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Good lord, this book is so confusing! it's like an adult who has the mentality of a middle schooler wrote this...
whats with the ending? it's not rushed. it feels like the author or the translator wanted to quit.
es una buena historia para pasar el rato me encanta su comedia .teniendo en cuenta que es un mundo de fantasia es interensantisimo .ojala esta no le den un final tan anticlimatico como "pet simulator"
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The only way I could do that was if you wanted me too I could come and pick it out and then I can go pick up it from your place or you could just pick me out of there or you could pick me out and I could just
interesting twist on the trainers abilities mixed in with the training of pet skills
Not bad at all from what I saw! Sure it’s pretty darn far from being number 1, but it was still capable of keeping my attention span when I tried it out. I stopped only because I personally don’t really enjoy manipulative MCs. Particularly when they can also be manipulative towards their allies.
first of all iim eading this just for fast pass and second of all why i give this a five stars is because this is one of the best comedy books i read
It’s a fun read, but so much of the MC’s interaction with the world is just people obsessing over how attractive he is and it’s not fun.
Enjoying so far. Hope to read more. If names could stay the same for the characters, would help with the confusion.
people are selling but they don't know what they are selling . this novel lacks direction . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . seriously it's a SIMULATION SYSTEM STORY , these types of story have summary of many simulation . ( quick , short , direct to the point , trial and error , and much more) , but your simulation story lacks simulation . it was boring and waste of time .1 . character name in this novel are too stupid , MC name is - Vincent wolf , there is a person named dragon town 😂 these are the name of people and funny thing is there are pets in this novel . . . . . .. 2. we are here for system , his simulation , want to see his growth , . tell us about world , how it works , power level ( seriously atleast mention them before using it ), his standing in the world , his situation . and some more simulation . but no... you didn't do that did you?. you make it boring and uninteresting by wasting your first few chapters on useless filler . i mean skipping them won't effect the story. you shouldn't make these filler chapter in start . we don't know about MC , his system , powers , world background , his situation in world .. ... . . .. .. .. . .. you using words like commander level , evolution , lvl 10 , transcendent without any explanation ,
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The premise is good, but the story focuses so much on how handsome the MC is it becomes a slog to read. Many of the attempts of humor fall flat and make the reader think they are reading about an accident at the Special Olympics.
It's pretty good not amazing but good. I don't know why the other reviews are being so dramatic about it. The World is pretty interesting it's like a combination of Pokémon and a modern cultivation world. They battle using beasts they have made contracts with and even have a space in their body's to store beasts instead of using balls, it is pretty light hearted so far.
This novel had me questioning my existence. Why are the novels on this platform keeps on getting worse every week
Author changed his name from Vincent Wolf to Jasper Patton during the 3rd chapter so I quit reading
Good lord, this book is so confusing! it's like an adult who has the mentality of a middle schooler wrote this...
whats with the ending? it's not rushed. it feels like the author or the translator wanted to quit.
es una buena historia para pasar el rato me encanta su comedia .teniendo en cuenta que es un mundo de fantasia es interensantisimo .ojala esta no le den un final tan anticlimatico como "pet simulator"
Spoiler de révélation The only way I could do that was if you wanted me too I could come and pick it out and then I can go pick up it from your place or you could just pick me out of there or you could pick me out and I could just
interesting twist on the trainers abilities mixed in with the training of pet skills
Not bad at all from what I saw! Sure it’s pretty darn far from being number 1, but it was still capable of keeping my attention span when I tried it out. I stopped only because I personally don’t really enjoy manipulative MCs. Particularly when they can also be manipulative towards their allies.
first of all iim eading this just for fast pass and second of all why i give this a five stars is because this is one of the best comedy books i read
It’s a fun read, but so much of the MC’s interaction with the world is just people obsessing over how attractive he is and it’s not fun.
Enjoying so far. Hope to read more. If names could stay the same for the characters, would help with the confusion.
people are selling but they don't know what they are selling . this novel lacks direction . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . seriously it's a SIMULATION SYSTEM STORY , these types of story have summary of many simulation . ( quick , short , direct to the point , trial and error , and much more) , but your simulation story lacks simulation . it was boring and waste of time .1 . character name in this novel are too stupid , MC name is - Vincent wolf , there is a person named dragon town 😂 these are the name of people and funny thing is there are pets in this novel . . . . . .. 2. we are here for system , his simulation , want to see his growth , . tell us about world , how it works , power level ( seriously atleast mention them before using it ), his standing in the world , his situation . and some more simulation . but no... you didn't do that did you?. you make it boring and uninteresting by wasting your first few chapters on useless filler . i mean skipping them won't effect the story. you shouldn't make these filler chapter in start . we don't know about MC , his system , powers , world background , his situation in world .. ... . . .. .. .. . .. you using words like commander level , evolution , lvl 10 , transcendent without any explanation ,
Spoiler de révélation The premise is good, but the story focuses so much on how handsome the MC is it becomes a slog to read. Many of the attempts of humor fall flat and make the reader think they are reading about an accident at the Special Olympics.
It's pretty good not amazing but good. I don't know why the other reviews are being so dramatic about it. The World is pretty interesting it's like a combination of Pokémon and a modern cultivation world. They battle using beasts they have made contracts with and even have a space in their body's to store beasts instead of using balls, it is pretty light hearted so far.
This novel had me questioning my existence. Why are the novels on this platform keeps on getting worse every week
Author changed his name from Vincent Wolf to Jasper Patton during the 3rd chapter so I quit reading
I love this story & want to continue on with it asap !!! :)