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I absolutely adore stories like this, and the name you've given to the main character is really good. Keep up the fantastic work💙
Author's POV: 9.5Narration: 9.8Description: 8.0Grammer:10(it's easy to comprehend Character background and relatability: 9.8I am not a fan of ML but this book got me.the blurb alone pick my interest and made me want to scream the author name for more. MORE PLEASE!Proceeding to First chapter, it needed correction but the author did a great job.I hope the author improve in his lapses. Author you deserve a huge praise for writting this masterpiece please update frequently 😍🥰🥰
I cannot believe that I am falling with a character. I love you Seth! Hehe, I am so much engrossed in this story that I cannot leave it for a second. I am so obessed...More, please
Wow. The first chapter was so captivating. The story premise is pretty nice and of course. This story is very much nice. I can't wait to see more, keep writing author, you have my support. 🥰🥰🥰
Nice story. I'm intrigued by the name and the synopsis. I wonder what inspired you to write this but whatever it is, it is good. Hoping it comes out well.
I like seth already ❤. And can also understand his curiosity to explore the outside world more. Waiting for more chapters Author. Keep writing and I will support you. 👍
The contrast between Seth's ability to see the beginning of his life in a world dominated by evil is a unique concept. The struggle between Good and Evil, with Seth being chosen as a counterforce, adds depth to the storyline. The challenges and obstacles he faces, along with the idea of reviving the universe and restoring Good, create a sense of epic adventure. Overall, it seems like a captivating plot with a lot of potential for exploration and character development, It has a good start,so keep it up(^-^)/( update it frequently)
I have not read much just the synopsis and chapter one, it was captivity, Keep it, I enjoyed it a lot.
I absolutely adore stories like this, and the name you've given to the main character is really good. Keep up the fantastic work💙
Author's POV: 9.5Narration: 9.8Description: 8.0Grammer:10(it's easy to comprehend Character background and relatability: 9.8I am not a fan of ML but this book got me.the blurb alone pick my interest and made me want to scream the author name for more. MORE PLEASE!Proceeding to First chapter, it needed correction but the author did a great job.I hope the author improve in his lapses. Author you deserve a huge praise for writting this masterpiece please update frequently 😍🥰🥰
I cannot believe that I am falling with a character. I love you Seth! Hehe, I am so much engrossed in this story that I cannot leave it for a second. I am so obessed...More, please
Wow. The first chapter was so captivating. The story premise is pretty nice and of course. This story is very much nice. I can't wait to see more, keep writing author, you have my support. 🥰🥰🥰
Nice story. I'm intrigued by the name and the synopsis. I wonder what inspired you to write this but whatever it is, it is good. Hoping it comes out well.
I like seth already ❤. And can also understand his curiosity to explore the outside world more. Waiting for more chapters Author. Keep writing and I will support you. 👍
The contrast between Seth's ability to see the beginning of his life in a world dominated by evil is a unique concept. The struggle between Good and Evil, with Seth being chosen as a counterforce, adds depth to the storyline. The challenges and obstacles he faces, along with the idea of reviving the universe and restoring Good, create a sense of epic adventure. Overall, it seems like a captivating plot with a lot of potential for exploration and character development, It has a good start,so keep it up(^-^)/( update it frequently)
I have not read much just the synopsis and chapter one, it was captivity, Keep it, I enjoyed it a lot.