 45 for the MC to get his own body. now the story itself has nothing interesting and literally the MC making his comments about events in the canon, the Author responded to a comment in chapter 7 implying that there will be no change in the canon.
Spoiler de révélation Excellent fic! I like the really exact way that approaches the cool but also sabotaging personality of almost all the characters in Smallville. Plus you're actually developing the MC instead of just doing it and letting the whole canon happen!
I like you as a writer,because you always finish your work. So i don't have to fear unfinished book from you. And this book is great,keep up the good work bro. And for future project maybe you can write about house of the dragon,game of thrones and MCU.
it's different unique not many smallvile stories I'm hope you publish more chapters
I like the premise of the story, and the grammar is excellent. The only true grievance I have is the progression of the chapters. I just don't know if they're too short or if not enough is happening. Keep it up, Author-san. I'm very interested in how you'll change canon!
I very much like the slice of life type of fiction. but the mc personality of letting everything flow and just giving his point of view on some matters hasn't changed anything. The author just put more characters of different parts of DCverse.