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This has an insane amount of potential. People getting mad that he isn't evil is defeating the purpose of this concept since if you want that, just go read the normal series. Fanfics are supposed to change how the main story flows so having a "neutral" Sukuna is very interesting. Keep updating and I'm sure that this will be great.
even though it's a new fanfic , it's not bad, I am kinda interested in the concept of a morally "good" sukuna . I'm looking forward to more chapters that may soon come . You will now receive my attention.
It's cool, I think you should continue writing this fanfic since it would be really interesting to observe Transmigrator as Sukuna. And also, you grammar is sheet. I'm waiting update😉
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The start was good, but I'd suggest the author to organise the paragraphs and use and make it easier to understand the conversations as well... I'm hoping this story doesn't get dropped as this is the first sukuna fic I've seen as of now that was written recently and not abandoned....
I will give a real opinion later but for now I am writing this review to motivate the author……………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… …………………………………………………
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Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Update updated Update Update Update update
This has an insane amount of potential. People getting mad that he isn't evil is defeating the purpose of this concept since if you want that, just go read the normal series. Fanfics are supposed to change how the main story flows so having a "neutral" Sukuna is very interesting. Keep updating and I'm sure that this will be great.
even though it's a new fanfic , it's not bad, I am kinda interested in the concept of a morally "good" sukuna . I'm looking forward to more chapters that may soon come . You will now receive my attention.
It's cool, I think you should continue writing this fanfic since it would be really interesting to observe Transmigrator as Sukuna. And also, you grammar is sheet. I'm waiting update😉
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The start was good, but I'd suggest the author to organise the paragraphs and use and make it easier to understand the conversations as well... I'm hoping this story doesn't get dropped as this is the first sukuna fic I've seen as of now that was written recently and not abandoned....
I will give a real opinion later but for now I am writing this review to motivate the author……………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… …………………………………………………
You need to make more chapters, only two chapters in and i love it.