One Piece: Bai Ye Deputy Captain of the Straw Hats

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DaoistTFwULJ

Качество написания отличное, стабильность обновлений отличная, развитие сюжета идеальное, дизайн персонажей потрясающий, История мира абсолютно превосходна

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PapaSmurf0700

Let's GO!!!!!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

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CheeseWiz

If you’re second guessing about reading this, don’t. Just read it.

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Drako_0692

The protagonist is useless, he just follows the canon like a child, the world of One Piecw is supposed to be one of adventure and freedom, the protagonist is the furthest thing from that.

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Mr_mysterio

This is very boring, the protagonist is only a second and thinks he looks cool being one, the idea had potential but the MC lacks character and charisma, he does some things out of canon but they are insignificant.

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Nicolas_Bahamondes

You already know a Chinese story, so expect a lot of Chinese idioms, the story is a copy and paste from the original. , only with an extra who talks from time to time

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AirheadPufferfish

this isn't a ff the characters are not themselves and everyone is talking like it's the 70s makes no sense to me, managed to hold until chapter 10 than dropped

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Ur_Short

Awesomely awesomeness awesomely awesome.

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Wide_SHOT

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ZackDKaizo

I don't get it. How in the Frick can you have 72 chapters and no one reads them, some people just don't have taste. You're cool and awesome and I also did my own translation work on another fic, keep on the good work.

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Noah_Theaux

This is a good traduction , without strange name or word ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Arzard

hi it's a good story with an excellent translation, but will you continue the sequel since it was abandoned by its creator?????????????????????????????????????????????

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QueroV

The story is great. The concept of cultivation blends perfectly in the story. But I hope the translator update daily because it is good.

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Joshua_Emman

I love this [img=update][img=recommend] just a question is this an original or translation, anyways looking forward for more chapters

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Magnus_Riddle

Muito legal, 100% divertido, um monge na tripulação de Luuffy muito bom, porfavor não deixe de atualiza sempre.[img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=atualização][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado]

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Bruswick

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Nils

It was fun to read it, can't wait for the next chapters. and the translation is done very well. ........................................................

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ZackDKaizo

The way you translate the story by using refined languaje is truly marvelous. The idea itself is quite innovating and exhilarating, I can barely fathom what will you do with the story from this point onwards. You have my high regards and best wishes, author-sama.