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itu good, i like it........................................................................................................................................................
Good if you want to waste time. The concept is good but some part have poor execution. 1. MC is well not hateful but annoying. 2. Some story dev is full of plot hole. 3. Many characters like elysia is OOC (out of characters), in some part Elysia like to see beautiful woman cry. 4. poor writing, no, not because translation. i remember reading MTL with worse translation but still better to give better "knife" i think it title is making honkai in modern world without Honkai. Anyway i read this to waste time coz of few readable honkai fic that I haven't read.
great story, decent translation. but what irk me the most is the debuff disguised as buff, and how everyone is more impactful than the mc, its great, the format is more or less like OPM, the mc isnt the focus but the difference between the two is that the mc isnt strong, i guess he is strong not overwhelming in term of brute force alone but no technique. In conclusion its great, just the 'buff' is annoying and the mc is more like a strategist and does not directly solve the problem but relying on others to do so. also the romance is annoying so much teaser but no actual progress all the way to the latest chapter as of now which is 169.
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I NEED MOREEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE T-T ,THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What I like about this fanfic is the reaction of people's and Honaki characters to their own story. and the concept that this world (fanfic) is a result of Otto changing the fate of Kallen in the original.
Great Story I have already read some honkai impact reaction storys but this one is really interessting hopfully I does not get axed or similar as for the translation there are still some rough bits but it is really great and one can undestand everything as for the characters there are some small changes compared to the original story but alltogether it is good but I want the raw name of the story
my head hurts reading this at least put some effort to the translation chatgpt grammarly anything
I didn’t expect this novel to be translated ! Please continue this one it was one of the best making-reaction honkai game ever ! It’s chame that’s alot of chapter was locked in the official Chinese web.
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finding an Honkai translation fanfic is hard and to have a good quality one like this is a blessing, please keep updating this book.
it's a decent fanfic, just some minor mistakes here and there but overall it's good, also a new point of view for fanfiction, instead of the regular it's the world where Kallen live and otto gone.
great story dont give up please. also can you please give og link.........................................................................................
Honkai fanfic will automatically get 5 stars from my hands, And the reviews? Um, Well, the writing quality is at least good and doesn't make me dizzy looking for the meaning of words, the story has high potential with various plot holes visible, which may be explained in future chapters.
Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍
i hope this one good, Finding Honkai Impact fanfic is a bit difficult tho. Hopefully this one will live long enough i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i
itu good, i like it........................................................................................................................................................
Good if you want to waste time. The concept is good but some part have poor execution. 1. MC is well not hateful but annoying. 2. Some story dev is full of plot hole. 3. Many characters like elysia is OOC (out of characters), in some part Elysia like to see beautiful woman cry. 4. poor writing, no, not because translation. i remember reading MTL with worse translation but still better to give better "knife" i think it title is making honkai in modern world without Honkai. Anyway i read this to waste time coz of few readable honkai fic that I haven't read.
great story, decent translation. but what irk me the most is the debuff disguised as buff, and how everyone is more impactful than the mc, its great, the format is more or less like OPM, the mc isnt the focus but the difference between the two is that the mc isnt strong, i guess he is strong not overwhelming in term of brute force alone but no technique. In conclusion its great, just the 'buff' is annoying and the mc is more like a strategist and does not directly solve the problem but relying on others to do so. also the romance is annoying so much teaser but no actual progress all the way to the latest chapter as of now which is 169.
Spoiler de révélation I NEED MOREEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE T-T ,THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What I like about this fanfic is the reaction of people's and Honaki characters to their own story. and the concept that this world (fanfic) is a result of Otto changing the fate of Kallen in the original.
Great Story I have already read some honkai impact reaction storys but this one is really interessting hopfully I does not get axed or similar as for the translation there are still some rough bits but it is really great and one can undestand everything as for the characters there are some small changes compared to the original story but alltogether it is good but I want the raw name of the story
my head hurts reading this at least put some effort to the translation chatgpt grammarly anything
I didn’t expect this novel to be translated ! Please continue this one it was one of the best making-reaction honkai game ever ! It’s chame that’s alot of chapter was locked in the official Chinese web.
❤️🌌❤️❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌌❤️❤️❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️🤣❤️❤️❤️🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️❤️🌌❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️🤣❤️❤️❤️❤️🤣❤️🌌👀❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️👀🌌🌌👀
finding an Honkai translation fanfic is hard and to have a good quality one like this is a blessing, please keep updating this book.
it's a decent fanfic, just some minor mistakes here and there but overall it's good, also a new point of view for fanfiction, instead of the regular it's the world where Kallen live and otto gone.
great story dont give up please. also can you please give og link.........................................................................................
Honkai fanfic will automatically get 5 stars from my hands, And the reviews? Um, Well, the writing quality is at least good and doesn't make me dizzy looking for the meaning of words, the story has high potential with various plot holes visible, which may be explained in future chapters.
Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍
i hope this one good, Finding Honkai Impact fanfic is a bit difficult tho. Hopefully this one will live long enough i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i