3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
Consider this a private message I wrote to the author. I think you're having some trouble developing the story. The main focus of the novel is on Kakashi's brother. Being Kakashi's brother creates a butterfly effect. literally the future changes almost completely. But we do not see the mc, we only see the events going on around us. And these events are not things that the MC does, but things that happen in the main manga. The author just detailed these. if the. It would be okay if I thought that someone who had already watched or read Naruto would read this novel, but I don't think so. You should not distract the reader, especially in the early chapters.
Greetings, dear readers!Allow me to introduce you to "Enigma of Tsukirai Hatake." Tsukirai's journey has only just begun, and trust me, there's much more to his story than meets the eye.As you follow Tsukirai's transformation, you'll uncover a world of hidden depths, unique characters, and unexpected twists. But here's the catch - just like life itself, not everything is as straightforward as it seems.I won't give away the surprises, but I promise you this: there are mysteries awaiting you, ready to unravel. Join Tsukirai as he navigates this enigmatic world, and remember, your thoughts and questions are always valued in the comments section.Get ready for a journey filled with curiosity, wonder, and a touch of the unknown.Happy reading!Yours in mystery,PURPLE 🟣 SPLINTER.
Great world building🫡🫡, but if you focus largely on it and dont the show the mc part in the story, it quickly gets repetitive.
Consider this a private message I wrote to the author. I think you're having some trouble developing the story. The main focus of the novel is on Kakashi's brother. Being Kakashi's brother creates a butterfly effect. literally the future changes almost completely. But we do not see the mc, we only see the events going on around us. And these events are not things that the MC does, but things that happen in the main manga. The author just detailed these. if the. It would be okay if I thought that someone who had already watched or read Naruto would read this novel, but I don't think so. You should not distract the reader, especially in the early chapters.
Greetings, dear readers!Allow me to introduce you to "Enigma of Tsukirai Hatake." Tsukirai's journey has only just begun, and trust me, there's much more to his story than meets the eye.As you follow Tsukirai's transformation, you'll uncover a world of hidden depths, unique characters, and unexpected twists. But here's the catch - just like life itself, not everything is as straightforward as it seems.I won't give away the surprises, but I promise you this: there are mysteries awaiting you, ready to unravel. Join Tsukirai as he navigates this enigmatic world, and remember, your thoughts and questions are always valued in the comments section.Get ready for a journey filled with curiosity, wonder, and a touch of the unknown.Happy reading!Yours in mystery,PURPLE 🟣 SPLINTER.
Great world building🫡🫡, but if you focus largely on it and dont the show the mc part in the story, it quickly gets repetitive.