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the writing is pretty good but the story is a drag there progress then it resets progress the resets again. the main female lead is insanely annoying couldn't keep reading
im probably not gonna read this but props for good synopsis. Best reason for a heroine chasing/harem protag I've ever seen so 👍
A hidden gem. I'm so glad I found this story. I'll keep reading so long as you keep writing The characters are well-written and I love how they interact with each other. Can't wait to see new characters added to the mix.As for world-building, it's still early in the story so we will see how it goes.Looking forward to reading more!
Probably the best novel I've read recently. I won't lie, came here to scratch the junk-food novel urge after seeing the title, but found amazing characters and an intriguing story. Grammar is good and characters actually develop. Highly recommend reading this novel. Keep it up author.
I have to say this is one of the few novels that I've liked the most so far, with the world revolving around our protagonist who is a villain, his manipulaton techniques used to tame the heroines and finally the writing style that shift from time to time, in two words it's a “Unrefined Gem” I hope this novel is completed.
Read about a 100 chapters or so, and its time for the review because this novel deserves more love. Writing quality and release rate? Quite good and stable. World background? Nothing too ground breaking but still manages to garner interest. Character design and story development? Well, if you have ever gotten into the 'villain transmigration slash reincarnation' category before, you'll know that this is the wet dream of any reader that likes said premise. Sure, it's not perfect, even felt a bit drawn out midway, but I can say with confidence that it's worth it. Usually, novels of said category always fall to making the storyline overly uncomfortable, straight up repetitive, just plain wish fulfilment or forgetting heroine characters because they've fulfilled their duty of being a plot tool. Yea, there is certainly a few out there with uniqueness to them that manage to find a delicate balance in all of this, but this, my friends, is peak. I'd normally not give full 5 stars, but this novel having 4.3 for rating is criminal activity that needs to be neutralized.
The only thing i docked points on is the world background, which is not as fleshed out as it probably should be. there are a lot of factors in place that influence decisions, and the mc knows, but we are just along for the ride.otherwise, it is a low fighting story mostly focused on political conflict and the economic environment. the mc is kinda twisted in the LE but building the area in an LN or even LG direction for his own purposes.
It is a good novel. It has good writing quality without much grammatical errors. The only suggestion that I have is regarding world building. The author could have explained more regarding MC, power levels , the kingdom he resides in, his political position, his family . It is also not clear regarding the power level of the MC. Despite reading 60 chapters, I am still not clear whether the MC is a good guy or the bad guy. He is manipulative. Yes. But what is his goal? .....
i'm not good at reviews but i can say that the grammar is pretty good for webnovel the story is r17.99 so that's great as well and i do feel as if the story is written by someone that can think not just writting without thoughts it's a really nice and fun story we have barely started still with the first hero so i'm curious how it will develop from here the only thing that can be worked on is the background of the world and mostly the world itself but you can do this after the first hero is fully tamed when he returns to his next target you can give more background because most people that are then still reading will be interested in the world so i believe it's pretty smart to not instantly lore dump the world
Before I write anything else, I want to just say that this novel is really good. The way the author expresses the character's feelings, the development of the relationships, and the way things turn out are really well done and keeps the reader immersed in the story. In my opinion, the world building is lacking a little bit, but it still is better than some other stories I read.Overall I recommend this novel to anyone who might come across this review.
Here I come after reading 25 chaps as promised... Truthfully I have a mix emotion about this novel...on the other hand I like the the MC characteristic and the idea behind the story...the only reason I didnt give full 5 stars review because the heroine which is now the bodyguard of the MC keeps irritating me and crossed the line many times, I understand that he is trying to tame her but it's taking so many chaps to do so...ofcourse its getting better thats the reason I am giving high review.... This is totally my personal opinion and other people might think otherwise... Nevertheless for me this Novel is good and I recommend people to read it....
This novel is a hidden gem and an masterpiece, the atmosphere, the wording, the charecters, its all mind-blowing. Can't say anything except I need more.
This is simply a masterpiece, I really can't describe how great this novel is. Even if sometimes the conversations feel a bit overbearing, reading it is so enjoyable that you (or me, at least) will simply ignore those moments later. Such a shame that I read it before the "dog taming" ended, unfortunately, I will have to painstakingly wait for new chapters to continue to read this work of art. I'm really looking forward to see what you have planned for the other heroines.
it's is that 0.1inch of adamantly wall from being 18 , don't come here for the action, come for the story.
As the story is just beginning there's not much to say. A hidden gem would be the correct way of wording it as it is a novel of excellent quality (For now) but I'm sure that the author knows what he's doing so that's it😅.Hoping the author continues this way and keeps it up
I give this an 11/10. Beautiful writing style, and a story I literally couldn’t put down and stayed up all night to binge. Please if you’re reading this, finish the first volume before you consider putting it down as it all ties in so perfect. Thank you author for this great read. Excited to see where it goes. 🖤
the writing is pretty good but the story is a drag there progress then it resets progress the resets again. the main female lead is insanely annoying couldn't keep reading
im probably not gonna read this but props for good synopsis. Best reason for a heroine chasing/harem protag I've ever seen so 👍
A hidden gem. I'm so glad I found this story. I'll keep reading so long as you keep writing The characters are well-written and I love how they interact with each other. Can't wait to see new characters added to the mix.As for world-building, it's still early in the story so we will see how it goes.Looking forward to reading more!
Probably the best novel I've read recently. I won't lie, came here to scratch the junk-food novel urge after seeing the title, but found amazing characters and an intriguing story. Grammar is good and characters actually develop. Highly recommend reading this novel. Keep it up author.
I have to say this is one of the few novels that I've liked the most so far, with the world revolving around our protagonist who is a villain, his manipulaton techniques used to tame the heroines and finally the writing style that shift from time to time, in two words it's a “Unrefined Gem” I hope this novel is completed.
Read about a 100 chapters or so, and its time for the review because this novel deserves more love. Writing quality and release rate? Quite good and stable. World background? Nothing too ground breaking but still manages to garner interest. Character design and story development? Well, if you have ever gotten into the 'villain transmigration slash reincarnation' category before, you'll know that this is the wet dream of any reader that likes said premise. Sure, it's not perfect, even felt a bit drawn out midway, but I can say with confidence that it's worth it. Usually, novels of said category always fall to making the storyline overly uncomfortable, straight up repetitive, just plain wish fulfilment or forgetting heroine characters because they've fulfilled their duty of being a plot tool. Yea, there is certainly a few out there with uniqueness to them that manage to find a delicate balance in all of this, but this, my friends, is peak. I'd normally not give full 5 stars, but this novel having 4.3 for rating is criminal activity that needs to be neutralized.
The only thing i docked points on is the world background, which is not as fleshed out as it probably should be. there are a lot of factors in place that influence decisions, and the mc knows, but we are just along for the ride.otherwise, it is a low fighting story mostly focused on political conflict and the economic environment. the mc is kinda twisted in the LE but building the area in an LN or even LG direction for his own purposes.
It is a good novel. It has good writing quality without much grammatical errors. The only suggestion that I have is regarding world building. The author could have explained more regarding MC, power levels , the kingdom he resides in, his political position, his family . It is also not clear regarding the power level of the MC. Despite reading 60 chapters, I am still not clear whether the MC is a good guy or the bad guy. He is manipulative. Yes. But what is his goal? .....
i'm not good at reviews but i can say that the grammar is pretty good for webnovel the story is r17.99 so that's great as well and i do feel as if the story is written by someone that can think not just writting without thoughts it's a really nice and fun story we have barely started still with the first hero so i'm curious how it will develop from here the only thing that can be worked on is the background of the world and mostly the world itself but you can do this after the first hero is fully tamed when he returns to his next target you can give more background because most people that are then still reading will be interested in the world so i believe it's pretty smart to not instantly lore dump the world
Before I write anything else, I want to just say that this novel is really good. The way the author expresses the character's feelings, the development of the relationships, and the way things turn out are really well done and keeps the reader immersed in the story. In my opinion, the world building is lacking a little bit, but it still is better than some other stories I read.Overall I recommend this novel to anyone who might come across this review.
Here I come after reading 25 chaps as promised... Truthfully I have a mix emotion about this novel...on the other hand I like the the MC characteristic and the idea behind the story...the only reason I didnt give full 5 stars review because the heroine which is now the bodyguard of the MC keeps irritating me and crossed the line many times, I understand that he is trying to tame her but it's taking so many chaps to do so...ofcourse its getting better thats the reason I am giving high review.... This is totally my personal opinion and other people might think otherwise... Nevertheless for me this Novel is good and I recommend people to read it....
This novel is a hidden gem and an masterpiece, the atmosphere, the wording, the charecters, its all mind-blowing. Can't say anything except I need more.
This is simply a masterpiece, I really can't describe how great this novel is. Even if sometimes the conversations feel a bit overbearing, reading it is so enjoyable that you (or me, at least) will simply ignore those moments later. Such a shame that I read it before the "dog taming" ended, unfortunately, I will have to painstakingly wait for new chapters to continue to read this work of art. I'm really looking forward to see what you have planned for the other heroines.
it's is that 0.1inch of adamantly wall from being 18 , don't come here for the action, come for the story.
As the story is just beginning there's not much to say. A hidden gem would be the correct way of wording it as it is a novel of excellent quality (For now) but I'm sure that the author knows what he's doing so that's it😅.Hoping the author continues this way and keeps it up
I give this an 11/10. Beautiful writing style, and a story I literally couldn’t put down and stayed up all night to binge. Please if you’re reading this, finish the first volume before you consider putting it down as it all ties in so perfect. Thank you author for this great read. Excited to see where it goes. 🖤