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I'm hoping for a scene where the mc uses his bones if you get what I mean but the beginning few chapters were great and interesting. Fingers crossed I have high hopes for this one
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I enjoyed the first couple chapters but the back and forth between past tense and present and lack of using proper “ “ made some sections hard to read. But I did find myself chuckling and laughing a bit, with some revisions I think this could become an amazing book. Keep it up Author.
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I'm hoping for a scene where the mc uses his bones if you get what I mean but the beginning few chapters were great and interesting. Fingers crossed I have high hopes for this one
I enjoyed the first couple chapters but the back and forth between past tense and present and lack of using proper “ “ made some sections hard to read. But I did find myself chuckling and laughing a bit, with some revisions I think this could become an amazing book. Keep it up Author.