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Just want to say thank you for supporting this book. Let's aim for 1M views together! Sorry that I can't upload frequently as I got busy with my work, but I promise that this work will find the ending! Thank you for understanding ^_^
I find this story interesting, and the FL and ML, even if they are not in good terms, their hatred is not unrational. They are still considerate toward each other, like human supposed to in certain cases.
I always like the mafia theme-based story. I came across this while scrolling. It's fun enough to read. Have a nice day and keep on uploading, please.
I like how the FL is and of course, nothing can beat the icy cold Ml. But the ML is not all that unreasonable at all. He can be understanding at times too.
Thank you for inviting me to review this piece. Like your previous work and try this one. It seems promising just reading a few chapters. Make me wonder what will happen next.
I wonder where the story is as I read in the other link. Think it's already gone. Thankfully still here. This new version is much more interesting by the way. Great.
She deals and adapts to the situation quite well. It's not too dramatic or unreasonable at all. Go Ariana!
I like the siblings' interaction. I am curious about how she manages herself in the new world. Thankfully, she didn't die in car crash like most isekai story 🤣
The new version is better than before. The FL character is more active and likeable!
Hello everyone. This is Aira. Right now, I'm doing major editing for this book from Chapter 1 - the current chapter. I do proofreading and rewriting some parts to make the story more interesting. So, while waiting for the new chapter, how about rereading the whole book again? I promise you will not regret it. Thank you for supporting! ^_^
Just want to say thank you for supporting this book. Let's aim for 1M views together! Sorry that I can't upload frequently as I got busy with my work, but I promise that this work will find the ending! Thank you for understanding ^_^
I find this story interesting, and the FL and ML, even if they are not in good terms, their hatred is not unrational. They are still considerate toward each other, like human supposed to in certain cases.
I always like the mafia theme-based story. I came across this while scrolling. It's fun enough to read. Have a nice day and keep on uploading, please.
I like how the FL is and of course, nothing can beat the icy cold Ml. But the ML is not all that unreasonable at all. He can be understanding at times too.
Thank you for inviting me to review this piece. Like your previous work and try this one. It seems promising just reading a few chapters. Make me wonder what will happen next.
I wonder where the story is as I read in the other link. Think it's already gone. Thankfully still here. This new version is much more interesting by the way. Great.
She deals and adapts to the situation quite well. It's not too dramatic or unreasonable at all. Go Ariana!
I like the siblings' interaction. I am curious about how she manages herself in the new world. Thankfully, she didn't die in car crash like most isekai story 🤣
The new version is better than before. The FL character is more active and likeable!
Hello everyone. This is Aira. Right now, I'm doing major editing for this book from Chapter 1 - the current chapter. I do proofreading and rewriting some parts to make the story more interesting. So, while waiting for the new chapter, how about rereading the whole book again? I promise you will not regret it. Thank you for supporting! ^_^