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Thanks for the interesting read i am on chapter 19 and its awesome especially because the MC Knows what He wants to do... I am actually worried If He would remember the existence of the Danmachi world should He have read about it after He gets His Falna. And even If not considering what Kind of Monsters He Has killed i would say He is Always cautious otherwise how would He have done it anyway with the strongest Monsters such as the Dragons and demons which i am certain are actually God and Goddess of danmachi Level because He casually shruged of Freya's Charm.
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Well I really liked it and how gritty it was, especially the part about him being the first human to get where he got. Then you go and make him a non human. I get why you did it, but because of that I now find it uninteresting to read. The premise was great up until the dan machi part. I really wish you just had him strengthen his body without all the animal feature stuff. It would have been cool to see him still as a human survivor.
Estou ansioso para mais autor-sama, quero que ele mostre seu poder aos aventureiros e deuses.
5 stars for the effort. Simply not my type of novel, the character until chapters 20+ is an old and traumatized monster, and I don't see the guy getting fixed soon. Thank you for reading and the effort on your part, author.
Thanks for the interesting read i am on chapter 19 and its awesome especially because the MC Knows what He wants to do... I am actually worried If He would remember the existence of the Danmachi world should He have read about it after He gets His Falna. And even If not considering what Kind of Monsters He Has killed i would say He is Always cautious otherwise how would He have done it anyway with the strongest Monsters such as the Dragons and demons which i am certain are actually God and Goddess of danmachi Level because He casually shruged of Freya's Charm.
Spoiler de révélation Well I really liked it and how gritty it was, especially the part about him being the first human to get where he got. Then you go and make him a non human. I get why you did it, but because of that I now find it uninteresting to read. The premise was great up until the dan machi part. I really wish you just had him strengthen his body without all the animal feature stuff. It would have been cool to see him still as a human survivor.
Estou ansioso para mais autor-sama, quero que ele mostre seu poder aos aventureiros e deuses.
5 stars for the effort. Simply not my type of novel, the character until chapters 20+ is an old and traumatized monster, and I don't see the guy getting fixed soon. Thank you for reading and the effort on your part, author.