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Écrire un avisI can read it without getting a headache from grammar unlike all the other cultivator stories Ive read so far, instant 5 stars, also unrelated, whose the girl in the cover art of the story?
I already read Douluo Dalu, Endless Transmigration, My Power is Upgrading and this one all of your works was awesome Author KEEP IT UP 👍
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The story was pretty good until after the beginning of the canon time, then it just became a bunch of comic relief and no real progression and delving into his power.
ngl i don't understand why the author has to create an op secret organization for every mc of his fanfiction, without even showing how the mc created it, can't the mc go solo for once? I mean it's ok once or twice but it gets boring after some time. In this one for example the mc doesn't even need the organization, if he waited a little bit more he could have done everything with his Kaiju.
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remake kaiju user in the cultivator world?.................................................................................................. ........................................
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Chapter 68. I have to say that this is one of the best ATG fanfics I've ever read. So far the story is very interesting where the MC does not force the storyline such as fighting strong enemies, sects, elders, ancestors or plots that force the MC to develop very quickly so that it makes the story boring. MC creates his own faction that works in the shadows of the world, quite entertaining until they appear in the world from MC's own cult, cool because they are OP OP LoL. Don't worry about MC's character, he's not naive. Actually I have to say it was quite entertaining because he was so airheaded, and his family played well too. Ahh... I really like this. Recommendation!![img=update]
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Spoiler de révélationAs the Author, I have to give this story five stars. This would boost my confidence to write better storyline and development in the future. Although I can't give my reader spoilers, feels free to ask me a question about this story that confuse you ;)
I can read it without getting a headache from grammar unlike all the other cultivator stories Ive read so far, instant 5 stars, also unrelated, whose the girl in the cover art of the story?
I already read Douluo Dalu, Endless Transmigration, My Power is Upgrading and this one all of your works was awesome Author KEEP IT UP 👍
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The story was pretty good until after the beginning of the canon time, then it just became a bunch of comic relief and no real progression and delving into his power.
ngl i don't understand why the author has to create an op secret organization for every mc of his fanfiction, without even showing how the mc created it, can't the mc go solo for once? I mean it's ok once or twice but it gets boring after some time. In this one for example the mc doesn't even need the organization, if he waited a little bit more he could have done everything with his Kaiju.
Great . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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remake kaiju user in the cultivator world?.................................................................................................. ........................................
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Chapter 68. I have to say that this is one of the best ATG fanfics I've ever read. So far the story is very interesting where the MC does not force the storyline such as fighting strong enemies, sects, elders, ancestors or plots that force the MC to develop very quickly so that it makes the story boring. MC creates his own faction that works in the shadows of the world, quite entertaining until they appear in the world from MC's own cult, cool because they are OP OP LoL. Don't worry about MC's character, he's not naive. Actually I have to say it was quite entertaining because he was so airheaded, and his family played well too. Ahh... I really like this. Recommendation!![img=update]
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I like it ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Magnífico como tú anterior trabajo 😁😁😁 ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I don't have problem with this fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 I don't have problem with this fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 I don't have problem with this fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 I don't have problem with this fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
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As the Author, I have to give this story five stars. This would boost my confidence to write better storyline and development in the future. Although I can't give my reader spoilers, feels free to ask me a question about this story that confuse you ;)