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Stumbled upon this little fella of a novel~ 10/10 from just being an insect-type MC😆💖 basically anything nonhuman is my cup of tea, keep up the good work Author-san😌
The story looks very good. There are practically no errors and, till now, there isn't the constant spamming of the status that this type of stories are known for. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ The only thing I don't like that much (just personal preference) is the way skills work. I prefer when the skills are just to show the mutations he got. For example, instead of the bite skill increasing the damage that it does when activated, it just means that he gained a mutation that makes his mandibles sharper and stronger.
Stumbled upon this little fella of a novel~ 10/10 from just being an insect-type MC😆💖 basically anything nonhuman is my cup of tea, keep up the good work Author-san😌
The story looks very good. There are practically no errors and, till now, there isn't the constant spamming of the status that this type of stories are known for. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ The only thing I don't like that much (just personal preference) is the way skills work. I prefer when the skills are just to show the mutations he got. For example, instead of the bite skill increasing the damage that it does when activated, it just means that he gained a mutation that makes his mandibles sharper and stronger.