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This book is really impressive! I'm thoroughly enjoying the story so far. Game-based narratives are always so intriguing. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the skills and items featured in the story. I hope to see even more equipment in the future. Overall, the story is excellent![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the story so far, I like how it's different from the usual. Instead of following the player, we get the perspective of an NPC, which is really interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story leads!
The characters are good, the players are despicable, overall I think it's pretty good. As for the stability of updates, idk. Either the author just mass released or they edited a bunch of stuff. Either way. recommended.
The concept of the story is quite original, and the plot is well-explained. The only issue might be that it progresses a bit too quickly, especially in the first three chaoters. Other than that, the story is intriguing and makes you eager to find out what happens next.
Its characters are beautifully flawed, their struggles and sacrifices etching deep into the reader's soul. The world-building is nothing short of enchanting, highly recommended!
Ahahaha! Alright. I'll be very honest. I was taken aback by the cover, expecting a dark tale. Granted, this was more entertaining than I had thought. Only on chapter one due to the overwhelming feeling of wishing to read more. Note: This was review was written with only two chapters released! Don't let us down, author!
The first two chapters seems good, I love it. I will be making more reviews once I see the other chapters author should keep up the good work and update more chapters.
Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path. [img=coins]
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I'm absolutely loving the adventure and the introduction of new characters. I'm filled with excitement about what's about to unfold next! [img=update]
This book is really impressive! I'm thoroughly enjoying the story so far. Game-based narratives are always so intriguing. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the skills and items featured in the story. I hope to see even more equipment in the future. Overall, the story is excellent![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the story so far, I like how it's different from the usual. Instead of following the player, we get the perspective of an NPC, which is really interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story leads!
The characters are good, the players are despicable, overall I think it's pretty good. As for the stability of updates, idk. Either the author just mass released or they edited a bunch of stuff. Either way. recommended.
The concept of the story is quite original, and the plot is well-explained. The only issue might be that it progresses a bit too quickly, especially in the first three chaoters. Other than that, the story is intriguing and makes you eager to find out what happens next.
Its characters are beautifully flawed, their struggles and sacrifices etching deep into the reader's soul. The world-building is nothing short of enchanting, highly recommended!
Ahahaha! Alright. I'll be very honest. I was taken aback by the cover, expecting a dark tale. Granted, this was more entertaining than I had thought. Only on chapter one due to the overwhelming feeling of wishing to read more. Note: This was review was written with only two chapters released! Don't let us down, author!
The first two chapters seems good, I love it. I will be making more reviews once I see the other chapters author should keep up the good work and update more chapters.
Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path. [img=coins]
Like the idea and first two chapers going in the right direction [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm absolutely loving the adventure and the introduction of new characters. I'm filled with excitement about what's about to unfold next! [img=update]