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A solid read, but incredibly annoying. Word padding is just purposely insulting at this point. This novel did almost everything right when it comes to it's premise. An immortal doing cultivation just not to be killed or die due to stupid reasons. MC has a whole concept and philosophy of life based on that. Anyway, characters are done nicely, MC is beyond perfect for what the premise says (he's the definition of caution), the world building is a continuous process. The development and where the story is going is interesting. I can say almost everything is as it should be. HOWEVER, THE WORD PADDING!!! I don't know how this novel even was approved and published and translated to English. The word padding and repeating is so annoying. Pick any random chapter, and you'll see the same idea repeated a dozen times. Author says progress of the novel is slow and developments take their time, but it's actually just a lot of useless unnecessary expanding and repeating the same exact thing a million times. If you ignore all the word padding and repeats, then the development is actually decent and even fast. The word padding made it just awful. I haven't read something that does worse word padding than this in a long time.
story is quite good but I gave 1 to story development so overall 4.2 rate is due to the uncanny ability of author to bullshit 🤣 i have never seen any author stretch 1 sentences to a whole chapter.. literally a whole chapter will finish analysing how 1 sentences can be seen from different perspectives 😂😂
I’m up to ch 441. Overall if you are looking for something laid back with not much going on this is the book for you. Mc is overly cautious and while he makes mistakes he does what he can to not make the same mistakes again. My gripes about the story is author will say the same thing 2-3 times back to back sometimes to pad the word count. It’s also said every time mc does research on side occupations that it’s okay because he has all the time in the world to learn anything he wants and practice anything he wants. All the while his cultivation speed is just as fast or faster than people around him… so really his immortality means nothing so far. That stuff aside I do enjoy the story.
It has potential but one sentence is repeated twice or thrice so it kinda boring at reading
I can't really say much about this book but that it's too dead. the mc is not really relatable and some repeat words are.just too irritating. I was expecting a slice of life with intelligent mc and efficient use of immortality..but from where I'm standing...the mc intelligence is too low to be of great use..the future is bleak...☹️😪
I like the immortality concept and this is one of the ones that does it better than most.
raws raws raws please 🙏🏻 I've reached 276 I enjoy the cautiousness of the mc and his method of always staying cautious to survive. Especially as he starts to delve into the multiple avenues slowly but surely.
I particularly really enjoy the story so far. The action is slightly low paced but it really helps building the ambience for later. Some reviews said thst there is a lot of lore dump. I haven't notice that much of it other than 1 chapter in the novel. Back to the review I really reccommand this book to everyone that is bored with the typical fast paced story full of cheats and lack of world development.
pretty good job overall mc can be a bit clunky like his choices are just designed to make it fit with the central theme/ plot also some chapters are a bit of a slow build up, so pacing might not be up to everyones taste.
Obviously I’ll parrot what a lot of others have said. The story is a slow burn and I read over 400 chapters. What ultimately made me drop this title was that it felt like a scam. Three chapters come out every day but it feels like one. It really feels the author writes one chapter and splits it into three and then fills the gaps with junk. If I was the editor for this story I would have taken out most the useless stuff and condensed it down so that people would get what they are paying for. It’s one thing if a story is slower than others buts it’s another if it feels like it’s done on purpose.
The story is good for passing time but the mc is too cautiou almost like he is a coward , it’s annoying sometimes .
This is unfortunate. I enjoy the premise and overall concept of this story. The problem is that this story could be about an MC that has no special power or immortal life and nothing would change. The fact the MC does not age has no bearing on anything in this story. It has never come into effect at all. The only thing it does is let the mc think about how they are safe from time and that's it. Even though he is never in danger of time in the first place. The MC is scared and that's understandable I like a vigilant MC. What I hate though is an MC who has no feelings and has the power to help those around them with little to no effect on them and doesn't. It bothers me a lot. I have read 350+ chapters and the MC repeatedly does this.
SUMMARY :A novel that expand 1sentence to 10 sentences .The things is many novels are fast-paced but this one is like extremely slow and in 1chapter there's only "they greet each other and sip tea" like that.Just boring novel after reading 200chapters
The novel is slow paced so if you don’t like that don’t read. Otherwise, it is great.
Readers may appreciate the philosophical exploration of immortality in a realm where mortality is the driving force behind cultivators' actions. The protagonist's unconventional approach of avoiding direct confrontation to achieve immortality creates anticipation for how the story will unfold.
it is so slow filled with info dump after info dump if you like that stuff this novel is for you me personally find it way to slow
Very slow, very cautious story, but I like that a lot. I also like that the MC's cheat is very minimal. He has eternal life (and eternal youth), but he can still be killed like anyone else. What follows is a cautious MC, and a pragmatic cultivation story. It's good stuff, feels like I've been looking for a story like this for a long time, but I know it may not be for everyone.
There is hardly anything of significance that happened in the 98 chapters I read. Anything interesting or related to world building happened to other characters and the MC only learns of it when he comes back from hiding somewhere and hears the gossip. Otherwise the MC is grinding experience painfully slowly. Two issues I have: the writer repeats statements over and over again, using slightly different words, or many times the same words. All this does is artificially increases word count without adding to the story. For a story where nothing happens over a large number of chapters it is very frustrating to suffer this bad tactic from writers to increase word count. Second issue: the cost of each chapter vs the enjoyment that you get out of it is totally imbalanced. Why would I spend money when it takes twenty chapters for some minor thing to happen? If you’re going to read this, save your money, and use it only when the story is free. Or wait for the story to have 500 chapters before investing.
true to its word really a good novel if u are gonna read this be prepared for a slow and fulfilling development no unnecessary plots just a cautious mc and for pepople who want to read novel out of the habit of reading it everyday it's for u guys the author said that he will preserve till infinity so we can expect it to be not dropped unless he goes back on his words
It's just boring. MC's cheat doesn't really exist since we all know MC don't die since that'll end the story. So far just another cultivation climb without enough character development of both MC and side characters.
So far... it starts so well. The MC is aware of the Cultivation World pitfalls and smartly live in such a chaotic world.
Honestly a great start and amazing concept but it’s ruined by the Mc being so “cautious”. It really felt like I was watching grass grow or paint dry. It’s just resident sleeper the longer you read it.
A solid read, but incredibly annoying. Word padding is just purposely insulting at this point. This novel did almost everything right when it comes to it's premise. An immortal doing cultivation just not to be killed or die due to stupid reasons. MC has a whole concept and philosophy of life based on that. Anyway, characters are done nicely, MC is beyond perfect for what the premise says (he's the definition of caution), the world building is a continuous process. The development and where the story is going is interesting. I can say almost everything is as it should be. HOWEVER, THE WORD PADDING!!! I don't know how this novel even was approved and published and translated to English. The word padding and repeating is so annoying. Pick any random chapter, and you'll see the same idea repeated a dozen times. Author says progress of the novel is slow and developments take their time, but it's actually just a lot of useless unnecessary expanding and repeating the same exact thing a million times. If you ignore all the word padding and repeats, then the development is actually decent and even fast. The word padding made it just awful. I haven't read something that does worse word padding than this in a long time.
story is quite good but I gave 1 to story development so overall 4.2 rate is due to the uncanny ability of author to bullshit 🤣 i have never seen any author stretch 1 sentences to a whole chapter.. literally a whole chapter will finish analysing how 1 sentences can be seen from different perspectives 😂😂
I’m up to ch 441. Overall if you are looking for something laid back with not much going on this is the book for you. Mc is overly cautious and while he makes mistakes he does what he can to not make the same mistakes again. My gripes about the story is author will say the same thing 2-3 times back to back sometimes to pad the word count. It’s also said every time mc does research on side occupations that it’s okay because he has all the time in the world to learn anything he wants and practice anything he wants. All the while his cultivation speed is just as fast or faster than people around him… so really his immortality means nothing so far. That stuff aside I do enjoy the story.
It has potential but one sentence is repeated twice or thrice so it kinda boring at reading
I can't really say much about this book but that it's too dead. the mc is not really relatable and some repeat words are.just too irritating. I was expecting a slice of life with intelligent mc and efficient use of immortality..but from where I'm standing...the mc intelligence is too low to be of great use..the future is bleak...☹️😪
I like the immortality concept and this is one of the ones that does it better than most.
raws raws raws please 🙏🏻 I've reached 276 I enjoy the cautiousness of the mc and his method of always staying cautious to survive. Especially as he starts to delve into the multiple avenues slowly but surely.
I particularly really enjoy the story so far. The action is slightly low paced but it really helps building the ambience for later. Some reviews said thst there is a lot of lore dump. I haven't notice that much of it other than 1 chapter in the novel. Back to the review I really reccommand this book to everyone that is bored with the typical fast paced story full of cheats and lack of world development.
pretty good job overall mc can be a bit clunky like his choices are just designed to make it fit with the central theme/ plot also some chapters are a bit of a slow build up, so pacing might not be up to everyones taste.
Obviously I’ll parrot what a lot of others have said. The story is a slow burn and I read over 400 chapters. What ultimately made me drop this title was that it felt like a scam. Three chapters come out every day but it feels like one. It really feels the author writes one chapter and splits it into three and then fills the gaps with junk. If I was the editor for this story I would have taken out most the useless stuff and condensed it down so that people would get what they are paying for. It’s one thing if a story is slower than others buts it’s another if it feels like it’s done on purpose.
The story is good for passing time but the mc is too cautiou almost like he is a coward , it’s annoying sometimes .
This is unfortunate. I enjoy the premise and overall concept of this story. The problem is that this story could be about an MC that has no special power or immortal life and nothing would change. The fact the MC does not age has no bearing on anything in this story. It has never come into effect at all. The only thing it does is let the mc think about how they are safe from time and that's it. Even though he is never in danger of time in the first place. The MC is scared and that's understandable I like a vigilant MC. What I hate though is an MC who has no feelings and has the power to help those around them with little to no effect on them and doesn't. It bothers me a lot. I have read 350+ chapters and the MC repeatedly does this.
SUMMARY :A novel that expand 1sentence to 10 sentences .The things is many novels are fast-paced but this one is like extremely slow and in 1chapter there's only "they greet each other and sip tea" like that.Just boring novel after reading 200chapters
The novel is slow paced so if you don’t like that don’t read. Otherwise, it is great.
Readers may appreciate the philosophical exploration of immortality in a realm where mortality is the driving force behind cultivators' actions. The protagonist's unconventional approach of avoiding direct confrontation to achieve immortality creates anticipation for how the story will unfold.
it is so slow filled with info dump after info dump if you like that stuff this novel is for you me personally find it way to slow
Very slow, very cautious story, but I like that a lot. I also like that the MC's cheat is very minimal. He has eternal life (and eternal youth), but he can still be killed like anyone else. What follows is a cautious MC, and a pragmatic cultivation story. It's good stuff, feels like I've been looking for a story like this for a long time, but I know it may not be for everyone.
There is hardly anything of significance that happened in the 98 chapters I read. Anything interesting or related to world building happened to other characters and the MC only learns of it when he comes back from hiding somewhere and hears the gossip. Otherwise the MC is grinding experience painfully slowly. Two issues I have: the writer repeats statements over and over again, using slightly different words, or many times the same words. All this does is artificially increases word count without adding to the story. For a story where nothing happens over a large number of chapters it is very frustrating to suffer this bad tactic from writers to increase word count. Second issue: the cost of each chapter vs the enjoyment that you get out of it is totally imbalanced. Why would I spend money when it takes twenty chapters for some minor thing to happen? If you’re going to read this, save your money, and use it only when the story is free. Or wait for the story to have 500 chapters before investing.
true to its word really a good novel if u are gonna read this be prepared for a slow and fulfilling development no unnecessary plots just a cautious mc and for pepople who want to read novel out of the habit of reading it everyday it's for u guys the author said that he will preserve till infinity so we can expect it to be not dropped unless he goes back on his words
It's just boring. MC's cheat doesn't really exist since we all know MC don't die since that'll end the story. So far just another cultivation climb without enough character development of both MC and side characters.
So far... it starts so well. The MC is aware of the Cultivation World pitfalls and smartly live in such a chaotic world.
Honestly a great start and amazing concept but it’s ruined by the Mc being so “cautious”. It really felt like I was watching grass grow or paint dry. It’s just resident sleeper the longer you read it.