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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Not bad, you just need to review the translation because it's a bit chaotic, but also, I notice that the story becomes deeper as the chapters progress so it's not too much
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A good story overall with an interesting plot and great world building.
LV 1 ![Badge]()
Not bad, you just need to review the translation because it's a bit chaotic, but also, I notice that the story becomes deeper as the chapters progress so it's not too much
Spoiler de révélation
A good story overall with an interesting plot and great world building.