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A thrilling dive into Atlantis with rich world-building and an epic plot. While the characters could be more nuanced, the story’s excitement makes it a great read for myth and adventure fans!
bro i like your novel but you should at least upload chapter regularly like your other novel please
To many unknown in the story ,mc mentality is kinda unstable. reading this story make me nauseous. too many mystery with no answers.please improve mc mentality and there is no revenge scenes even if he is betrayed by all who know him and their is a f**king system who try to intervene in any of the mc action. Hey author the system is for who the mc or main cast.all it does was to making mc life shitty and saving main cast life and mc is questioning his existence in every chapter.he doesn't have a clear goal.he change the plot by saving villainess but he save the heroine for plot.he is doing unnecessary things all time and there is mysterious character with their cryptic words.one or two cryptic words will be ok but whole story fill with cryptic words
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Author-san just tell me one thing . Is his mother pure evil ? Is he gonna be betrayed again by whom he thinks as his closest ? If so I don't think i have the heart to continue anymore . My heart's not a masochist .
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Hallo author, I also like this novel 🤩 I want request you In future plz don't develop relationships between angelica and Eden Novel is good and in next plz explain Story of his mother's background
Nooooooooooo there was too much of a spoiler at the beginning AUTHOR!!!! In fact, you hinted that closer to the end it would happen that, due to the proximity of space and time, he would return to the girl Nila; this was even a hint at the moment of his death because someone called her at the end of the chapter! It is too obvious that it was our main character and not someone else. There was also a hint from the system that the girl was not crazy or grieving, but lived in honor of him. So I think that in the end the main character and the Nila girl will meet. But I think the main character will not live with her but will return back to the game world. Or will he be reincarnated in the game world after Neil’s death? I don’t know, but I can roughly imagine the ending, purely my reasoning. Author, if this is so, please answer, am I right? Just wondering.
This is very good! everything is great about this book except the Update Stability... please don't drop this novel!
Really good story though I am concerned it may have been dropped. Can the author or someone else confirm if it has or not? :) :) :) :) :)
My review after reading till ch 150. Man i am in love with the story. The characters are lovable, the twist and turns in the plot makes me feel like the plot is freaking lasagna. Anyway please keep updating chaps regularly m in love with this story. No that's not right m borderline addicted. I wont be satisfied till i see mc getting together with all the heroines. so please dont give up on the story midway. Goodluck and Zaria is the cutest i wanna see more of her actions. And i hope there are more cuter kids in the future. Spoiler content from here: M really loving grace and sofias characters please make their arc with the mc very romantic i would love to see them happy. But i think theres just too much hate on anna. I hope u haven't planned a bad end for her plz dont do that ok. my poor heart wont be able to take it.
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Honestly when i first started reading this book I really looked forward to how the story would turnout, but now I’m starting to get annoyed by the childishness of the mc. He is still hung up on the princess and apparently he has to consider the emotions of a dead guy(soul he possessed) and honestly he should just ignore her. He was literally accused of trying to assault her and they are still around each other. I can forgive most of this but honestly the biggest annoyance right now is Aeloria. She honestly shouldn’t be in this story in my opinion. She talks like a promiscuous teenager and it got old after one chapter of the mc talking to her. The mc and aeloria act like they want to maintain some part of the original story but they have already changed the story significantly. Imo aeloria needs to go.
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You know that random thing you do when you’re bored where you go and check the fridge for no reason hoping there’s something new in there even though you checked the fridge mere hours before? That’s what I do with this novel right here. It’s like crack to me and I keep coming back for more. It’s a great read. Author does a good job so far.
loving this novel. usually i don't spend coins but this novel was worth the money. I love how i can connect with the characters :) must read
In for 158 chapters and here is what I have so far - Everything seems like a forced mystery. He knows there is another reincarnator but doesn’t ask her anything about it, he doesn’t ask his mom or Sarah anything, no questions for his father, the system won’t answer any useful questions - system is basically gone after first arc not that it was much of a use before except to add to the mystery - he’s supposed to hate the princess but hey now he’s buying her some dresses and having a nice sit down at the cafe with her - the 2 year gap with no mention of time spent with the Phoenix sisters….also just let the one sister he doesn’t really like and the other sister hates just force her way into the journey without so much as a reply To me it feels like the author wants to make the MC seem like he doesn’t really care about what’s going on around him, but he keeps making sure the MC gets involved with everything around him. Keep adding intrigue but then do literally nothing to figure it out. I wanted to keep reading, but with with the way the story is crawling forward it just isn’t worth the money man.
Spoiler de révélation Posting a new review after fully catching up I gotta say I’m completely hooked this novel is great and I can’t wait for more chaps.
Good Novel, Hopefully the author keeps up the good work and we get to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just finished about a 100 chapters , so for me it was a good read , it would first be great if author uploads more chapters daily , overall its a good book with great potential
I love this novel so much but there isn't enough chapters 😭 only if there was 2 daily updates😭
i need more this is very addicting ,the story so far is very good and the characters are very likeable, the only downside is that it's update are slow hope so the author did not drop this novel
I wanted to give this a 4.3 or even 4.4 but after the time skip it felt like we had missed so much more than we should have from the story. I hope AN would incorporate it in between but time skips for training are fine but gaining new powers that you got from the girls you have conquered feels like we missed a lot, because if i had to choose btw a arc where we get to know about his adventure and what happen in 2 years his fights with different kind of monsters and people, than the teenager drama and bickering with kids, I would choose the 2 year one and slice of life after( just my opinion) this is just me nitpicking stuff that I found annoying. But overall the story is very interesting with time-space availability. I hope the author updates it more regularly because it has a good plot and a storyline 👏.
Author I finished the free chapters and the story was great, but I have a very important question before I decide whether or not I should continue reading it. my question is will he have his revenge against those who wronged him?? even his father and the queen, king ,princess... I want them to feel despair.please answer as soon as possible so I can make a decision.
I really am hooked to the story and waiting angelina's part of story and I like her so looking forward for how it goes. Personally I want Eden and her together, yeah thats's it from me. 😊😊😊😊😊😊
Overall, i think the story is good with the world building as well as keeping the MC interesting with a balance of character flaws and power levels between the characters he meets. That being said, i feel as though there are too many characters to keep track of and remember. Im at the school arc, and it feels like im being dumped with 10 people that i have to follow their relationship with the MC just as i was getting familiar with his previous relationships prior to the time skip. i feel that instead of making a new character, you could get the same effect with some random mob whose name the MC doesn't feel worth his brain power to remember.
Hello there! I am the author of this book, and it is my first novel, so please forgive my mistakes . If you notice any, please notify me so that I may correct them as quickly as possible.With that done, let's talk about our MC:1. He will be overpowered, but only at the same level. Anyone with a higher tier than him can defeat him. He analyzes before acting, and he will not put himself in danger if he does not know how to get out of it.2. For the first few arcs, he will behave as any other human would after living years in a post-apocalyptic world. He will be cold and calculate whose vision of good and bad is blurred out.3. If you have any queries concerning the harem, please ask them and I will respond. and I'll do my best to make the harem as reasonable and logical as possible. (You know, the one where one heroine tries to kill another in order to have the MC all to herself.)I welcome any criticism, so please express your thoughts, and I will take them into account in order to make my story worth your time.
A thrilling dive into Atlantis with rich world-building and an epic plot. While the characters could be more nuanced, the story’s excitement makes it a great read for myth and adventure fans!
bro i like your novel but you should at least upload chapter regularly like your other novel please
To many unknown in the story ,mc mentality is kinda unstable. reading this story make me nauseous. too many mystery with no answers.please improve mc mentality and there is no revenge scenes even if he is betrayed by all who know him and their is a f**king system who try to intervene in any of the mc action. Hey author the system is for who the mc or main cast.all it does was to making mc life shitty and saving main cast life and mc is questioning his existence in every chapter.he doesn't have a clear goal.he change the plot by saving villainess but he save the heroine for plot.he is doing unnecessary things all time and there is mysterious character with their cryptic words.one or two cryptic words will be ok but whole story fill with cryptic words
Spoiler de révélation Author-san just tell me one thing . Is his mother pure evil ? Is he gonna be betrayed again by whom he thinks as his closest ? If so I don't think i have the heart to continue anymore . My heart's not a masochist .
Spoiler de révélation Hallo author, I also like this novel 🤩 I want request you In future plz don't develop relationships between angelica and Eden Novel is good and in next plz explain Story of his mother's background
Nooooooooooo there was too much of a spoiler at the beginning AUTHOR!!!! In fact, you hinted that closer to the end it would happen that, due to the proximity of space and time, he would return to the girl Nila; this was even a hint at the moment of his death because someone called her at the end of the chapter! It is too obvious that it was our main character and not someone else. There was also a hint from the system that the girl was not crazy or grieving, but lived in honor of him. So I think that in the end the main character and the Nila girl will meet. But I think the main character will not live with her but will return back to the game world. Or will he be reincarnated in the game world after Neil’s death? I don’t know, but I can roughly imagine the ending, purely my reasoning. Author, if this is so, please answer, am I right? Just wondering.
This is very good! everything is great about this book except the Update Stability... please don't drop this novel!
Really good story though I am concerned it may have been dropped. Can the author or someone else confirm if it has or not? :) :) :) :) :)
My review after reading till ch 150. Man i am in love with the story. The characters are lovable, the twist and turns in the plot makes me feel like the plot is freaking lasagna. Anyway please keep updating chaps regularly m in love with this story. No that's not right m borderline addicted. I wont be satisfied till i see mc getting together with all the heroines. so please dont give up on the story midway. Goodluck and Zaria is the cutest i wanna see more of her actions. And i hope there are more cuter kids in the future. Spoiler content from here: M really loving grace and sofias characters please make their arc with the mc very romantic i would love to see them happy. But i think theres just too much hate on anna. I hope u haven't planned a bad end for her plz dont do that ok. my poor heart wont be able to take it.
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Honestly when i first started reading this book I really looked forward to how the story would turnout, but now I’m starting to get annoyed by the childishness of the mc. He is still hung up on the princess and apparently he has to consider the emotions of a dead guy(soul he possessed) and honestly he should just ignore her. He was literally accused of trying to assault her and they are still around each other. I can forgive most of this but honestly the biggest annoyance right now is Aeloria. She honestly shouldn’t be in this story in my opinion. She talks like a promiscuous teenager and it got old after one chapter of the mc talking to her. The mc and aeloria act like they want to maintain some part of the original story but they have already changed the story significantly. Imo aeloria needs to go.
Spoiler de révélation You know that random thing you do when you’re bored where you go and check the fridge for no reason hoping there’s something new in there even though you checked the fridge mere hours before? That’s what I do with this novel right here. It’s like crack to me and I keep coming back for more. It’s a great read. Author does a good job so far.
loving this novel. usually i don't spend coins but this novel was worth the money. I love how i can connect with the characters :) must read
In for 158 chapters and here is what I have so far - Everything seems like a forced mystery. He knows there is another reincarnator but doesn’t ask her anything about it, he doesn’t ask his mom or Sarah anything, no questions for his father, the system won’t answer any useful questions - system is basically gone after first arc not that it was much of a use before except to add to the mystery - he’s supposed to hate the princess but hey now he’s buying her some dresses and having a nice sit down at the cafe with her - the 2 year gap with no mention of time spent with the Phoenix sisters….also just let the one sister he doesn’t really like and the other sister hates just force her way into the journey without so much as a reply To me it feels like the author wants to make the MC seem like he doesn’t really care about what’s going on around him, but he keeps making sure the MC gets involved with everything around him. Keep adding intrigue but then do literally nothing to figure it out. I wanted to keep reading, but with with the way the story is crawling forward it just isn’t worth the money man.
Spoiler de révélation Posting a new review after fully catching up I gotta say I’m completely hooked this novel is great and I can’t wait for more chaps.
Good Novel, Hopefully the author keeps up the good work and we get to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just finished about a 100 chapters , so for me it was a good read , it would first be great if author uploads more chapters daily , overall its a good book with great potential
I love this novel so much but there isn't enough chapters 😭 only if there was 2 daily updates😭
i need more this is very addicting ,the story so far is very good and the characters are very likeable, the only downside is that it's update are slow hope so the author did not drop this novel
I wanted to give this a 4.3 or even 4.4 but after the time skip it felt like we had missed so much more than we should have from the story. I hope AN would incorporate it in between but time skips for training are fine but gaining new powers that you got from the girls you have conquered feels like we missed a lot, because if i had to choose btw a arc where we get to know about his adventure and what happen in 2 years his fights with different kind of monsters and people, than the teenager drama and bickering with kids, I would choose the 2 year one and slice of life after( just my opinion) this is just me nitpicking stuff that I found annoying. But overall the story is very interesting with time-space availability. I hope the author updates it more regularly because it has a good plot and a storyline 👏.
Author I finished the free chapters and the story was great, but I have a very important question before I decide whether or not I should continue reading it. my question is will he have his revenge against those who wronged him?? even his father and the queen, king ,princess... I want them to feel despair.please answer as soon as possible so I can make a decision.
I really am hooked to the story and waiting angelina's part of story and I like her so looking forward for how it goes. Personally I want Eden and her together, yeah thats's it from me. 😊😊😊😊😊😊
Overall, i think the story is good with the world building as well as keeping the MC interesting with a balance of character flaws and power levels between the characters he meets. That being said, i feel as though there are too many characters to keep track of and remember. Im at the school arc, and it feels like im being dumped with 10 people that i have to follow their relationship with the MC just as i was getting familiar with his previous relationships prior to the time skip. i feel that instead of making a new character, you could get the same effect with some random mob whose name the MC doesn't feel worth his brain power to remember.
Hello there! I am the author of this book, and it is my first novel, so please forgive my mistakes . If you notice any, please notify me so that I may correct them as quickly as possible.With that done, let's talk about our MC:1. He will be overpowered, but only at the same level. Anyone with a higher tier than him can defeat him. He analyzes before acting, and he will not put himself in danger if he does not know how to get out of it.2. For the first few arcs, he will behave as any other human would after living years in a post-apocalyptic world. He will be cold and calculate whose vision of good and bad is blurred out.3. If you have any queries concerning the harem, please ask them and I will respond. and I'll do my best to make the harem as reasonable and logical as possible. (You know, the one where one heroine tries to kill another in order to have the MC all to herself.)I welcome any criticism, so please express your thoughts, and I will take them into account in order to make my story worth your time.