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Écrire un avisI love this series. I cannot wait to see where it goes. it starts off giving us details about everyday life of a typical teenager, but then the magic, the mystery, the tragedy!! I cannot wait for more updates. I am half way through volume 1 and I am HOOKED. if you love sabrina, hookey, witches and magical realism this book is the one for you. just give it a chance!!!
Wonderful writing quality, and the story is very intriguing. The realistic description of teenage life was also very well done. Great work, author!
A mesmerizing tale of young love and hidden magic. Lexi's struggle with her powers and her journey with Leo is beautifully depicted, blending the supernatural with the trials of adolescence.
You have about 45 chapters yet there are barely any views you need to promote your book more also, your writing style reminds me of Wattpad I used to write on there but I no longer do anyway the story is quite interesting but I prefer action and stuff but to anyone that likes romance with some magic in the modern world then I recommend reading this
The story offered an intriguing blend of magic and romance, spanning multiple lifetimes. The characters' struggles with their past and the cycle of destiny added depth to the plot. However, at times, the narrative felt a bit repetitive, revisiting similar themes across lifetimes. More character development and exploration of the magical world could enhance the story. Overall, an engaging read with an intriguing premise.
Your story is heart warming. You gave a glimpse of your story in prologue and it really sparked my interest. I really want to see Lexi and Leo end happily. Of course I wil read further to know the development. Overall, I liked it. 💓💓💓
I agree with one of the reviewers down below. 2.5k with this many chapters is insane, especially because the quality is good! Wish you the best haha On a side note... I had a sneaking suspicion that you were a wattpad author lol just checked the tags. You sort of have that style in your writing and plot. It's kind of a breath of fresh air reviewing this.
Writing quailty makes me jealous. It's really nicely written. plot is not bad, nor too good, but I acutually like this kind of novels.This book is quite underratted, with only 2.3 views and 6 collections. I suggest to promote this book(search on google). or try to use other platforms such as Wattpad ,if you are not looking for a webnovel contract. It may be, because this kind of genre is not popular on webnovel but these kind of books are popular on Wattpad. Don't get discouraged, writing 40 chapters isn't a easy thing to do. (I don't know how people write 1000 chapters for one novel)
The crafting of this writing quality is superb I like how descriptive you are with your characters and I already like where the story is going! with this many chapters, your novel will go far, Although the genre isn't really my type of forte I really like your character design for your main character Lexi really brings up this old high school trope that I read back when I was younger. Please keep writing and do your best.
iam surprised how this doesn't have more views. I mean i used to think that readers want a book with many chapters so that they don't have to wait but 45 chapters an only 2k views sounds illegla. anyway it's a good book aurthor but maybe try to promote it more. wishing u best of luck and success
I did post this earlier as completed. Then took down some chapters to replace them... then realised my mistake and couldn't restore it :( You can check out my other work - Sneek Peak which has all of my reviews!!!! I am shamelessly reviewing my own book... the plot for this was from years ago. when I was about 18. fast forward 10 years I am a better writer, compared to then and with more witch experience 😂 I hope to give a slightly more authentic experience to witches and the craft of course with a bit of magic hands and spells!! although these chapters were planned many things have been changed from what I have written down in my note book. reflecting on this, I hope people enjoy it and continue reading. I will be back with part 2 hopefully soon.
I love this series. I cannot wait to see where it goes. it starts off giving us details about everyday life of a typical teenager, but then the magic, the mystery, the tragedy!! I cannot wait for more updates. I am half way through volume 1 and I am HOOKED. if you love sabrina, hookey, witches and magical realism this book is the one for you. just give it a chance!!!
Wonderful writing quality, and the story is very intriguing. The realistic description of teenage life was also very well done. Great work, author!
A mesmerizing tale of young love and hidden magic. Lexi's struggle with her powers and her journey with Leo is beautifully depicted, blending the supernatural with the trials of adolescence.
You have about 45 chapters yet there are barely any views you need to promote your book more also, your writing style reminds me of Wattpad I used to write on there but I no longer do anyway the story is quite interesting but I prefer action and stuff but to anyone that likes romance with some magic in the modern world then I recommend reading this
The story offered an intriguing blend of magic and romance, spanning multiple lifetimes. The characters' struggles with their past and the cycle of destiny added depth to the plot. However, at times, the narrative felt a bit repetitive, revisiting similar themes across lifetimes. More character development and exploration of the magical world could enhance the story. Overall, an engaging read with an intriguing premise.
Your story is heart warming. You gave a glimpse of your story in prologue and it really sparked my interest. I really want to see Lexi and Leo end happily. Of course I wil read further to know the development. Overall, I liked it. 💓💓💓
I agree with one of the reviewers down below. 2.5k with this many chapters is insane, especially because the quality is good! Wish you the best haha On a side note... I had a sneaking suspicion that you were a wattpad author lol just checked the tags. You sort of have that style in your writing and plot. It's kind of a breath of fresh air reviewing this.
Writing quailty makes me jealous. It's really nicely written. plot is not bad, nor too good, but I acutually like this kind of novels.This book is quite underratted, with only 2.3 views and 6 collections. I suggest to promote this book(search on google). or try to use other platforms such as Wattpad ,if you are not looking for a webnovel contract. It may be, because this kind of genre is not popular on webnovel but these kind of books are popular on Wattpad. Don't get discouraged, writing 40 chapters isn't a easy thing to do. (I don't know how people write 1000 chapters for one novel)
The crafting of this writing quality is superb I like how descriptive you are with your characters and I already like where the story is going! with this many chapters, your novel will go far, Although the genre isn't really my type of forte I really like your character design for your main character Lexi really brings up this old high school trope that I read back when I was younger. Please keep writing and do your best.
iam surprised how this doesn't have more views. I mean i used to think that readers want a book with many chapters so that they don't have to wait but 45 chapters an only 2k views sounds illegla. anyway it's a good book aurthor but maybe try to promote it more. wishing u best of luck and success
I did post this earlier as completed. Then took down some chapters to replace them... then realised my mistake and couldn't restore it :( You can check out my other work - Sneek Peak which has all of my reviews!!!! I am shamelessly reviewing my own book... the plot for this was from years ago. when I was about 18. fast forward 10 years I am a better writer, compared to then and with more witch experience 😂 I hope to give a slightly more authentic experience to witches and the craft of course with a bit of magic hands and spells!! although these chapters were planned many things have been changed from what I have written down in my note book. reflecting on this, I hope people enjoy it and continue reading. I will be back with part 2 hopefully soon.