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Story is boring overall. BUT Author is great i must say. He make Uchiha Itachi truly reborn. If you read any ff with itachi reincarnated in another world you will notice that he just repeat his old self, just a dead shell, like he always was. but Author disassembled and reassembled itachi's character brick by brick. He gave character new life and evolved it. His zanpakto perfectly helped him to do it. Blade mirroring soul. Process was gradual and tangeable nor rushed nor ridiculous. I recommend.
So since the romance tag is still there am I right to assume that there will be romance? Otherwise you should remove it unless there WILL be romance. It just leads people on... "I eate 3 stars for each when I haven't read it yet prior to commenting"
I don’t often leave reviews, but this one definitely deserves it! I originally started reading out of boredom, but the rating initially put me off because, to me, a 4.6 seemed rather average. However, after reading all the chapters in just two days, I find it hard to believe this story has only a 4.6 rating. The character interactions and the overall structure of the story are remarkable, and honestly, I think this is one of the best Bleach novels I’ve ever read. But what truly stands out is how perfectly you captured Itachi’s character. Throughout the story, it genuinely felt like I was reading about Itachi himself, never once feeling out of place or questioning his behavior with thoughts like, "That's not how Itachi would act." Hats off to you for that! I can only imagine how much time you’ve poured into each chapter, especially considering how well everything fits together, from his power-ups to how you integrated them into the plot—it all made perfect sense. I was equally impressed with how you portrayed the other characters, not just Itachi. Aizen, in particular, was spot on. Even the intellectual battles between the characters were nothing short of brilliant. This story is absolutely a must-read. Why it’s still so underrated, is beyond me!
Lo escribo en español por que me da pereza hacerlo en Inglés. Pará empezar, es un buen fanfic en General, Itachi esta bien introducido en el mundo de Bleach, y aun que toma varias decisiones que el Itachi Original sin dudas no tomaría, estas son mínimas. El desarrollo de la historia si bien es algo lento, almenos esta bien construido y no hay tantos saltos de tiempo innecesarios, lo que nos permite apreciar el Crecimiento de Itachi en cuanto a poder y como PERSONA, se ve el cambio de este a lo largo de la historia, de manera mínima al principio, para luego culminar en el momento que este obtiene su Bankai, bastante bien desarrollado para lo poco que personalmente esperaba. Yo lo recomiendo para cualquier Fanático de Bleach, si bien no es lo mejor de lo mejor, (Ya que hasta ahora no he encontrado un buen Fic de Bleach) si es bastante entretenido, así que darle una oportunidad.
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The way you introduce the powers of the mangekyō Sharingan into the world of Bleach is something, I think it's creative ,the personality of itachi in the story is very well done from what I saw (I don't know his personality extremely well) but as I read it, from what I believe it is very good. Very good to spend your time☕
I am enjoying a lot this story. at first I didn't have much hope but the story is very well written and the characters too. I just want to know who is the love interest, I hope it's yoruichi.
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To be completely frank I am stunned at how good this fanfic is. At first I just wanted to find something Bleach related to read and I was met with this pleasant surprise. It’s such a breath of fresh air compared to all those transmigration fanfics where the MC automatically knows everything. While reading I even feared reaching the end of the current chapters available because after each chapter I just wanted to keep going. The way you placed Itachi into Soul Society and had him adapt to this new world and a good pace that wasn’t too fast or too slow (in my opinion) was just perfect. On top of that I love the way you perfectly expressed Itachi’s character to the point it actually feels like the Itachi I know with his philosophy and everything. Watching him begin to change his point of view and begin to be more trustful towards others after years of being alone and distrustful to the entire world just makes me want to see how far he will go in the future. I don’t exactly know what you’re doing with the trial for his Bankai but I have to say I am excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and thank you for blessing me with this creation🫡
Free 5 Stars, I just wanted to know if this was inspired by the story, Eyes of the Soul by operation meteor?
This book is a piece of treasure and the author is a magician. He has replicated Itachi's character to near perfection. Not just that, he has integrated him to the story quite seamlessly as well. This is easily one of the best fanfics out there.
Nice I have come to a conclusion that I need to know luffy's and what I ment to be doing it for the update I have to tell you that I need to know luffy's and how to summon the process to the police to help me out of the rings heroes of middle earth and the aircon in gym makes you so cold and you are a little clueless with the face of the rings heroes. Copy pasta
Dialogues are great, MC is great, side characters are not unnatural, the pacing is good.
honestly one of the best interpretations of how Itachi's mind works in an unfamiliar world and how he tries to blend in while trying not to be consumed by his sin.
Muy buen fanfic la verdad al principio no le tenía mucha fé, pero es muy bueno la forma en que estás desarrollando la historia y el capitulo en que quisieron jugarle una mala pasada y verlo como culpable estubo muy aunque hubiera preferido que si se fuera de la sociedad de almas digo después de todo lo que a pasado es como si estuviera repitiendo sus errores otra vez pero esperemos y si tengas alguna buena idea
Good job author. From one fellow author to another, keep it up. This is likely one of the best fics I've read this year and would like to see more👍👍👍
disappointment, that's what I feel, Itachi is acting stupid, firstly he is too insensitive, Itachi is a kind person, he is a complete pacifist, in the Naruto world he had to play the role of a villain, but in this world I don’t see a situation where he can just stand and watch how people die, but most of all I hate how this “shinobi” collects information, or rather, he doesn’t do this, even at the very beginning he could have learned a lot more from his grandfather, but he doesn’t do it, for some reason he fights with the Shinigami, hides, I don’t understand the logic of his actions, in the society of souls everyone knows about the Shinigami, the academy and other information that Itachi is thinking about, why rack your brains if you can go to the academy and find out everything there, even if you don’t want to be a Shinigami, you can simply not graduate from the academy, in general, Itachi is behaving stupidly, and for this character this is not permissible
The novel captures Itachi's character quite well, of course there is some slight additions but that is part of the authors interpretation. The story is slow paced initially but it is there for a good reason and I insist on you trying this novel out. It displays an accurate reflection of other Bleach characters as well and overall the author should be given props for their precision in authentic reflection of their unique personalities. Overall, I highly recommend it.
I love this ff because it does just wing it on Itachi’s personality and sticks to it, i hope you keep going on this novel, we just need this ff to be more exposed to people so i suggest you ad more tags that line up with this novel, like antihero, or killer, or other things
good writing, but the pacing is too slow. It feels like I'm reading repetitive chapters of Itachi's brooding. The power levels also don't add up. It was insulting that even without shikai and not a swordsman himself, he still could stood his ground against centuries old Captains and get away with it. Updates seem regular which is nice.
Read 48 chapters so far so here’s my opinion: 1-Characters: The author captured each character’s personality perfectly even though I think he made Itachi a little bit colder than in Naruto 2-Powers: Itachi is progressing neatly and his powers are entertaining so far(he is becoming stronger not too slow not too fast) 3- Pace: In my opinion the pace is unhumanly slow to the point where it could be a huge problem and if it continues the same we would need at least 500 to reach cannon(The story is set before Aizen becomes a captain) But I hope the story would kick off soon. 4-Fighting scenes: Each fight have been entertaining and not too draged nor too fast, perfect and the author greatly showed Itachi’s analytical side and intelligence in or out of fights Over all 9/10 , the only thing the story needs is a bit faster pace and mote chapters.
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Well to start off I believe you captured Itachi very well his mindset and its not something stupid like anime logic even with the Bleach character are writen well I have high hopes for this fic and ill keep sending PS Also author i believe you can start a Power stone goals for chapters
'Crows x Souls' - my second story focuses on Itachi crossing over to the Soul Society of the Bleach verse after releasing the Edō Tensei during the 4th Great Ninja War.One of the few takeways from this fic is that I want to make it as simple and engaging as I can get it and to that end I'll try not to stray from the initial focus of the story and keep Itachi’s personality as original as possible, even with due change in character development.Thers's romance but I'll probably drag it out until I'm sure it will be great addition to the story.On the subject of keeping Itachi’s character as original as possible, that means most of the Sharingan specialties won't be focused on as Itachi, like every other major Uchiha, had a specific way of using his eyes, and his specialty is very obvious.Give it a try and tell me what you think. I'll probably take this one slow not to burn myself out too quickly.
Story is boring overall. BUT Author is great i must say. He make Uchiha Itachi truly reborn. If you read any ff with itachi reincarnated in another world you will notice that he just repeat his old self, just a dead shell, like he always was. but Author disassembled and reassembled itachi's character brick by brick. He gave character new life and evolved it. His zanpakto perfectly helped him to do it. Blade mirroring soul. Process was gradual and tangeable nor rushed nor ridiculous. I recommend.
So since the romance tag is still there am I right to assume that there will be romance? Otherwise you should remove it unless there WILL be romance. It just leads people on... "I eate 3 stars for each when I haven't read it yet prior to commenting"
I don’t often leave reviews, but this one definitely deserves it! I originally started reading out of boredom, but the rating initially put me off because, to me, a 4.6 seemed rather average. However, after reading all the chapters in just two days, I find it hard to believe this story has only a 4.6 rating. The character interactions and the overall structure of the story are remarkable, and honestly, I think this is one of the best Bleach novels I’ve ever read. But what truly stands out is how perfectly you captured Itachi’s character. Throughout the story, it genuinely felt like I was reading about Itachi himself, never once feeling out of place or questioning his behavior with thoughts like, "That's not how Itachi would act." Hats off to you for that! I can only imagine how much time you’ve poured into each chapter, especially considering how well everything fits together, from his power-ups to how you integrated them into the plot—it all made perfect sense. I was equally impressed with how you portrayed the other characters, not just Itachi. Aizen, in particular, was spot on. Even the intellectual battles between the characters were nothing short of brilliant. This story is absolutely a must-read. Why it’s still so underrated, is beyond me!
Lo escribo en español por que me da pereza hacerlo en Inglés. Pará empezar, es un buen fanfic en General, Itachi esta bien introducido en el mundo de Bleach, y aun que toma varias decisiones que el Itachi Original sin dudas no tomaría, estas son mínimas. El desarrollo de la historia si bien es algo lento, almenos esta bien construido y no hay tantos saltos de tiempo innecesarios, lo que nos permite apreciar el Crecimiento de Itachi en cuanto a poder y como PERSONA, se ve el cambio de este a lo largo de la historia, de manera mínima al principio, para luego culminar en el momento que este obtiene su Bankai, bastante bien desarrollado para lo poco que personalmente esperaba. Yo lo recomiendo para cualquier Fanático de Bleach, si bien no es lo mejor de lo mejor, (Ya que hasta ahora no he encontrado un buen Fic de Bleach) si es bastante entretenido, así que darle una oportunidad.
Loved it. Your writing is 20/10. Loved the pace of the story. Do give it a read...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The way you introduce the powers of the mangekyō Sharingan into the world of Bleach is something, I think it's creative ,the personality of itachi in the story is very well done from what I saw (I don't know his personality extremely well) but as I read it, from what I believe it is very good. Very good to spend your time☕
I am enjoying a lot this story. at first I didn't have much hope but the story is very well written and the characters too. I just want to know who is the love interest, I hope it's yoruichi.
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Spoiler de révélation To be completely frank I am stunned at how good this fanfic is. At first I just wanted to find something Bleach related to read and I was met with this pleasant surprise. It’s such a breath of fresh air compared to all those transmigration fanfics where the MC automatically knows everything. While reading I even feared reaching the end of the current chapters available because after each chapter I just wanted to keep going. The way you placed Itachi into Soul Society and had him adapt to this new world and a good pace that wasn’t too fast or too slow (in my opinion) was just perfect. On top of that I love the way you perfectly expressed Itachi’s character to the point it actually feels like the Itachi I know with his philosophy and everything. Watching him begin to change his point of view and begin to be more trustful towards others after years of being alone and distrustful to the entire world just makes me want to see how far he will go in the future. I don’t exactly know what you’re doing with the trial for his Bankai but I have to say I am excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and thank you for blessing me with this creation🫡
Free 5 Stars, I just wanted to know if this was inspired by the story, Eyes of the Soul by operation meteor?
This book is a piece of treasure and the author is a magician. He has replicated Itachi's character to near perfection. Not just that, he has integrated him to the story quite seamlessly as well. This is easily one of the best fanfics out there.
Nice I have come to a conclusion that I need to know luffy's and what I ment to be doing it for the update I have to tell you that I need to know luffy's and how to summon the process to the police to help me out of the rings heroes of middle earth and the aircon in gym makes you so cold and you are a little clueless with the face of the rings heroes. Copy pasta
Dialogues are great, MC is great, side characters are not unnatural, the pacing is good.
honestly one of the best interpretations of how Itachi's mind works in an unfamiliar world and how he tries to blend in while trying not to be consumed by his sin.
Muy buen fanfic la verdad al principio no le tenía mucha fé, pero es muy bueno la forma en que estás desarrollando la historia y el capitulo en que quisieron jugarle una mala pasada y verlo como culpable estubo muy aunque hubiera preferido que si se fuera de la sociedad de almas digo después de todo lo que a pasado es como si estuviera repitiendo sus errores otra vez pero esperemos y si tengas alguna buena idea
Good job author. From one fellow author to another, keep it up. This is likely one of the best fics I've read this year and would like to see more👍👍👍
disappointment, that's what I feel, Itachi is acting stupid, firstly he is too insensitive, Itachi is a kind person, he is a complete pacifist, in the Naruto world he had to play the role of a villain, but in this world I don’t see a situation where he can just stand and watch how people die, but most of all I hate how this “shinobi” collects information, or rather, he doesn’t do this, even at the very beginning he could have learned a lot more from his grandfather, but he doesn’t do it, for some reason he fights with the Shinigami, hides, I don’t understand the logic of his actions, in the society of souls everyone knows about the Shinigami, the academy and other information that Itachi is thinking about, why rack your brains if you can go to the academy and find out everything there, even if you don’t want to be a Shinigami, you can simply not graduate from the academy, in general, Itachi is behaving stupidly, and for this character this is not permissible
The novel captures Itachi's character quite well, of course there is some slight additions but that is part of the authors interpretation. The story is slow paced initially but it is there for a good reason and I insist on you trying this novel out. It displays an accurate reflection of other Bleach characters as well and overall the author should be given props for their precision in authentic reflection of their unique personalities. Overall, I highly recommend it.
I love this ff because it does just wing it on Itachi’s personality and sticks to it, i hope you keep going on this novel, we just need this ff to be more exposed to people so i suggest you ad more tags that line up with this novel, like antihero, or killer, or other things
good writing, but the pacing is too slow. It feels like I'm reading repetitive chapters of Itachi's brooding. The power levels also don't add up. It was insulting that even without shikai and not a swordsman himself, he still could stood his ground against centuries old Captains and get away with it. Updates seem regular which is nice.
Read 48 chapters so far so here’s my opinion: 1-Characters: The author captured each character’s personality perfectly even though I think he made Itachi a little bit colder than in Naruto 2-Powers: Itachi is progressing neatly and his powers are entertaining so far(he is becoming stronger not too slow not too fast) 3- Pace: In my opinion the pace is unhumanly slow to the point where it could be a huge problem and if it continues the same we would need at least 500 to reach cannon(The story is set before Aizen becomes a captain) But I hope the story would kick off soon. 4-Fighting scenes: Each fight have been entertaining and not too draged nor too fast, perfect and the author greatly showed Itachi’s analytical side and intelligence in or out of fights Over all 9/10 , the only thing the story needs is a bit faster pace and mote chapters.
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Well to start off I believe you captured Itachi very well his mindset and its not something stupid like anime logic even with the Bleach character are writen well I have high hopes for this fic and ill keep sending PS Also author i believe you can start a Power stone goals for chapters
'Crows x Souls' - my second story focuses on Itachi crossing over to the Soul Society of the Bleach verse after releasing the Edō Tensei during the 4th Great Ninja War.One of the few takeways from this fic is that I want to make it as simple and engaging as I can get it and to that end I'll try not to stray from the initial focus of the story and keep Itachi’s personality as original as possible, even with due change in character development.Thers's romance but I'll probably drag it out until I'm sure it will be great addition to the story.On the subject of keeping Itachi’s character as original as possible, that means most of the Sharingan specialties won't be focused on as Itachi, like every other major Uchiha, had a specific way of using his eyes, and his specialty is very obvious.Give it a try and tell me what you think. I'll probably take this one slow not to burn myself out too quickly.