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Wow, what an amazing start. Will the MC use the most out of his second chance, or will history repeat itself and he will be defeated once again. I really like the writing in this story. Will keep up with this series. Can't wait for what the MC will do with what he learned.
Very promising for a first chapter! I hope the MC will be able to do the right things in the months before the troubles start to better survive, and to get the sweet taste of revenge！
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Nice idea owning a hotel during the apocalypse but how would the MC develop a hotel into a fortress with only six months?
A new book with a great start. Can't just wait to see that Pan Eun-Gyung die by the hands of the author?
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Not sure where this is going but I hope he gets revenge on his friend and that girl (his girlfriend?) maybe a little stabby stabby will get them on his side. and hopefully he gets somebody he can trust and rely on. This sounds exciting I'm interested in where this will go.
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Just by reading the first chapter I can conclude, it's going to be awesome. The pacing is a bit fast and the chapters are short but it's to be expected. The plot has potential and kind of uncommon hope to see more.
Story has potential, Some things I liked were; - Pacing - Unique story idea at least in my case this the first time I come across smth like this - Character names it didn’t feel flat but still felt special - Tone when narrating Plus not too many grammar mistakes. Suggestions I have for u author is; - Shorten synopsis - Writing was blunt I think being more descriptive, elongating and symbolism will help with that and w smth I like to call dramatizing it - I also feel like there are some scenes that can be cut short and the ones that need to be long will take up that space. For example critical moments/analyzing and things like that Well done author, keep writing [img=update]!
Wow, what an amazing start. Will the MC use the most out of his second chance, or will history repeat itself and he will be defeated once again. I really like the writing in this story. Will keep up with this series. Can't wait for what the MC will do with what he learned.
Very promising for a first chapter! I hope the MC will be able to do the right things in the months before the troubles start to better survive, and to get the sweet taste of revenge！
Spoiler de révélation Nice idea owning a hotel during the apocalypse but how would the MC develop a hotel into a fortress with only six months?
A new book with a great start. Can't just wait to see that Pan Eun-Gyung die by the hands of the author?
Spoiler de révélation Not sure where this is going but I hope he gets revenge on his friend and that girl (his girlfriend?) maybe a little stabby stabby will get them on his side. and hopefully he gets somebody he can trust and rely on. This sounds exciting I'm interested in where this will go.
Spoiler de révélation Just by reading the first chapter I can conclude, it's going to be awesome. The pacing is a bit fast and the chapters are short but it's to be expected. The plot has potential and kind of uncommon hope to see more.
Story has potential, Some things I liked were; - Pacing - Unique story idea at least in my case this the first time I come across smth like this - Character names it didn’t feel flat but still felt special - Tone when narrating Plus not too many grammar mistakes. Suggestions I have for u author is; - Shorten synopsis - Writing was blunt I think being more descriptive, elongating and symbolism will help with that and w smth I like to call dramatizing it - I also feel like there are some scenes that can be cut short and the ones that need to be long will take up that space. For example critical moments/analyzing and things like that Well done author, keep writing [img=update]!