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No sé dejen llevar por los comentarios, está historia es única e increíble, me.gusta la ideología de este personaje. Además se su desarrollo.de personaje es muy bueno, no se porque tiene reseñas malas.
I have no idea why there are so many one star reviews here. this is very well written for a story on web novel. Granted the main character is a little edgy at times but that is very easily looked past for interesting character development in mark, and a good blend of the comics and tv series as the word. The edginess is also way toned down compared to one of the white haired, red eyed, genocidal, rapist, murderhobo main characters that is so common on this platform. Overall this story is pretty good. It is worth a read, don't skip it because of these other reviews, I almost did.
there is no depth just one dimensional character but the plot is good if the background or development was good
Well the writing style is not good You can search up how to wrote in paragraph or us AI to see how it writes and copy it And honestly cringe
Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢
No sé dejen llevar por los comentarios, está historia es única e increíble, me.gusta la ideología de este personaje. Además se su desarrollo.de personaje es muy bueno, no se porque tiene reseñas malas.
I have no idea why there are so many one star reviews here. this is very well written for a story on web novel. Granted the main character is a little edgy at times but that is very easily looked past for interesting character development in mark, and a good blend of the comics and tv series as the word. The edginess is also way toned down compared to one of the white haired, red eyed, genocidal, rapist, murderhobo main characters that is so common on this platform. Overall this story is pretty good. It is worth a read, don't skip it because of these other reviews, I almost did.
there is no depth just one dimensional character but the plot is good if the background or development was good
Well the writing style is not good You can search up how to wrote in paragraph or us AI to see how it writes and copy it And honestly cringe
Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢Is that the hero's face there in miniature? 🤢
very 1 dimensional character and TV show amber is romance nuff said