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Interesting Novel Author, Keep it up and hopw your story grew more Readers[img=recommend][img=update][img=Loving it]
perfecto , a simple grammar, easy to understand,I feel like I was inside the story
That's really a good one. I enjoyed reading it. Can't read to read more. Even i write if you like you can check it out. Do you have a editor as you wrote it very well. Best wishes
He's the real deal, everyone! Every word he writes paints a vivid and descriptive scene, making it incredibly easy to understand and visualize. I wholeheartedly recommend his work.
Its pretty good. Although the story could use a bit more paragraphing and a little less info dumping, especially close to the end of chapter 3, its interesting over all. The Blind orcs did a good job of building up tension, but try describing them a bit more, that'll add an extra layer to the tension.
Nice novel and llooking forward to more updates from the writer. Enjjoy reading about Martin!💕
Its good! This kind of clean writing what I aimed. The character name are easy to remember, their abilities are also noticable. Perfecting your story plot for a year is a good idea, maybe I should also do that. Great job author!! 🥰🥰🥰
I feel like the character development is slow. (My personal thoughts by the way 💜)
Shameless Author, giving myself a good review because why not? ^^This is my first cultivation book, it's very good, as there are a lot of elements you wouldn't expect. ಥ‿ಥDrop your gifts and stones, I want to choked by them. cough.
A must read (⌐■-■)you don't see cultivation books like this everyday ಠ◡ಠ ✨💓
An interesting novel with an easy character name to remember. I recommend this novel to new readers out there.
The scenes of the plot are well-written and catchy. You need to write more updates. You could also reorganize the synopsis of your story. I suggest you use Grammarly and Quillbot to improve the flow of the sentences. Overall, the story is a must-have to add to the library!
I love the pilot chapter, dah! It gets you hooked by the very first few paragraphs... Odd but I love chapter 12 "Proudly a pervert" 😅 With the chapters I have read thus far I am enjoying the story. The story building is good so is the writing style, so far I have queries. Good story...worth my collection
Interesting Novel Author, Keep it up and hopw your story grew more Readers[img=recommend][img=update][img=Loving it]
perfecto , a simple grammar, easy to understand,I feel like I was inside the story
That's really a good one. I enjoyed reading it. Can't read to read more. Even i write if you like you can check it out. Do you have a editor as you wrote it very well. Best wishes
He's the real deal, everyone! Every word he writes paints a vivid and descriptive scene, making it incredibly easy to understand and visualize. I wholeheartedly recommend his work.
Its pretty good. Although the story could use a bit more paragraphing and a little less info dumping, especially close to the end of chapter 3, its interesting over all. The Blind orcs did a good job of building up tension, but try describing them a bit more, that'll add an extra layer to the tension.
Nice novel and llooking forward to more updates from the writer. Enjjoy reading about Martin!💕
Its good! This kind of clean writing what I aimed. The character name are easy to remember, their abilities are also noticable. Perfecting your story plot for a year is a good idea, maybe I should also do that. Great job author!! 🥰🥰🥰
I feel like the character development is slow. (My personal thoughts by the way 💜)
Shameless Author, giving myself a good review because why not? ^^This is my first cultivation book, it's very good, as there are a lot of elements you wouldn't expect. ಥ‿ಥDrop your gifts and stones, I want to choked by them. cough.
A must read (⌐■-■)you don't see cultivation books like this everyday ಠ◡ಠ ✨💓
An interesting novel with an easy character name to remember. I recommend this novel to new readers out there.
The scenes of the plot are well-written and catchy. You need to write more updates. You could also reorganize the synopsis of your story. I suggest you use Grammarly and Quillbot to improve the flow of the sentences. Overall, the story is a must-have to add to the library!
I love the pilot chapter, dah! It gets you hooked by the very first few paragraphs... Odd but I love chapter 12 "Proudly a pervert" 😅 With the chapters I have read thus far I am enjoying the story. The story building is good so is the writing style, so far I have queries. Good story...worth my collection