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I have been waiting for a Samurai Game of Thrones fanfic. please don't drop just take your time and don't worry about the harsh criticism.
Really like this concept the system idea is phenomenal if you don’t please continue Im a free reader but if this keeps going u may get my first donation lol keep up the good work man
The story looks really good so far, but I'm holding back any judgment for now. This author has a horrible track record for only pumping out a few chapters and then dropping the fic.
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Keep updating,It has a very interesting premise and text is readable. Mc is also quite good as per 6 chapters.Very interested in how it goes. Please just don't drop it.
So far a good start but with only seven chapters only time will tell the only small nitpick I have is the chapters are short but it's not a really big deal if they updates are fast in my opinion. I'm looking forward to how this will progress hopefully it's not a pump and dump meaning the author will put out a couple chapters and drop it
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Interesting beginning and curious to see how this story will go. I've read novels will main characters summon people from their system so I'm fine, but I could see how some people won't like that.
oh my God this story is amazing I rarely leave comments because it's a waste of time but I had too leave one I jad too rate this as a free story much respect
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the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story
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I need more! It is funny and I like Samurais so win-win. I only don't like that can just spawn People out of nowhere, but still it is an interesting story.
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I read the 7 chapters and holy moly they are good it seems this was dropped but I still recommend reading the chapters it’s a quick read also I like they character of the story really interesting guy anyway good let me rephrase this amazing story and hope to get more
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I have been waiting for a Samurai Game of Thrones fanfic. please don't drop just take your time and don't worry about the harsh criticism.
Really like this concept the system idea is phenomenal if you don’t please continue Im a free reader but if this keeps going u may get my first donation lol keep up the good work man
The story looks really good so far, but I'm holding back any judgment for now. This author has a horrible track record for only pumping out a few chapters and then dropping the fic.
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Keep updating,It has a very interesting premise and text is readable. Mc is also quite good as per 6 chapters.Very interested in how it goes. Please just don't drop it.
So far a good start but with only seven chapters only time will tell the only small nitpick I have is the chapters are short but it's not a really big deal if they updates are fast in my opinion. I'm looking forward to how this will progress hopefully it's not a pump and dump meaning the author will put out a couple chapters and drop it
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Interesting beginning and curious to see how this story will go. I've read novels will main characters summon people from their system so I'm fine, but I could see how some people won't like that.
oh my God this story is amazing I rarely leave comments because it's a waste of time but I had too leave one I jad too rate this as a free story much respect
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Good Story and the wording feels natural...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story
Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need more! It is funny and I like Samurais so win-win. I only don't like that can just spawn People out of nowhere, but still it is an interesting story.
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I read the 7 chapters and holy moly they are good it seems this was dropped but I still recommend reading the chapters it’s a quick read also I like they character of the story really interesting guy anyway good let me rephrase this amazing story and hope to get more