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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The Mc likes to act indifferent and cool but hes just another Chinese simp. A girl stole some silver from a young master then said she gave it to the MC(even though she just saw the MC for the first time), the MC resisted being searched and offended the young master. Ultimately, the Mc helped some rich girl(doing so for fun) steal some silver, even though she made trouble for him. Then he gets hunted down by stronger people from the young masters family while the girl watches for entertainment.
The premise is interesting, but the cultivation system is not ever fleshed out, the characters are all annoying, and the translation quality hits the pits after around 45 chapters. Not worth getting into.
Main complaint is the mix up in titles, names, etc all the time. Not consistent. Definitely needs editing but I doubt that will be happening.
Wish fulfillment trash. Only 14 chaps free. Most problems in the first 14 chapters are not only stupid, but could be easily avoided by telling MC's backers or being low key. Ofc, as soon as MC gets a bit of power he immediately goes out to try and slap some faces. Just stupid.
typical cliche shianxia. transmigrated, his own elder sect doesnt like him so he always try to suppress him for whatever reason. no story develepment. already locked at ch14. not worth it
You only get the first 14 chapters for free which seems a bit weird when most other stories will give you around 30 to 100 chapters for free before they start asking for fast passes and coins.
Plain but also annoying. The story is in a rush with nowhere to go except for a checklist of cliches. Details you would want to hear about the setting and MC's past are glossed over. The martial arts is either not well thought out or not well explained, like the author couldnt make their mind up about doing a cultivation novel or a wuxia novel so instead we get an unholy and unexplained mish-mash of both. The system is really not very interesting, plain but also annoying. Maybe the book gets better eventually, but I can't get past this early slog.
No sé explica los niveles de cultivo, el mc pasa de ser un ciudadano común a matar como si lo hubiera hecho siempre y la forma en que explica como hizo o mató a otra persona parece como si tenía mucha experiencia luchando lo cual es ridículo Es el clásico mc que reencarna de un ciudadano común y hace parecer que fuera un dios que reencarnó y tiene experiencia en matar, luchar y maquinar planes, etc
The Mc likes to act indifferent and cool but hes just another Chinese simp. A girl stole some silver from a young master then said she gave it to the MC(even though she just saw the MC for the first time), the MC resisted being searched and offended the young master. Ultimately, the Mc helped some rich girl(doing so for fun) steal some silver, even though she made trouble for him. Then he gets hunted down by stronger people from the young masters family while the girl watches for entertainment.
The premise is interesting, but the cultivation system is not ever fleshed out, the characters are all annoying, and the translation quality hits the pits after around 45 chapters. Not worth getting into.
Main complaint is the mix up in titles, names, etc all the time. Not consistent. Definitely needs editing but I doubt that will be happening.
Wish fulfillment trash. Only 14 chaps free. Most problems in the first 14 chapters are not only stupid, but could be easily avoided by telling MC's backers or being low key. Ofc, as soon as MC gets a bit of power he immediately goes out to try and slap some faces. Just stupid.
typical cliche shianxia. transmigrated, his own elder sect doesnt like him so he always try to suppress him for whatever reason. no story develepment. already locked at ch14. not worth it
You only get the first 14 chapters for free which seems a bit weird when most other stories will give you around 30 to 100 chapters for free before they start asking for fast passes and coins.
Plain but also annoying. The story is in a rush with nowhere to go except for a checklist of cliches. Details you would want to hear about the setting and MC's past are glossed over. The martial arts is either not well thought out or not well explained, like the author couldnt make their mind up about doing a cultivation novel or a wuxia novel so instead we get an unholy and unexplained mish-mash of both. The system is really not very interesting, plain but also annoying. Maybe the book gets better eventually, but I can't get past this early slog.
No sé explica los niveles de cultivo, el mc pasa de ser un ciudadano común a matar como si lo hubiera hecho siempre y la forma en que explica como hizo o mató a otra persona parece como si tenía mucha experiencia luchando lo cual es ridículo Es el clásico mc que reencarna de un ciudadano común y hace parecer que fuera un dios que reencarnó y tiene experiencia en matar, luchar y maquinar planes, etc